Reviews, next steps, new things -
Added 2023-12-10 17:31:27 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
Greetings 48 hours post the launch of episode 2.0. I hope many of you enjoyed what we've crafted and introduced into the game, gauging from the huge number of supporters who joined us on Patreon - it's truly heartening and I am immensely grateful for your trust and support. It holds significant value for me. Conversely, there have been numerous negative or ambivalent opinions. I'm sharing some of them below as I wish to discuss certain points with you (naturally, there were a handful of positive ones, though regrettably somewhat overshadowed). Hence:
Certainly not the best approach overall, but I take every opinion to heart. Yesterday, I spent a long time pondering whether we are doing something wrong, heading in the wrong direction, or if we should change or add something, etc. Personally, I came to a few conclusions.
- The first one is the fact that the game is based on a specific genre and additionally contains sandbox elements - many people are against this type of game and vehemently oppose such productions. Games with elements of blackmail and corruption also have many opponents (not to mention NTR), so no matter what we do, we cannot create a game for everyone and for every taste/kink. Initially, I thought that people who don't like it simply overlook this production - after all, if someone doesn't like alternative rock, they just don't listen to it, right? - nothing could be further from the truth. It turns out that people will deliberately come just to criticize it, and the sooner I realize that, the less I will worry about it.
- Another thing I realized and decided to put into action is taking a step back (a small one) and adding a few things to the game. Initially, I was inclined towards creating an adult game where Riley simply succumbs to corruption whether we want it or not. However, I see that many people (and here we're not strictly talking about haters) would also like to have a greater influence on Riley's fate. I have come to the conclusion that we can dedicate some extra time and effort to make this possible. If Riley doesn't believe in the dean's blackmail? Let them do something about it and face the consequences. As I mentioned earlier, from now on, in future scenes, there will be a greater impact on the storyline, but we'll also try to improve earlier ones so that the player has more influence on Riley's decisions.
I would like you to also write your conclusions in the comments - not scenes you would like to see in the future or in what role to place Riley, but rather what you really liked in the game and things that didn't suit your taste and should be improved. What surprised you positively and what made you grimace on face. As I mentioned, I was concerned about these reviews yesterday, but many of them are disconnected from reality, and the ones I should pay attention to are here, on Patreon. So, if you could take a moment and write what would be nice to add to the game, change, or enable.
... and by the way, add the game to your Steam wishlist if you haven't already done so :)
Comments
great game but why the hell does the story have to be so difficult to make it trigger and progress mikes lucky day will not trigger done everything possible but just wont do anything to be fair i think innocence or money is better made and better put together never had an issue on that where the story wont trigger and progress
Scott Wright
2024-01-14 10:32:22 +0000 UTCTo my understanding you plan to develop the story around corruption. I had to deal with a lot of cases in real life and my personal conclusion is that nearly everyone will become corrupted given the circumstances give them only the option to go in this direction and not another. As a honest reader you would probably say at the end "I understand your story" or "Your story felt real to me" or if you are very honest you may even say "I would have reacted the same way". What makes such stories interesting to me is the way the corrupted person justifies what is happening to themself. Often corruption starts small and then develop slowly into something bigger and the person will not even get into a big conflict with their personal ethics, because the steps are so small and taking the next one is not "big deal". I really enjoyed the story so far in all aspects. I never felt disturbed in a way that I thought "This would never happen". I sometimes felt sorry with the main character, but this is part of a corruption path. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Regarding the messages of people who do not like the story I would suggest to either go the way you proposed or manage expectations better by telling people even more explicit what to expect on the platforms the game is distributed.
Rolgar
2024-01-01 09:52:56 +0000 UTCThat Discussion post on "F-95" was the reason I found this game. Love the art of this game, and I'm here till the wheels fall off.
Horus Xero
2023-12-30 19:54:58 +0000 UTCReally like the game. Developing Riley's latent sexual appetite is leitmotif that keeps turning the page. Keep the main thing the main thing. It's a big part of her nature and need that she is discovering. Her coming to accept it with the help of corrupt actors and innocent actors is brilliant.
