Book 6 Early Access: Chapter 22
Added 2025-01-15 16:13:14 +0000 UTCGot a meaty chapter to start off the new year!
The ronin and ninja get some time together, dialogue is indeed spoken, and there's even a mini-investigation sequence (when you're partnering with Tosh, what else do you expect?). I like the Westlands a lot: it's a new area both for me the writer, you the reader, and MC our narrator. MC really feels like an outsider, and that's going to be a reoccurring theme for this arc.
My favorite part of this chapter is the introduction of a new character. For me, it doesn't take much to endear a character towards me: they just have to talk funny. Seriously though, having a unique voice and distinct personality really makes it easy and enjoyable to write dialogue. The inspiration comes quicker than I can type, because they're yammering away inside my head beforehand.
Speaking of yammering, I think I've said enough. Hope you enjoy the new chapter!
Book 6 Early Access: Chapter 22
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Comments
Hey Saeun, thanks for the find! I managed to mix up the gender and attractedTo variables (a mistake I don't usually make). I'll make sure to get it updated, and I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Devon Connell
2025-01-18 12:48:03 +0000 UTCHey, I just wanted to let you know, that there is a mistake with how Ronin is addressed. I play as a straight woman so she's stuck in Masashi's body, but Toshio and sheriff adres her as Lady Hashimoto. Ronin even said that Lady Hashimoto is her father :p . On another topic, I really enjoyed this chapter! It was nice to have a glimpse in Toshio's past. I was surprised that he seems to despise his people and his former life, wish we'd know more! And I really hope Ronin can be back in to her own body soon. Hopefully next chapter.
Saeun
2025-01-17 19:22:11 +0000 UTC
