a dragon, burning - page 1 complete, page 2 sketch and wip
Added 2020-04-09 23:01:13 +0000 UTChere's page 1 of the comic done! as hinner suggested last week, i think i'd like for this series to be made of a lot of smaller adventures rather than a linear one. But , to get there i think we need to get at least one linear story done with how the three became what they are today.
so i recycled a picture i did of how wurm and pip really met for the first time here. Of course i'll retouch and finish it as the pic was just a sketch, but i thought it was a good enough scene to include here. at the time i finished that sketch i also started to doodle his first encounter with ninefingers , but eventually i decided not to go with it. Basically in that doodle ninefingers was seducing pip to get to his jewelry, and i wanted to have pip's dad (i really need a name for him btw XD) find them out
i scrapped the idea ultimately because i wanted for pip to be a bit more inexperienced with things of sexual nature. So now he just infiltrated the castle as a stable boy and got caught red handed while being serviced by the castle's blacksmith, and decided to reveal himself as a master thief once he caught wind of pip's mission. Also changed his hair a bit, wasn't really a fan of that weird upright hairdo ?
anyways that's it for this week! catch you later with more!
p.s. i also attached a bigger version of the finished first page to this post.
Comments
Oh gosh! Iβm excited to see what comes next!
Poringstar
2020-04-11 00:49:34 +0000 UTCI love them all!! Thanks for sharing your drawing process!!
Poringstar
2020-04-11 00:49:08 +0000 UTChey if you gotta be an evil overlord you gotta look the part XD also that's probably like, his dad's skull or something XD
Blazingcheeks
2020-04-10 10:43:24 +0000 UTCmalakim al haru is actually very cool! does it mean something specific?
Blazingcheeks
2020-04-10 10:42:42 +0000 UTChah yeah, good eye ! i'll make sure to change it in the final version !
Blazingcheeks
2020-04-10 10:41:36 +0000 UTCWoof, heavy
RexFurry
2020-04-10 06:46:18 +0000 UTCI think the orc's eyepatch in the panel where it's getting crushed and the close up right under it are different. These are some handsome boys
Newt
2020-04-10 05:39:08 +0000 UTCWow! The comic just started and we already introduced by the villain of the story XD! Also damn, i love those backgrounds!
Xeralex
2020-04-09 23:54:30 +0000 UTCK thought you called pip junior. So his dad has his name? Maybe a title he prefers? Soot? Ya know like Smaug Uhm. Ashley? Keeping with the cool name and cute or not and boastful common? Marshall? Because fire Smoke Khan? eulbat althaqab? Malakim al haru Pepe Pomello? Pepper Bruciare? Coal Tinder? Aeded Wick?
Rodney Talon
2020-04-09 23:52:24 +0000 UTCThe story is already looking cool as all heck! I'm happy you are diving into your passion project, cant wait to see more!
Yoked Coder
2020-04-09 23:29:46 +0000 UTCThat is one hell of an Ostentatious Evil Overlord Throne! I want one for my living room. π
Myneghon
2020-04-09 23:17:17 +0000 UTCSame!
2020-04-09 23:08:06 +0000 UTCWurm is pretty cute!
Lee Evergreen
2020-04-09 23:05:47 +0000 UTCCan't wait to see more of how these three got to be a thing. Looking good so far
Kageichi
2020-04-09 23:05:40 +0000 UTCThis is a nice first page π love the last panel showing them at either side.
Gysdaj
2020-04-09 23:04:20 +0000 UTC
