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Hero's heart- episode 5, scene 6

alright peeps, new update is up! hope you enjoy it! this one was quite fun to make X3

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Father Star: Alright... Sorry, Son, you're in for a hell of a night. Yes, we're in the ring. Yes, we're wildly disorganized. Yes, the Lost are invading again. We're gonna help you how we can. Just breathe.

Cross

Iron Star: A worthy choice of weapons, axes to save and axes to raze. Let this newly chosen warrior know which is which. Action: Instill Nokkie with Irons Stars knowledge of martial techniques so he doesn't chop off his other arm by accident.

Glitch the Iron

Easy-if you don't get a third on friday evening, swap to this one.

jaredy1

I would like to join, but I already have 2 Star comment in this post

Jovik Darkson

Shield Star: Impressive... but a little exposed, don't you think? Let me add a little something to keep him covered. Action: Channel defensive energy through the Axes' ferromagnetic field and increase the repulsing force toward incoming attacks.

Jovik Darkson

(permission to abridge as needed) Iwapele: "Help" Hmm, you remember being like him? He could have taken you easily as slumbered. You know what been through you know of what and from where he speaks.. The energies that quelled you and drove you, are a part of both you. As your craving for survival met. Seize your Ashe. And be the glimmering stream that, cooling, leads through the blinding haze and the infestators or madlings that dare reign where sought heart. Action: Attempt to help Nokke be aware and synthesize of any Lost/Zenion energies and actions. He himself will not be and he can understand their meaning, actions, and see it in others, and comprehend and draw on effects as he'd choose for himself (Cherry's seize command, the knowledge/feel of Zenion/recognizing the influence/draw of a Minister) If can combine with Midnight, Submission, Heart, Hungry actions

Rodney Talon

I think I see 2-the dragon and the rocket boots. there's seven prosthetic comments, maybe he'll lump those together?

pastorp

he has always liked being feminized verbally, he wears lingerie in his concept art. and he wasn't even turned into a woman -- literally looks exactly the same except for the part swaps. no facial or hair changes whatsoever. guys can have a pussy and tits, cmon now

CherryDad

Inspiration Star: This is all well and good, but at least give him an instruction manual boys. Nokkie, us stars are here to assist you with current situation. Just know that we are here to help and aid you in your survival. You got this sweeetie. Action: Flood Nookie with a feeling of confidence and assurance in this stressful time, allowing him to not panic and make rational decisions. Also give him a quick info dump in his new form capabilities as well as what the ring can do for him.

Randastasius

I don't mind any alterations to my Star's dialogue since I have difficulties writing natural sounding conversations.

Fe5ter

Submission Star (to Librarian Star): “Ooooh! What a cute little short-stack newbie hero! Of course I’ll lend a hand or two!” ~ Action: Infantry Agility Assist the Librarian and Heroism Stars by granting Nokkie a set of Infantry Armor- a set of leather armor for a low-ranking guardsman. The armor grants him extra defense points, and if he allows the heroic clones to attack an enemy first, he gets a short Agility advantage against that enemy.

Asher Heart

He didn't make Wolf a woman. We did through our comments. And like anything else, it lasts a scene and then it's over. By the time we return to him, he'll be male again.

jaredy1

You lost me when you made Wolf a woman. I don’t dislike women, but that relationship didn’t need that to happen. I’m glad Wolf walked away.

JBearWA

I’d like to suggest stating you’re making this a constellation with Desire Star’s action since they’re also turning Nokkie into a dragon.

Plague

I think we need to start congealing on people's ideas because I don't see a single constellation out of 50 comments. I see a few parts, but no minor constellations, and Nokki has zero plot armor. We need to focus ourselves around 4 major plays and go from there or we won't get a good outcome. attack, defense, A strategy, and Something to keep him safe from the lost, like movement of some kind.

jaredy1

Submission Star (to Nokkie): “Ooooh! You got this, you cute little short-stack! You’re our current master and we’re in your corner!” ~

Asher Heart

Submission Star (Nokkie): “Ooooh! Hey there you short-stack noob, your boss’s boss really needs his special plants! Let’s see if we can sniff them out!” ~ Action: “Trufflin’ Snout” A pink rubber pig snout with a fine black leather belt attaches itself to Nokkie’s face. As long as the user is wearing the cute rubber snout, they are able to sniff the scent of their target from over great distances, and they are able to see a faint visible scent trail that leads toward the direction of their target.