Johan
2023-12-30 13:27:12 +0000 UTCThank you so much for this game. I haven't been this excited about 18+ games in a long time. I hope the game will not be abandoned and will evolve. I am one of those who was attracted to the NTR genre, it is reflected here in a very interesting way, I want to continue the story. Very happy with the variation of clothes, they are constantly changing, on Riley looks extremely hot. If there will be development in this direction as well, I am ready to idolize the author. I would like to choose outfits for Riley more often. Often even more like not animated scenes, but static, excellent angle combined with the graphic component. The story starts out intriguing but it's a shame it's cut short so quickly, however, it's only a matter of time. Overall, it is interesting and not boring. Would like a variant of avoiding the lesbian theme in the future. It would be great if the location was expanded and Riley's story didn't dwell on a few characters. I can't think of any situations that would cause negativity. The developer has a great vision for the game, I hope it continues like this. I'll try to support as much as I can. Such a project should not be launched and in general I wish the team to reach a high level and not to stop at only one project. P.S. Sorry for my English, I wrote with the help of a translator.
Миша Медведь
2023-12-14 17:01:52 +0000 UTCI like the game Alot, though i would like more free will, - You can put in options for the Folks who want to keep her pure and innocent u can have the current Slow corruption Option, You could also allow us to make riley go down the dark path faster. perhaps landing at a bad end if we go to fast Mike could leave her etc.. if she goes to far to fast etc.
Morisato
2023-12-12 19:56:59 +0000 UTCI honestly really liked the game and I think there are a lot of people who haven't read what the character's type of behavior is (ntr), the difference in this game compared to others is that the character gets involved with other men and women (my favorites are Richard and his grandson and the director) and that's the difference because I like the game... it's betrayal, blackmail, your husband's ambition for money while our Riley is at the mercy of other men's pleasures. continue with this purpose, I believe that the game is different because so many old, young, fat, thin, muscular, short, tall women identify with someone in the game, and that is extraordinary!! I like the fact that no one is Riley's , and everyone besides her husband would like to be with her. Congratulations on the update and don't pay attention to criticism, continue with this beautiful game!!
welington
2023-12-12 19:43:06 +0000 UTCit's a very nice game and in the next update i wish more and more in sauna with black receptionist and old man also!!
Angelo
2023-12-12 14:15:51 +0000 UTCYou should not use skip button, the game will be longer!
Fooxied Games
2023-12-12 09:35:17 +0000 UTCWhen will be next update? And will there be more scenes? As shame to play game once in a 3 months for 5minutes,
GamerSon
2023-12-12 09:16:52 +0000 UTC@OneGamer Well said. If you ask some Devs about their first game, I think every single one of them except the most experienced in all phases of production would say that they would have made it easier on themselves so the learning curve was more even. Adding complexity often does not improve the story. Since this isn't the forum for self-promotion, I won't mention the name of the AVN I'm working on, but know that piece of advice is helping me more than anything. Simple choices, simple branching with two maybe three main characters seems to be easy enough. Those who go for branching with more than 8 are in "deep Kimshee...lol".
Timothy Gjerde
2023-12-12 00:40:00 +0000 UTCAhhh right, thanks fantom 👍
Shangrla Radio
2023-12-11 23:44:04 +0000 UTCIf you have too many choices it will lessen the content not increase it. You will have to work harder to continue each branch, and each branch becomes shorter. Try to keep your choices limited to skipping a scene or a person and not let it become a second or third game unto it self. It will cause you too much work. A lot of devs lose interest a quit at that point. I like the game, you are doing a good job so far. Some of these people just like to stir shit up, you will never please them, that is not what they are here for. You are doing great, keep up the good work.
OneGamer
2023-12-11 23:25:20 +0000 UTCI think Pantera is right here. Don't branch things just to satisfy players. If you see an opportunity to branch, examples without having played too far in yet, would be sex-for-pay or "this is an opportunity to get some for myself" or I like it so I'll do it. Poorly worded here, but that's my take. Only if it makes sense to set her personality more as a fun-loving sex worker or corrupted girl.
Timothy Gjerde
2023-12-11 22:09:13 +0000 UTCI think you have the game script in your head? In many sandbox games you come to a choice that deviates from the main plot, and you have to continue with two parallel stories, generally if the choice is the 'wrong' one the game over. On the other hand, you did it with Wyatt, so why not do it with the headmaster? I would like to add that it is a porn game and not a nunnery! If it has blackmail as a feature of the game it must be there with no choice for the player. Otherwise game over, let him turn to the usual vanilla games that there are far too many of, this is not for him. Perhaps the only exception is that it was made free right away and it's a double-edged sword, yes you increase popularity, but you pick up everything, especially the haters. Of the comments you posted only one could be constructive, the others are meaningless. I too expected a bit more in the stag scene, very nice masturbation scene in front of the headmaster. If I may advise you, continue on your way, don't let yourself be conditioned and only take here and there hints that you think are valid, the rest leaves time for itself, ignore it!
