Extended Story - Mirko! (+20 Pages)
Added 2021-04-17 01:33:59 +0000 UTCDownload:
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I'll eventually delete this story and post it to the public (twitter and pixiv) because its old and I've improved a lot since this was released.
Comments
Cant wait
Jagues
2021-04-19 14:33:36 +0000 UTCWonderful! You will enjoy the proper documentation about "Breathless Droning" on "Mirk" in the upcoming future :)
Fetish Studio
2021-04-19 14:32:11 +0000 UTCSo want to get droned like this
Jagues
2021-04-19 14:27:31 +0000 UTCEven so, there are mooore plans for her in the future. This is the first "erotic" step, among many. :)
Fetish Studio
2021-04-19 14:26:45 +0000 UTCShe could help with other projects
Jagues
2021-04-19 14:25:36 +0000 UTCYay! Thank you so much! Even so, there is more to come so we can explore the concept of "Breathless Drone", on Mirko, as a one-of-a-kind soulless automaton ;)
Fetish Studio
2021-04-19 14:24:09 +0000 UTCI'm glad you're turning her into a drone 💛 Faceless girls are the best, especially when they're human girls who were turned into soulless automatons~
Thisandstuff
2021-04-19 06:43:45 +0000 UTCEverything helps and you have pointed a lot of factors I forgot and would be a pleasure to add, even as a breathplay practitioner myself... I am surprised I forgot about it. The heightened sense of touch mixed with the burning lungs its an evident turn on. Even the paik factor which is erotic in a way and finally the climax at her breaking point. Yes. Noted! I've taken some notes on the subject! :) My deepest thanks!
Fetish Studio
2021-04-17 05:51:33 +0000 UTCWell luckily I wrote it in onenote instead of into patreon since it actually lets me format some and save my thoughts if I have to pause. Also one more note, I think what you did in the comic is much better in context then what I was thinking. My idea wouldn't work well in a comic, this is more my casual writer of porn brain at work. Okay so in a more general sense, of just freaking out that her air has been cut off. But it also triggers a heightened sense of touch, so combined with the tightness of the latex would cause her to likely instantly climax. From there as time goes on she would feel a burning in her lungs for the need to breath. Possibly climaxing again as the pain builds. With her thoughts definitely slowing down and becoming incoherent as she burns through what little oxygen she has left in her bloodstream.
Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)
2021-04-17 05:34:48 +0000 UTCHehe my apologies, sometimes i get overly-obssesed on my work! But I would apreciatte it you still writte it because it's a lot of info and learning I can get to improve my work! Thank you so much Reachel for your suggestions! :)
Fetish Studio
2021-04-17 05:12:31 +0000 UTCOkay so I wrote a whole thing up but by the time I was done you already had posted your edits, which basically covered what I was going to say. And definitely in a smaller word count then I would have pulled together.
Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)
2021-04-17 04:51:48 +0000 UTC(Edit: improved the comic to include some panicking on the breathplay on the pages 14, 15 and 16) Thank you for the suggestion! Everything helps so I can write better stories. Even so, I could edit it to add some Mirko's thoughts of panic at the first 2 pages of breathplay because it's a natural part of it. What kind of thoughts do you think she will get ? I would apreciatte if you can expand about it! :) Whohooo! I am so happy it hit all the right buttons, breathplay is a topic I would like to explore more on the reactions and everything.
Fetish Studio
2021-04-17 04:17:31 +0000 UTCOkay I think this, overall, turned out great. Like I'm still a bit in shock that you worked breathplay into the story in a way that doesn't feel like I had only given you the idea to earlier in the day. It would have been nice to have had some of Mirko's thoughts of panic, at least a little bit at the start. What you did show still definitely gets it across very well that she's imploding in a good sexy way. Like for me, yeah this definitely hits all the right buttons.
Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)
2021-04-17 04:02:48 +0000 UTCThank you for commenting Dustin! I was going to do the "Droning" at the end but after thinking... I believe it will look better on a "Part 2" on this story. Because we can tell a lot of possible scenarios with a droned Mirko! Fetish Studio logo would be shown as the drone's face.
Fetish Studio
2021-04-17 04:01:12 +0000 UTCI still love the idea of droning through the cerbal pins and the foreshadowing at the end of this
Jagues
2021-04-17 03:46:43 +0000 UTCThanks to you Card! Every help allows me to improve my art and writting, thank you for proof-reading my work. Slowly getting better, but improving! :)
Fetish Studio
2021-04-17 02:16:53 +0000 UTCAww, thank you for the special mention there my friend! And amazing work with this story! <3
Card
2021-04-17 02:12:47 +0000 UTC
