Notification of changes to Irwin's Journey chapter 62!
Added 2023-02-18 11:46:06 +0000 UTCHey guys! So, after reading through some of your comments on chapter 62, and agreeing with them, I've gone and redone... well, most of the chapter.
For those who aren't interested in re-reading (though I would really suggest you do) the short of it is that Irwin has also re-forged his Coperion Body. Also, instead of Ambraz helping him with becoming a full-hand, he has mostly done this himself.
Now, due to the chapter becoming the size of two, I had to cut it at another part meaning that a section of the bottom part will now be the top part of the next chapter!
I'd like to thank all of you who gave feedback! I never mentioned this in a notify, but as my patrons you all have a say in the direction of my stories. This doesn't mean I'll always agree, or will act as fast as this time, but I'll at a minimum think hard on what you guys give me as feedback and input!
- John
Comments
Haha, that made me grin. I do know how you feel, I'm the guy that moves mugs on a table if they are out of line. >Shrug< What did you think of the way the full-hand 'ceremony' was changed?
Carrarn
2023-02-18 17:26:35 +0000 UTCThanks, this feels better somehow. But then I'm the kind of guy who goes through the house turning lights on and off until all the light switches are in the same position, and in games I never distribute my stats to be uneven. I'm sorry Irwin had to suffer to scratch my itch. But be comforted Irwin, thanks to your sacrifice the asymmetric demons have one less entry point to create a portal :)
Game Devil
2023-02-18 17:10:41 +0000 UTC