Geko1711
2023-12-11 19:08:42 +0000 UTCThere is an inherent problem with female mc's. I'm sure you know what it is. It's okay for a guy to fuck everything that moves and he's a stud. A girl with a healthy sexual appetite is labeled a whore. On the other hand, corruption and NTR are delicate in either case. Is it really corruption or did the girl or guy have latent tendencies that just came out as they learned more about the real world and it's depraved aspects. What I'm saying is that you chose the road less traveled and it will be under a microscope. Just persevere my friend, you and your team are doing your best. I agree with jonyarrakos, don't succumb to the notion that you have satisfy other people, however if constructive criticism seems to provide good ideas then use what you see will work for your project. It's hard to see your hard work shamed by others, so eff them and feed the hotdogs imho. If they don't take the time to offer ways to improve with solid suggestions of exactly what would seem more plausible, they're just complaining and that's all. If they take the time write what they think would make it better, they are doing you a service regardless if you take their suggestions or not. Ignore the haters. Personally, looking at Rylie is a pleasure and while I've never been a fan of corrupting young women, she's hot enough that I don't mind. Just do what makes you happy to publish.
Timothy Gjerde
2023-12-11 18:20:36 +0000 UTCThat's the end of the wheel for episode 2.0
Fooxied Games
2023-12-11 17:46:47 +0000 UTCI only got hj from school gloryhole scene & only 1 section of the wheel, how does she finish the wheel?
mike
2023-12-11 16:16:29 +0000 UTCtry replaying - Debt repay comes from first payment to Wyatt. Support your team is the Scoreboard mini game in the gym (after she walks across campus in the outfit the Dean made her buy.)
fantom
2023-12-11 15:37:37 +0000 UTCGame over is say no to Wyatt and die. Got the school toilet finely - Support girl and Debt Repayment are what I'm left with :(
Shangrla Radio
2023-12-11 14:36:07 +0000 UTCI like your opinion very much and I second much of it, though I deem that the negative feedback from a place of dislike also is worthwhile to read because it helps to understand alternative standpoints. But I am with you on the fact that not every feedback is something you need to act on - we can always agree to disagree, especially on topics like personal opinions and taste. To your excellent point about blackmail: I also don't like blackmail and I also think that the blackmail story arc has lot of good content like the protagonist coming to terms with it. But on the other hand I also think that the Dean is depicted as (attention: opinion, not a fact, incoming): a douchebag who's misusing his power, but somehow also so charismatic and dominant that the female protagonist obviously seems to feel her ovaries resonating with it while her brain shuts down completely. And that's something that I completely reject. I feel that the direction of the game drifts too much into the female protagonist getting victimized at every step and that's in my book not remediable and not in line with the whole story of her saving her husband (and maybe her marriage)... To be a little bit more concise: I dislike the notion of a stupid bimbo wife saving their marriage by letting everyone do to her whatever they please, even if that fits perfectly with the mental prowess of her husband. It's simply too easy for me and not a story I would like to read. But I would love to read of a woman who has to make hard decisions and may even put douches like the dean in their spot. That doesn't mean that she can't fuck or suck them on the way - she can use the weapons of a woman to the full extent of her immense potential. In the blackmail arc she could for example turn the table by producing a nice sex video with the dean to make his misuse of people public. Or she could use it as leverage to stay in university indefinitely, maybe also gaining some profit out of it and continuing to fuck the dean, but this time on equal terms... you can put in some femdom over his secretary if you so please... so that there are different roads you can travel here, but in any case: The player determines the fate of the female protagonist and her story unfolds out of choice, not coincidence. I would love to hear your thoughts on this.