Asher Heart

Lodestone Star: "Nokkie... It's been so long. Just hearing The Stars signify your potential as a Ring Bearer." "Listen well Nokkie, it's imperative that you seek out Miss Sue, Mayor Lonomia, and Artificer Thrak. Their survival will aid with your escape from Port Zero along with the slight probability of reclaiming the Port from The Lost. Miss Sue likely prepared several Warp Stations in case of emergencies such as this." ((With the exception of Nokkie's Battleaxe, siphon Mana from all nearby sources of iron and ferromagnetic metals within the room thus forming FIVE magnetically-imbued Throwing Axes that orbits around the Goblin's vicinity capable of swiftly reacting to immediate threats. Said Throwing Axes can be utilized as projectiles, short-ranged defense inspired by the Axelord's [Rotating Shield] technique, propeller flight and forming makeshift platforms for Nokkie to walk on.))

Fe5ter

Performer's Star: Yes Cleric do indulge in some sweet debauchery and discipline your pup properly but first have a drink darlin’ huhuhu~ Action: Give Cleric a wine glass of sweet blood, almost like a wine that helps “grow” a more dominant demeanor and his body of course.

Jr7LuckyCoruki

RNG Star:(To Nokkie) A New Hand Touches the Ring! LISTEN! Hear and Obey! Fight, Flight, Find capable Friends! Take up these arms! This town needs a mounted defense! Action: Spur on Nokkie to action and create spectral, dexterous arms for all the limbs he lost.

jaquane patterson

Rosaes, Solarflowers and Lavendya.

Fe5ter

Use the Knockback to allow Nokkie to propel himself vertically if aimed at the ground. Similar to Ashe's weapon, the Coach Gun, from OW/OW2.

Fe5ter

Can we do a "Carrot and Stick" approach after their paddling? Something to improve their dwindling morale.

Fe5ter

Huh, an interesting idea. We did make that giant cherry for our apprentice boy near the start. If it’s still around, we could use it to grow another tree.

Plague

Just wanted to say this was a great update and I hope everyone has luck with the efforts to help the little goblin buddy

Randastasius

Oh oops lol

Dark627

Heroism Star: "O' heavenly arrow that cuts through the skies, broad chested breast who scars in place of others. O wizened soul bursting aflame, see our newest hero safely through this harrowing night!" Action: Assist Librarian Star to give them form, tactics and the knowledge needed to protect Nokkie, even if they won't fully be able to assisting him.

RiceballSama

Librarian Star: One such as you has little hope of surviving what's coming unscathed. But perhaps, some heroes of eld can lend you their assistance... for however long they'll remain. Action: Cameo Appearance (Like the Kurt Clones back in episode 2, summon images of 3 heroic archetypes to protect and fight for Nokkie in the peril to come. they can be past cameos of CYOA characters, like Roro and Pepi, but they don't have to be. These should last 1 update or at least long enough to protect Nokkie from being infected by the Lost again.)

Alan

Nokkie's only missing an arm

Fe5ter

Yeah, that's why everyone is talking to Nokkie. Meek said he's the only one who is near the ring and can be interacted with now. We WERE all doing things like you were for a few hours. I guess he noticed and told us not to bother.

jaredy1

Ah thank you for letting me know- I admit I don't use the discord! In which case- Windchime Star- One of the meanies invading keeps talking about music- I'll give you an aura of white noise to protect you from whatever memetically hazardous effects... I mean uhhh, nasty songs he plays. Intention- Give Nokkie a protection aura from sound based effects

Robert Smith

Heart Star: (Manifests heart shaped sunglasses for Nokkie) Lost often have quite the charm offensive, these should help you to resist. They can also help provide your own assault. Charm those to your cause! (produce magic glasses that can help reduce the chance of being charmed/hypnoed by lost and help boost their charisma/ or perhaps give them their own beguiling charms on guards)

Glaz

Unfortunately, we can only interact with Nokkie right now.

jaredy1

Dragon star: (To Nokkie) is an honor to meet you. Let's give you a body that can defend itself. Let's hope you can save people as much as you can. Action: give your missing limbs a green scale dragon leg and arms. Perhaps, give it some sharp scale that can shoot out when Nokkie flex those limbs.(still keeping that green color to match his skin lol).

