French Maid Issue 4 Revisions (only revised pages)
Added 2023-08-29 18:16:35 +0000 UTCSince Marcel and Aurora are supposed to be speaking natural idiomatic french, I usually try to have a few native french speakers review the issue. There's no plot or art changes here. The biggest change is Aurora's nickname for Aaron, which has changed from "mignonne" to "belle." I did like mignonne but belle apparently is a much more natural pet name. (They both mean basically the same thing, mignonne is like "cutie" and ma belle is "my beautiful" -- in english 'mignonne' would be the 'cuter' and more friendly nickname, but "mignonne" lacks the same sort of connotation as "cutie" has in English, hence the change).
The other change is mostly working on making Aurora address Aaron more consistently with "tu" verb forms rather than the more formal/less friendly "vous."
Special thanks to tlorem on DeviantArt for help with these revisions!