Alex The Red
2023-12-11 12:06:02 +0000 UTCKeeping hitting that toilet in the school bro you will get it. Mine are “Support Girl” “Game Over” & “Debt Rapayment”
Wayne
2023-12-11 07:32:42 +0000 UTC"Greater Glory" and "Support your team" are proper eluding me at the moment! Excellent game :)
Shangrla Radio
2023-12-11 07:30:28 +0000 UTCMan your game is the king I love if just gotta get all my achievements now :)
Wayne
2023-12-11 07:01:00 +0000 UTCI have to first start off by saying I love the MC so much, and the writing is actually believable and enjoyable unlike many other games. I believe the graphics quality is top notch and should not be an issue for anyone. I also absolutely love the music. Ya know, this is a corruption game, and when presented with 2 options 95% of people are going to pick the obvious option that takes you further down that route, but it is that very choice that makes it so rewarding and exciting. I have to be honest it really was off-putting when Riley just gave that guy a lapdance instead of having a choice, when most other choices (except dealing with the Dean who she can't really refuse) had an option to slap, refuse, etc. (even though I did not pick those choices, except to see what happened). Also the bar bachelor party is what I was REALLY waiting for in this update and wanted the most to see, but the scene right before it where Wesley was rubbing her leg got me more excited than the party, it felt very short. I loved all the people checking her out and feeling her up when she was serving, that was really really hot. The scene with Madison was also super hot and unexpected. What felt less exciting or off for me I guess was the lack of choice. I think choices would go a long way into feeling like you the player actually are corrupting Riley by deciding her fate and her not liking everything so much and being so willing to do these things, unless you choose. Which again I understand most players will choose that option anyways and it's just more work for you, but I just wanted to say what I thought. I really like slow corruption and it's moving a bit fast, but I understand many people are the opposite! And in the end it is YOUR game, and your vision, we are just lucky enough to see it and play it. Thanks for caring and thanks for your work, take care.
GrimX95
2023-12-11 03:27:33 +0000 UTCI loved the new update and your renders and animations are great. Sure I would like some petite girls for variety but I'm very happy with the girls you've made. I always like to have options in these type of games and I'm not big on the forced stuff but you make it clear that she puts up with it for her finances and is definitely enjoying it with some guilt as she progresses so it doesn't bother me. You might add a path ignore option for the Dean or certain pervs/gropers if you want to appease some people to maybe bring in more money but I wouldn't suggest adding a bunch of replacement routes that you don't really want. That usually just leads to slower updates and burnout. Right now I think your update pace is fine and you are very dedicated so I'll continue to support as you continue to bring the hotness.
Pantera
2023-12-11 02:41:34 +0000 UTCI just want to say you did a great job with the Steam page. Looks very neat and clean looking. I think its cool that you decided to give us more agency with Riley. I just wanted to say one thing about the F95 comments you got. Those people were just haters with nothing better to do. There is a difference between constructive criticism and being a troll, they were being trolls. So pay them no mind, we got your back and want you to succeed.
ChickenKing
2023-12-11 01:47:19 +0000 UTCI am loving the game so far. I have no problem with how the blackmail part is playing out. I don't want Riley to have the option to say no, after all, this is to prevent her from being expelled. But being able to decide how much she likes/dislikes what the Dean makes her do is my preference. I definitely want more streaming with Elijah and having the option to have her get more risque as she goes. Absolutely more Ivy. It's pretty obvious the "gifts" were from Richard and would love to see that story line continued. First and foremost, PLEASE stay true to your vision.
Greg Peacock
2023-12-11 00:44:31 +0000 UTCFirst of all I need to state honestly that I love this game! I love everything about it. The slow burn approach is really frustrating, but it makes me eager for the next release, so big applause for that. There was only one big disappointment for me and that was Wesley's party :( The Build up to it was excellent, but there was nothing wild about that party. Strippers strip, but Maddison didn't even take her top off. I would have loved to see them at least get naked, with hubby totally happy with the cash that was coming in and perfectly happy to see her going for it. His attitude to her dancing was positive and I guess you maybe hinting at his cuck path? To be honest the scene in the last release where Wesley started feeling her up and she went along with it was far hotter than anything in the party scene. One other thing, that could save you a lot of time, is cutting down on unnecessary renders... The gym scenes have as many as 10 renders when two or three would do as they aren't really that hot. The time spent could be better applied to the story line. Just my humble opinion and does not have an impact on my love of the the game. That said, I think the game has massive possibilities and I shall continue to support it. Well done Foxxie all power to you mate. 5 stars from me.
Shangrla Radio
2023-12-11 00:41:24 +0000 UTCAWAM is a good example of forced corruption that has an off ramp for those that do not want to follow it. I LOVE this game, by the way. Excellent detail and I like all of your characters. Yes, it does take a little while for the story to develop, but I like that too. It's your game. We are all here because of your imagination and technical skills. I can't wait to see where Riley goes from here. Great Job!!
