PLANT OF PLEASURE (28 PAGES) MAKOTO NANAYA
Added 2021-06-26 22:13:16 +0000 UTC
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Oh well, that can be improved as well. Who knows if that can help me comunicate mu mesage a bit better~
Fetish Studio
2021-06-28 03:20:39 +0000 UTCOkay yes that does help a bit. It is definitely less glaring then the black. Though the block of color being longer than the words still feels a little bit off. But maybe that's just me.
Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)
2021-06-28 02:20:47 +0000 UTCOh! Thank you very much for mentioning it and for reading this work! It's a big difference in color size it seems. Yeah, maybe some purple color would have been better. Alright! It's updated now, it should be a bit better~
Fetish Studio
2021-06-27 18:28:46 +0000 UTCWow, this came together really well. I really loved the pleas for focusing and how they slowly fades out. One complaint I will raise is pages 7-9 and the different color block behind some of the text to help draw it out. They, to me at least, are more distracting and jarring. Like especially for page 7, that ire looks like your trying to correct a mistake then to make words stick out. I think a better way to have done it would have more of a thick border color around them instead changing the background color. Also possibly bolding them, but that might be less necessary. Or you could even try inverting that idea and change the primary color of the text and give it a black border to maintain readability.
Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)
2021-06-27 17:16:58 +0000 UTCThank you very much! A big pleasure working with you while providing Makoto a lot of pleasure :)
Fetish Studio
2021-06-26 23:49:35 +0000 UTCThank you again for this so much FeSt! I love just how well it all came out! <3
Card
2021-06-26 23:33:23 +0000 UTCWhohoo! Thank you so much! First time using aphrodisiacs, it's a big fetish of mine to be encased in a cocoon too. Wonderful indeed! ~
Fetish Studio
2021-06-26 23:18:46 +0000 UTCIt's hard to pick what I liked the most! There's so many things I loved here! The total latex enclosure cocoon! The ballgag! The aphrodisiacs! So I guess the combination of all of these three elements is what I liked the most~
Erika Lan
2021-06-26 23:14:17 +0000 UTCThank you so much! Who knows? Maybe that ballgag will be recurrent in future works? Ballgags are always a great source of fetish material ;) What do you liked most about this? :)
Fetish Studio
2021-06-26 22:56:42 +0000 UTCGreat work as usual <3 More questions around that ballgag, it seems~
Erika Lan
2021-06-26 22:52:01 +0000 UTC
