Stripper With a System
Added 2025-12-19 04:07:50 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas a bit early!
So, this is actually been done for a couple of days. Originally, I was going to hold off and release it around Christmas since, you know, it's a Holiday Extra. Then, of course, I realized that...Displaced Hero already releases on the 22nd every month, and I'll probably not be doing much posting on the 24th or 25th because of family time. Net result, I said 'heck with it,' and decided to give you all your Christmas present a bit early ;-).
Something which made double sense, I think, given that January's Poll story poll is still ongoing, and this story is a decently strong contender. No, it isn't outright visibly in the lead, but it's in shouting distance...and vote weighing means that the visible results aren't any sort of guarantee of victory. So, who knows, if you all end up wanting MOAR of this post-haste, it could tip the scales.
Now a few quick notes. First, you guys got lucky that early days of fics are usually the easiest to write, as this update is a full 14,400 words. Essentially a full-sized update. Second, there is another lemon in this update. I'm mentioning that specifically because, for good or ill, you shouldn't expect that to be the case every time. This isn't Final Error, which was super lemon-heavy, having that zest in every update. In this case, it just happens that Rylia's early buildup sort of...lends itself to that direction. What with the whole Sex Toy Empire thing. Also, you guys and gals specifically voted in the girl who I mentioned was going to be the most interested. So I kinda figured you were hoping for it. Just don't expect them to come so quickly in the future :-p.
Art...it's all AI works, I'm afraid. I went looking for some versions of Momo that looked appropriately older, to match the version Rylia summons ;-).
As usual, the new chapters are attached here in various formats, and the new Master Files, containing the entire story, will be up in the Pinned Post shortly. I'll also be doing some Author's Notes for the chapters after I get that done. You'll be able to find them in the comments, also as usual, though give it a bit so I can actually write them :-p. Enjoy more Stripper With a System, everyone!
Comments
Momo ALWAYS looks good… Edit 1: …it would have been “an” interesting to see who… …it would have been interesting to see who… Edit 2: …to tell “were” good sense… …to tell “where” good sense… Edit 3: …to make “an” known weapon… …to make “a” known weapon… Edit 4: …partially, a “comping” mechanism… …partially, a “coping” mechanism… Edit 5: …her Quirk making guns such an obvious… …her Quirk making guns “was” such an obvious…
The Foreign Traveler
2026-01-01 07:21:32 +0000 UTCHmmm, I can think of several like Tayna (Saga of Evil), Artoria and Esdeath. But they are from magical settings. I think one of the Street Fighter or KoF girls had a background as a military company leader (Leona?)? There are probably several from Star Wars or Star Trek if I thought on it hard enough. Ohhh, Sarah Kerrigan would certainly fit, if you got the right version of her.
Novus Peregrine
2025-12-24 21:42:15 +0000 UTCFiguring out fictional Female military leaders that would fit in this story is rough. The end of chapter 7 got me thinking about it and there's a distressing lack of them in media. Even animated media. Honor Harrington. Samantha Carter from Stargate. Maybe one of the ship captains from the Gundam series? It's rough.
White Neko Knight
2025-12-24 20:55:53 +0000 UTCLove this! I really want to see the aftermath of that last scene. Can’t wait for more!
WhatAFungi
2025-12-22 19:36:54 +0000 UTCThanks for the typo corrections :-). I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Novus Peregrine
2025-12-20 20:03:01 +0000 UTCThank you for the early Christmas gift! Wonderful to see Momo be awesome, no matter what setting. A few suggestions/corrections: "A six-hundred-year-plus old Asari colony" -> "A six-hundred-plus-year-old Asari Colony" flows better (at least to me), or maybe just go numeric: "A 600+ year-old Asari Colony" "how beat red Momo was" should be "beet red" "able to tell were good sense" should be "where" "a comping mechanism" I'm assuming this should be "coping"
twilightwanderer
2025-12-19 21:12:39 +0000 UTCProbably not anytime soon on the adult parts of the Stream :-p. Even if the Asari wouldn't think it odd, Momo would still have a mental disconnect between 'Professional CEO' and 'Oh God, they've all seen me cum on screen.'
Novus Peregrine
2025-12-19 21:04:03 +0000 UTCI have to admit I just about facepalmed when I realized that was going to be the label, given what I said about lemons :-p.
Novus Peregrine
2025-12-19 21:02:27 +0000 UTCSo we have an extrovert Momo’s momos to play with? Nice. How long until she helps in the stream?
Christian E. Y.
2025-12-19 15:11:05 +0000 UTCChapters 6-9? Nice.
Artemis
2025-12-19 14:56:38 +0000 UTCThanks :-). I'm honestly best with characters and settings/worldbuilding...and worst with combat. Every writer tends to have things that come easy and things that they struggle with. Characters just happen to be one of the former for me :-p. Always nice to hear someone appreciate it though ;-).
Novus Peregrine
2025-12-19 06:56:18 +0000 UTCHmm, I'm guessing you said that because of the hair? Momo has that spiky ponytail as her canon hairstyle, though...
Novus Peregrine
2025-12-19 06:54:41 +0000 UTCRereading the first posted chapter atm, but I have to post this thought: you do a fantastic job of writing different main characters with different personalities and quirks ya know? Just got done rereading Truck so the differences stand out a bit more. Got thru 6-9 but gotta make this fast as I have work OT in 15 I need to leave for, I liked how useful Momo is in multiple ways as a partner and hopefully lover. Truly an excellent use of karma points. Hoping MC looks into life extension tech to keep her Momo around for much less nger then a normal human lifespan. Also amused at the constant if well earned dread of interacting with ANYTHING from 40k😅
Orchamus
2025-12-19 05:39:13 +0000 UTCLooks like what you'd get if Momo and Shikamaru had a kid. xD Thanks for the update. :)
Ototsu_Yume
2025-12-19 04:58:57 +0000 UTCChapter 6: A/N 1: Hopefully I didn't get too much into the weeds on the summoning. Future summons won't go into detail, but with this first one some baseline bits needed to be established. A/N 2: For those unaware, who was summoned was selected by poll. Rylia currently needs pretty much everything, so it was a bit of a case of 'no bad choices' so long as she went with someone competent in their field.
Novus Peregrine
2025-12-19 04:15:32 +0000 UTCThis comment is for author's notes! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!
Novus Peregrine
2025-12-19 04:13:26 +0000 UTC