Jenna Smith
2023-12-10 23:08:44 +0000 UTCHaters are gonna hate. Forget 'em! I joined your Patreon because I like what you are producing. Typically I am not a fan of sandbox games, and the issues I have with this game are related, but I like this VN despite that. I will expound upon this later. I enjoy the plots with all the side characters, and that is rare. The dean's blackmail is a railroaded kind of storyline, but if options were given, being the deviant that I am, Riley would be following the path you have laid. I was surprised we were not given the choice to suck the dean, but like I said, Riley would have done it in my game if I had the choice. I'm a fan of corruption whether slow or fast, as long as there is a modicum of sense involved. To me the dean's blackmail works because Riley would rather "slut it up" than be expelled from school or arrested. I can work with that. I'm a bigger fan of exhibitionism, which I can see the beginnings of in certain dialogues. When this gets more fleshed out, I will be even more thrilled. On the downside... haha! I was like someone else in this thread and was disappointed in the bar bachelor party scene - just didn't seem that wild. To this point in the game it is pretty much the only scene I haven't loved. As I mentioned earlier, not a fan of sandbox games in general, usually because the lack of filler, which I see here as well; it's just not as bad as some sandbox games. Also quests trigger sometimes because conditions were met, but all I wanted to do was work and earn some money. hahaha... In your game these annoyances are minute, and I enjoy it regardless. As for the critics from F95, some complaining about lighting, writing, and unrealistic woman proportions... idiots the lot of them I say. The guy criticizing the writing does so while writing his criticism poorly - like you should take advice from him.🙄 In summary, maybe add a few choices, but don't create too many branching paths (that will surely burn you out.) More importantly stay true to your vision.
fantom
2023-12-10 23:03:15 +0000 UTCMost of the reviews found on f95, even if they are directly critical of some specific aspect of the game, are clearly coming from a place of 'this isn't tailored to my tastes, and that's bad". I understand how as a player that can be frustrating, but it has no bearing on the overall quality of a project, and going from there into "bad game" makes no sense. So, i agree, they're very ignorable reviews. As for conclusions, one thing i was surprised to enjoy was the blackmail route. Normally, in female protagonist games with blackmail, it's much more miserable, which isn't for me. But here, Riley is being a bit honest with herself about how she can enjoy it and even be mildly enthusiastic about it at times. And in the end, she isn't being blackmailed into anything really horrible (to her experience at least that is -- obviously the scene in the dean's office for example is morally fucked :D), just into a 'good time' that is actually is a good time for her, which she accepts at face value, even if she doesn't fully understand why she feels that way. It's a refreshing change from what is the typical very unpleasantness of blackmail i've seen. Honestly, i'd still prefer some other means of progression besides blackmail or anything 'forced', and i'm looking forward to Riley becoming an even more willing participant in the Dean's games, but even so, i've found it pleasantly surprising here.
bos
2023-12-10 22:45:39 +0000 UTCI agree with much of this, but i really hope that it doesn't go so poorly for her and her husband. Yeah he's naive and a bit foolish, but he's not really a terrible guy. The thing about the corruption theme, to me anyway, is that it loses much of its punch if there's 'justification' for it. Like, a woman has a fully loser husband who she's starting to hate or he ignores her completely, etc etc etc? Of course a person can be corrupted in those circumstances. Those are all excuses and justifications for it. But on the other hand. if she's happy with her husband, despite his flaws, and satisfied in their relationship, despite its trials, but is *still* enticed down a lewd and slutty path with none of those 'excuses'? Much sweeter.
bos
2023-12-10 22:45:34 +0000 UTCI have to add something about the last comment you posted from F95zone forum... That one is purely a subjective criticism. The guy doesn't like "unrealistic" characters that dress in provocative ways...That's fair. But it's one of the things I'm looking for in those kinds of games, and that's also fair. I play those games for the sexiness of them (and that could always be improved with maybe longer scenes), but also because I want to see smoking hot women in sexy outfits :D If it's to see an average properly dressed woman, I can look out my window, there's plenty of them (and some are probably great people). What this guys does is criticizing the game for what it is not. It's like watching a Romcom and complaining because there's no horror elements in the movie... Dude, that's not what this game is, so look for something more to your taste.
Tithann
2023-12-10 22:45:29 +0000 UTCDisney movies are predictable and still unique at the same time.
Fooxied Games
2023-12-10 21:57:42 +0000 UTCHi, First of all don't get discouraged, your game has great potential. The graphics are great, perhaps the best in any game I've played until now. There are however some problems (but they can all be solved by hiring a writer), respectively: - The scenes are not long enough to become immersive and as a result not sexy enough - None of the situations are original (the neighbour, the bar are all beaten tracks explored by other developers familiar to most here on Patreon) and the story flows in very predictable direction. Surprise us, surprises are sexy! For example: she gets corrupted slowly, but once in a while a wild scene happens that we don't expect - Her reactions/thoughts are also rather predictable. My opinion is that you are very talented developer that just needs a decent writer. Once you do this you will have the best game if its kind out there.
alex
2023-12-10 21:47:42 +0000 UTCYou can make the most perfect game and people will still find ways to hate. Personally I think your game is great. I enjoy the slow burn and the variation of different characters you introduced. Your renders are great and I appreciate your update schedule that has been spot on. I support you on here because I believe in your vision and look forward to the direction you take your game. Its been awesome so far.