Dark627

Midnight Star: (to Nokkie) Oh the things we can show you, my dear apprentice. (action: make Nokkie experience the pleasure from any nearby Lost. open an eye on his forehead that makes him experience this euphoria from a first person perspective. (the hottest thing is someone feeling up their own body, oh heck) ) (intent: we finally get to fuck around with someone who is inconsequential for the story?! omg finally! I've been dying for more Lost action! LOVE the body horror sexual stuff!)

Neth Rusiki Azhti

HUNGRY STAR (To Nokkie): A seed of hope lies deep within the heart of Port Zero, Nokkie. It was made, in part, when we tried helping you. You and the fruit are forever linked. Only you can help it bloom. ACTION: Give Nokkie a vision, guide / help Nokkie to the corrupted cherry infused with Cherry's blood. He won't be able to help the Lost alone, but the power held within the fruit might be something that could. The proverbial Death Star blueprint as it were. INTENT: Without Cherry being there, having access to SOME physical part of him to cure corruption / suck it out of people is something we need. His blood is all we have in Port Zero. From a meta perspective, the corrupted fruit was made when our comments tried helping Nokkie and got redirected. It's only right he find it and use it to fight back the Lost.

CherryDad

Star of Lost Causes: "Oh my! Work!!! For lil' ol' me?! Alright, first lets get you -properly- armed!!!" *I wish to give Nokkie a functional arm prosthesis, themed around cracked crystals and/or tentacles, as per my star's aesthetic.* Star of Lost Causes: "Ok, now CHOP THAT LOST UP NOKKIE!!! I BELIEVE IN YOUUUUUU"

Hinner

Chance Star: Gotta give Ace a lil more oomph with all that Pazzaz. Action: Enhance the prosthetic by giving it and the user an increase in Crit Rate and Knockback Efficiency.

Rycanrok

Rainfall Star: Nokkie, whatever you want to do, do it. In this situation, the only wrong choice is standing still and waiting. So go with your heart!

Plague

Invention Star: I LOVE this guy!

Bryan Whiteman

Healing star: Nokkie You've got to find out if any one in Kurt's gaurd squad survived the initial invasion, They're the only ones who know where Kurt's Heat warding plants are stashed and they're dropping like flies. Start with the lapricorn, he should sense the danger ahead of time.

Hon3ybazzer

LITTLE JESTER MAN IS ADORABLE! 😩😩😩❤️❤️❤️

Nooget

DISCIPLINE STAR: (to Nokkie) GREETINGS, SMALL TERRIFIED GOBLIN, TO YOUR NEW LIFE AS OUR BEARER! HOPE YOU SURVIVE THE EXPERIENCE! To start with, in the absence of their Sergeant Major these troops have clearly becoming UNDISCIPLINED. Let's WHIP them back into shape! *summon scores of paddles and straps and applies them to the unorganized guardsmen, to literally spank the funk out of their system*

Manicorn

Performer's Star: Tch tch tch, Nokkie dear, that weapon surely won't help now in your state… Oho! Fellow stars if you may, we need to make a proper arm for this performer, huhuhu~ Action: Using my magic to make a metal prosthetic arm for the one armed goblin. Making him able to wield his weapon once more. Lastly putting a bow around the arm. Performer's Star: There's always time for a bow when it comes to a gift, huhuhu~

Jr7LuckyCoruki

Movie Star To: Nokkie "Here's your HUD. We'll give you visual updates on the map, along with Lost locations and key people and locations you need to get to in order to survive." Lights, Camera, Action!: Menelaus is a healer, right? There are comms units on these guys, I think. The little things that look like makeup kits that Cleric uses to communicate? I turn that into a Lost Radar system. If anyone wants to go find people, things, places, we can add them as quest markers or sub objectives in a constellation.

pastorp

Fisherman's Star: (Assisting Desires Star) "He's gonna stop his enemies with his dragon power! Dragon teeth, dragon pecs, sexy dragon fire. A real live wire! Vidorian Dragon!" Action: Dragon form also allows him to regain any lost limbs, perhaps to show off his sexy new hunky body for the Stars.

Becquerel

Peace Star: "Focus. You can't afford to get hit. Look at the way their body moves, slight changes in stances or shift in weight can help in predicting. Find an opening and... MOVE!" Action: Give Nokkie keen perception in order to help dodge any attacks or to help attack.

Monu

Desires star: To Nookie "He's cool! He's hotter than the frozen sun! He's young and fast he's a handsome one! People I'm not bragging! He's the Vidorian dragon!" Action: Transform Nokkie into a hung sexy beefcake dragon with head and facial hair. He also gain large wings capable of flying in the air at high speeds.

