Still Looking to Write Your Ideas
Added 2024-04-21 22:02:52 +0000 UTCHello,
I am still soliciting story ideas for BOTH “Fat Trimmings: Exclusive Cuts” and “Fat Trimmings” Volume 20. Reminder: The theme for this volume of Exclusive Cuts is role reversals.
Pitch away!
Comments
I mean, how could I not do this one when you’ve given me such a strong outline. Plus this will include role reversal minus the typical malice which I think will make for a nice inclusion.
BS Writer
2024-04-22 18:46:30 +0000 UTCIm a big fan of the idea of a friend group made up of 4 girls and the changing dynamic when one of the friends, who has always been traditionally hot, organically gets really fat while settling into post college life. All while the token fat friend in the group begins to drop weight due to an inverse lifestyle change following going from school life to her carear life. Being a shorter story I feel like the pacing of a role reversal story should be carried by time jumps of 6-12 months using the summer and holidays as points when the friend groups have time to finally get back together to highlight changes in there bodies/lifestyles and the dynamic changes and reactions that come with encouraging the healthy traits the slimming friend has acquired and the light treading the friends have to do around their porked up former hot friend. Comparisons being articulated through the other friends POV and glimpses into their day to day that lead to their current state as fatty-to-be or hot-friend-in-the-making. Major timeline points to highlight as scenes would be 1. The before- when the hot friend show signs of slipping on diet but staying active and the fat friend being self-reflective/fed up with being in the shape she’s in. 2. Months down the line settling into new habits and the beginning of thin friend starting to put on significant weight while fat friend is inversely adopting healthier lifestyle. Other friends begin to make note and joke about ironic role reversal. 3. Former hot girl and Former fat girl are now either not far off in the weight department but former hot girl is debatably less in shape now as the Former fat girl has been active. Friends have both girls best interests in mind but dont press. 4. Former hot girl is now undeniably heavier than former fat girl and has to get used to new dynamic -humiliation/exposing new body in front of friends. 5. Former fit girl is as fat if not more fat than former fat girl/doesnt carry weight well. Embarrassed how she let it happen and jealous of former fat girl for now losing weight and looking traditionally hot.
Oshima
2024-04-22 17:34:56 +0000 UTCVolume 20 two female police officers one is cynical veteran training officer the other a young wide-eyed rookie save a block of restaurants from a gang that's been pressuring them. As a thank you the restaurants constantly bombard the women with food. This makes the veteran out of shape and lazy. The food and the praise makes The Rookie on the other hand grow a giant behind and an ego to match becoming a strange version of a corrupt cop doing anything for a good meal.
Searcher
2024-04-22 03:19:52 +0000 UTC