Lucky Number
2023-12-10 21:25:07 +0000 UTCI really enjoy the game! the Renders are really good and the sound effects help with the immersion. i personally would like more sound effects like gasping when surprised groping or shocked. i also like the slowness of the corruption or the tease before the finish line. I also think Ivy would be a great way to help Riley with convincing her to do dirtier things as an option for corrupting. i also agree that more options to choose her way of corruption will Definity enhance game immersion. Buuut that will be an insane amount of work for you guys. All in all i will support this game as i can. Keep it up!
lolidoli
2023-12-10 20:20:33 +0000 UTCThis is the review (or at least part of it) that we will implement in the game. You are another person who comments on the thread with the dean and we will certainly take it into consideration and we will made significant changes.
Fooxied Games
2023-12-10 20:12:27 +0000 UTCHi Fooxied, sorry that I can't add your game to my Steam Lib because I am from Germany and it's not available here... damn. Maybe you can do something about it? ;-) But let's go in medias res: First of all... I like this game a lot. There are many things that I really like already - like the sandbox setting and that it's much more than a game than a visual novel. You are doing a great job here and I am very thankful for all the time, effort and the hard work you put into it. I think this game is a raw diamond that can benefit from some polish and which has a lot of potential. So I am writing this with a very positive mindset and only the best of intentions in my heart and I hope that my words don't offend, because they were not written to do so. They are meant to be constructive and positive and I very much hope they are read that way. In my humble opinion I would love if you would give more freedom to the player which roads to travel and which not. Since the whole setup seems to portray the female protagonist as a strong woman who rescues her idiot husband (and herself) from financial ruin and sure death, I would love to see the baseline of the game be set to this story arc. The female protagonist starts out as a decent and smart young woman who married out of love and has to realize that her husband is a complete idiot. As the illusion of a great marriage and life crumbles to dust under the heels of the decisions of her husband and the reaction of the unrelenting and unforgiving world around her, she has to do what all good people do: To learn, to improvise, to adapt and to overcome. That said: I would love if you would build on that foundation of a smart and now rather disillusioned woman who is ready to do what she needs to do to survive and to thrive. What do I mean by that? I think the player should have the final say in what debaucheries and corruption the female protagonist indulges and in which not. You are already very strongly on that path on many occasions (like with the guy she has to pay off each week) but right at the moment she's somehow driven into some decisions that she can't avoid altogether (like the situation with the dean) You might also add options to the story that allows the player avoid some scenarios altogether (which you can also add as an information the moment the decision arises). A good way to do that is to allow the player to choose which emotion and emotional reaction the female protagonist shows, like you do in the masturbation choice you give them with the dean as he orders her to masturbate. Give the player the ability to decide whether or not she gets wet from the treatment and therefore lets herself be dominated, or to not get wet and being not submissive at that point in time. Leave the decision of her emotions and her reaction to the player. A strong female protagonist might also open up options like working for the nice neighbour and buying the slutty maid outfit to try to get him to pay more... meaning: being proactive to corrupt others. This might even be initiated by the female protagonist, corrupting her even more and making her not simply a victim of circumstances but also a seductive woman that chooses her fate by herself. I think you would gain a lot of narrative freedom and depth that way. I don't want to see a stupid bimbo forced into rapesex by characters with the mental depth of a puddle and the charisma of a dead jellyfish. ;-) You can depict the people and especially the guys in the game however you want. But I think it would add a lot of spice if you would depict a really smart woman who knows how to use the weapons of a woman to her benefit. The protagonist would be a much more interesting character that way. And I also think that the game would be a lot more appealing to a broader audience that way. And like this, the female protagonist would be the one to decides to by choice take her steps to debauchery. :-) ty :-) Alex
Alex The Red
2023-12-10 19:54:48 +0000 UTCLove your game, it’s awesome, please don’t take negative reviews to heart. There will always be haters and trolls on the internet that will never be satisfied, so just ignore them and carry on with your game. I can never get enough Madison, need more, hope she can work regularly as stripper at the bar and hope to see Riley and Madison get more naughty scenes together or 3some with the dean, also can’t wait till they start using that bathroom stall in the bar too, maybe charge for sexual services. Also love to see Riley offer body shots and let them drink bottle from her cleavage and buttweisers from her ass cheeks
mike
2023-12-10 19:48:31 +0000 UTCSpot on review. The game is great but I also do not prefer forced corruption. I want Riley to enjoy the process and be more empowered so she is not used for sexual assault. I would also like to see renders from Riley's perspective when she is having sex.