Blade G Shepherd

Advisor Star: "Oh dear. This is a pickle. Well! My compatriots seem to have the immediate danger handled, so... after you get out of this situation, I would recommend finding someone of authority. Or going someplace you know will serve as a shelter."

Protean

Nexus Star:(To Nokkie) Even with all these upgrades, you'll need to make you're combat much more unpredictable. Now start thinking with portals! *Aid Invention and Manipulation constellation by Granting Nokkie a Rift Crystal, install it in the prosthetic arm, so now he can create portals of his own.*

Gatlin(Alejandrostella)

Polar star: ice and blowing snow, defend the ring and barer, protect and keep safe. **ooc** looking to protect our good goblin friend from first attack/infection. Must help him survive!

innerDesign

CONTENTION STAR TO: Nokkie "The Cherry you need to plant to cure the Lost is likely locked away. If we need to access it, we may have to find Sue, the Head Broker, and convince her of the plan." Action: Constellation with Movie Star, placing a Marker on his HUD for where he needs to go, I'll plot the optimal route. Hopefully this is close enough to Hungry Star's comment to add him in.

jaredy1

Superior SUBSTANCE i love him and i guess hes a detective i hope he gets to be a business man like he wants but shits getting real and now i have to go reread the whole thing since we gone full ciircle excited to get back to port zero 10/10

Rob

SO CLOSE TO PROPERLY BRED WOLF!

jaredy1

Gunpowder Star: (To Nokkie) "Howdy pardner! Let's make sure those boots kick like a steer fulla gunpowder, ya hear?" Action: Amplify those rocket boots power and mobility to an explosive effect.

Synclonic

Hedonism Star: To Cleric Can you believe that Slut Wolf after you've shown him many of times who his real master is, I think it's time we Put him in his place permanently. Action: Provide Cleric with a leather Dom outfit & a Collar that will make whoever is wearing it loyal to him alone.

Himbo Barret

Iron Star: An upgrade is in order. Action: Aid Manipulation Star and give the prostetic arm a black iron circular sawblade.

Glitch the Iron

Gravitas Star: TO nokkie, apprentice: " Oh no... the atmosphere was good, but suddenly it's like this... Oh, I'm sorry. We're the star. You're in danger. You'll need both hands to escape. " action: Attach the other hand of nokkie. a gravity magic hand that A device that can pull or push the desired object.

jo

Iron Star: Finally some action! Nokkie, We would see you rise to this challenge! But first, some distance! Action: Black Iron chains to wrap up lost menalaus so nokkie can get to safety

Glitch the Iron

Such an incredible update! I really do love this!! Thank you so much for creating this for us. I've got too much on my plate to really add yet, but I'm sure I'll join in as I can. Lots of love!

Khorax

Manipulation star: Of all the useless toys, you're the only one I'm most fond of. Now that you're here, accept my offer—you don't want to become someone's plaything. Action: transform the axe into a prosthetic weapon for his missing arm. (look at me; I'm on the first page, ya HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO)

Good Boy Leroy

Unrelated thought- the way these two MoS individuals look it really does feel like I was right they are adherents of the moon God.

Robert Smith

Windchime Star: The Booty Cutie's alarm system... I'm sending the warnings to the Hunk and Himbo's ears, maybe they know how to help even at a distance! Or maybe they can shake down their no good Dad to learn more about the drug trade... Intent - amplify the sounds from Levi's device and carry them to Kurt and Wolf so they are informed on what is going on

Robert Smith

Oh CMON I thought we got all of them *sigh* I even complained. ARGH, not that would have mattered, we had no contact save MAYBE through cleric back there, and likely Curly or some ministry ass could just force in considering how it seems they can make themselves selectively visible and more.... Just... *sigh* should have not let this get worse AND we helped let this go by. At least had told Kurt.. ugh. I suppose asking Cleric, Kurt, or Dom is a lost cause. and I just finished.. wel... huh. Seems we're back at it again. Diagnosis, struggle of hidden things, need for communication, and a compromise to let in the badguys. We ourselves cannot cure the lost, only hope to contain them. Worse it seems even being a minor user puts you under a Minister's sway. which means.. yep Nokke did overdose but likely just the easiest for Curly to compromise. And with Brokers regularly in contact with those travelling.. makes sense so open to corruption both regular and this. *sigh* Nokke needs help. The East Gate Portuculis is where the signal is originating. So I have to ask...Menelaus was he od-ing of did he catch it from treating others... huh. I don't suppose anyone collected the fruit or seeds from the tree, in hopes of ... something So what do white numbers mean. They SAY the totem doesn't work but it does SOMETHING still. They needed or waited for an invite. So what we missing?