Jenna Smith
2023-12-10 19:34:45 +0000 UTCIt's difficult to say what I would like to see changed about the game. On one hand, I can understand the want for more options (like choosing not to engage with the blackmail.) On the other hand, the choices that are given right now are the ones I would choose if I have different options. There are things that I don't understand about some people. You see a game about a woman that gets slowly corrupted, you decide to play the game, and then you complain because the options given slowly corrupt the character... What ? And let's be clear, in 99.9% of the games if you refuse something like the blackmail it just leads to the closure of that path, and therefore less content, NOT another content.
Tithann
2023-12-10 19:12:29 +0000 UTCAnd to be clear, I understand the game may just not be for me and that’s fine. Which is why I wouldn’t put up a negative review, it’s just not heading a direction that matches my tastes currently.
Whofellnow
2023-12-10 19:04:14 +0000 UTCI’m not one of those reviewers, but I do agree with them. I have no intention of giving a bad review, but I’m debating continued support only because it’s heading a direction I’m not interested in. I hate when corruption is forced and is essentially sexual assault. Yeah, I’d like to tell the dean to fuck off the way it’s gone. Or blackmail him into n return and flip the tables. At least with the $200 payment I have a way around it. I want to participate in corruption, not be rail roaded into it. Basically let me have her grow a spine. I’m fine if that means I miss out on portions of the game. This is in no way hate, I love your renders. I love the side characters, I want to see where it goes with Blazes mom and Ivy, I just don’t feel like playing another female Mc with no agency who just gets railroaded into a cum slut.
Whofellnow
2023-12-10 18:59:51 +0000 UTCYou really shouldnt listen too much to US. We joined you and your great Game because we love your Idea and the Style of Riley´s Story. If somebody doesnt likes your Style, he can just search for other Games. We love the NTR Style and also how Riley is exploring her slutty side. Thats why we play with a female protagonist. You could ask 1000 of us and you will gain thousands diffrent opinions. Stay to your Idea and your way and i´m sure the most of us will support you. And don´t listen to haters, they are just unstatisfied with their own live and enjoy to make others feel bad and useless. And please don´t even start with compromises and overthinking. You will lose your energy and your creativity. Stay focused on your Plan and trust in yourself. Otherwise you will lose your will and the game will stay unfinished. This would be really bad because i see a lot of potential in this Game. Keep going and lead the way. We will follow.
Nighteagle
2023-12-10 18:44:18 +0000 UTCHey there Fooxied Games! First off, don't pay any attention to the negative haters. They don't contribute anything that helps. You guys are doing a great job, and the story line is great too! I made some suggestions in the past, but it was taken the wrong way lol. Either way, you guys are fine. People expect too much, and some of those negative comments from people were just plain rude. My advise and suggestion is to stay focused on your good works, and keep doing your best. Your AVN is sexy, stimulating and entertaining, and the MC, (Riley), looks amazing along with the clothing and everything else in your AVN. Keep expanding on the story and ignore the haters. Cheers! - JB NYC -
Jonny Boy NY
2023-12-10 18:40:48 +0000 UTCSome of these reviews I directly disagree with. I applaud your update speed. It isn't the fastest I've seen, but graphically the game is nice, and you updated us as you made progress and there was a decent amount of new stuff. Not everyone is going to like the game, but in this genre I'd bet you attract vastly more than you push away. I'll give you an example. Most of the time I dislike when developers make all the women have big boobs. I like B and C cups from experience, but to my surprise the art in your game never fails to raise my blood pressure. It isn't personally tailored to my preference, but that doesn't make it less enjoyable. A piece of constructive critism would be I'd like to see more "filler" activities. I think you are already working on some of these, and to highlight a comment I saw was more stuff to buy for the MC. It introduces a solid game loop grind money>spend on necessities>grind a bit more> buy outfits/potential date scene(s)/accessories for the house. Even with the negative reviews. I'm very comfortable these decisions are in your hands. Something to ponder is after I played the update I almost came by to make a positive comment, but didn't until now. Keep up the excellent work. You're more appreciated than you know.