Rodney Talon

Paradox Star: Oh dear...you truly find yourself in a corner there....but why stop at the boots...why not let Nookie here experience what it would be like if they had followed a very different path for a bit: Action: Bestow Nookie with brief visions of them becoming a grand inventor before manifesting a full on magically robotic suit of armour (After the action) This will only last for a little while Nookie...use these new skills while they last before they fade back into the many fragments of timelines not taken.

Schrödingerz Lion

Memories Star: "Back here, after so long... Nokkie, I remember hearing in the past of a plot to assassinate Mayor Lonomia, and I'd bet the two are connected. You need to get to him, now!"

ItsHypnoFuckBees

Wolf and Cherry... so close yet so far. It makes sense though. Wolf is many things, but he is also consistent in an awareness that he was put in a position of responsibility, and his confused feelings shouldn't influence that. But his self hate already is, an assumption that Cherry wants to be bigger and better, and that his feelings are just holding him back. Interesting that BOTH of them seem to have had the red text there- Red's and Zenion's influence seems to be in the background of this scene, even subtly. Is this what Red wants? Poor Cherry though, now thinking this is his fault- when realistically Wolf is being the adult in this situation right now, and so should say something. So close yet so far... And then Cherry collapses- his condition definitively progressing in a negative direction. He seemed to shrink as well- I wonder what Levi saw that as? And now we get Levi and Superior Substance- Levi remains oddly heartless, though I maintain that is mostly camouflage for the doubts he has. Cute his blushing at Wolf though- must be slightly odd as a trans man to see a guy just... walk around with his vagina out haha. And now time to learn more about the Ring! Same material as Milo's lock - I do like that Superior Substance's nature as an artificial creature let's him do analysis like this. And the Ring is from the Ark- I think it must have something to do with whatever is left of the Eldritch Beings within it. And the way they both perceive Cherry- is this is a leftover from EYES' influence? Perhaps Cherry is less a person and more limitless potential? The resets having meant that he is, in many ways, transcending a creature if Vidora. The bodily breakdown could be caused by the fact there are so many overlapping versions of Cherry being maintained simultaneously within the Dungeon. I don't know, I want to think about this more. It would be interesting how these two perceived Milo, for comparison. And before we can learn what Levi thought of, it looks like the Lost Blood epidemic had been getting worse- and without Kurt, discipline in Port Zero has been falling apart- but why everywhere else? Interesting question regarding Vjekoslav - why was the Templar reporting to him if it appears he was already part Lost? The divine corruption may have gotten worse than expected?

Robert Smith

Velvet Star: "Nokkie! There's no time to explain. Put these on and RUN... Maybe there's time to explain. We are the Stars Of Fate, we WERE in Tristeria with Cherry, Dom and the others, but we're here now. Get comfortable, I have the feeling this will be a while." ACTION: Outfit change: Short velvet robes (so to not trip on them) and velvet slippers! It's the middle of the night, it's cold.

deersarecool

... ok sorry, but gotta say this update felt a bit more off than usual... Like I understand, you wanna tell a story, but jumping so randomly it just doesn't feel like a cyoa, and more of a story comic you wanna tell... I don't hate your works guys, nor I say it for a spotlight, but just feels rather too off-putting...

Xeralex

THANK YOU FOR THE BREEDING KINK SHENANIGANS EVEN IF THEY DIDNT GET TO FINISH

CherryDad

Shield Star: It's time for me to shine. Nokkie don't worry, we are here to help you. Stay calm, cause help is here. Action: Either create a personal shield to protect Nokkie or increase Nokkie's evasion ability to help him dodge incoming attack.

Jovik Darkson

(to cherry) freedom star: If you wanna know why wolf stopped, its cuz you look exactly like wolfs old boyfriend. Dont take it personally.

TET2

Invention Star: Hey Nokkie, bit of a pickle you're in here. Can I interest you in some rocket boots~~? ✨✨✨

Bryan Whiteman

BC has a fanmade and fanrun Discord server you can join! https://discord.gg/RCuP34SS

Neth Rusiki Azhti

Wolf has reached his final form, aggressively submissive and literally breedable

Bryan Whiteman


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