Elq
2023-12-10 18:33:42 +0000 UTCI would say that slut simulator games should have an option of "choosing" with debaucheries character will accept. In my opinion - I'm all for slut simulator to the max but I do like options to either opt in or opt out of things I like/dislike. That being said - I will play the game as the producer envisions it. What I don't like, I will speed up or if possible skip. I will certainly not enter anti NTR crusade just because I might find it distasteful (disclaimer - I love it since I don't identify with the cucked character :D). I'm not that much fan of the dean content just because I prefer different kind of corruption. However, I'm not gonna bitch about it and will rather enjoy some other parts. Also, I like progressive corruption that explores different kinks. It's okay that it takes little time to get to "that" point where anything goes. You have a nice game and I don't think you should take to heart F95 thread comments. Most of it is rubbish. Your patreon consumers are the ones that should have the strongest voice. Keep it up. And kudos for the effort.
Konjokita
2023-12-10 18:11:24 +0000 UTCI agree 100% here.
Spikkle
2023-12-10 18:10:39 +0000 UTCHonestly, I feel reviews will improve once more happens, right now, not a lot of sex happens in the game to be honest, she's only fucked Mike, which makes sense as your approach is a more slow burn corruption rather than the unrealistic "one event happens then she'll do anything",m but it does mean those not as investewd as say, us patrons, will get impatient, its going to happen, but I think the tide will turn. I liked how things are moving along: - Elijah: you can sneak a peak at his junk at the shopping centre and Riley likes what she sees. This'll make her more open to doing stuff with him in the future. He's also made many commentrs on hot attracvtive she is so he obviously would be up for it. Also, she is now doing streams on her own and is being a lil naughty during them - whats the betting they'll transtion to doing full adult streaming? Riley the star, Elijah in charge of tech.. maybe even the male talent in a sex show? I think the groundwork has been set here for some hot stuff to happen and I'm very excited to see how it goes. - Bar Guys: I'll be honest, I was expcting the stag night to be a lot naughtier than it was, I didn't think Riley would be fucking anyone, at this stage she's done nothin with anythone else, but when I learned Madison was going to be there and she was fine with things getting wild, I thought once I got Mike passed our drunk, Riley had sat on the "kings lap", Madison was going to fuck Wesley and Jay, or Wesley, Jay and the Stag. Even if it was something Riley walked in on in the back or something, you know? BUt again, it sets the groundwork, the yacht! She'll be out at sea, surrounded by horny men, she gotta get fucked there. Remember in an earlier scene Wesley already got hard when she was on his lap and she felt how big he was. I think this plays into my opening point on not much happening physically yet. - Dean: i already raved about this, this was my fav scene and it suprised me positively. He was very much in charge, I liked how you took tghe time to show him gropping himself and getting hard and hearing Rileys thoughts. When she got under the desk and he unbuckled, I was pleased to see he was indeed packing, ther biggest cock in the game we seen so far I think? Someone with his confidence has to get it from somewhere and there it is. Riley finally does someone with someone else and this will surely open her up to doing more with the other people she is interacting with. I feel this scene marks the game ramping up in what happens and I really hope it does, I think scenes with the Dean will take RIley up a level in corruption. Ivy: tbh, I myself am not interested in girl on girl stuff, I always like a dick involved I can pretend is me XD Lots of groundwork set here and I know lotsa peeps out there will love it once they start doing more. - Miguel: Was nice to see her help him, he mentioned tutoring, I can't see the option to do it yet, unless I missed it? This opens her up to more csual encounters with peeps later down then line - Extra Stuff: When I mentioned in the discord I had enjkoyed the Dean scene, you seemed very concerned that I had got there far in less than an hour. No worries, I had just done the main stuff, UI've since done the side stuff. Does Riley on suck the dick in the glory hole after the Dean Scene? Was hot she did it. I liked how she checked out the other guys in the sauna. I also liked how she comapres every cock she sees to Mikes and has to admit they are always bigger than his XD Its now at this stage I worry his name is Mick... I can't remember XD
Spikkle
2023-12-10 18:07:05 +0000 UTCHope you will mainly focus on the positive reviews and not the haters. You are making a good game. Of course some constructive critisism can lead to improvement, but to much focus on hate and bad critisism can be depressing and blocking the creativity and work flow.
Sagara88
2023-12-10 18:02:31 +0000 UTCBuddy you are doing a great job. Please don't be disheartened by these fu**ers.. we love your storyline and all your patreon subscribers love it. For mere 2 to 3 percent people you do not have to be worried.
Sreeku
2023-12-10 17:51:21 +0000 UTC
