you don't have to be afraid

I'm terrified and sad for Keth, doing his best and being targeted, Roro and Chuck doing their best, even Jack, now that we know what they're after. I also since the start still hope the Beings won't be hurt or having to be expended just so everyone else can get by. Its exciting and scary, I can't wait to see and help out till the end

Yoked Coder

I'm really happy and excited with how this has been developing, they say good art can elicit emotional responses from an audience and gosh I've been hooked from the start. And by no means is this easy work to do week by week, full page comics, thank you so much for you're work BC. I'm excited and scared for these guys, since I've been rooting for their well being since the start, thank you for taking us on this journey

Yoked Coder

This is getting really bad. I’m considering taking a body and stepping in at this point. I’ll wait until next chapter since Cheeks’ said the chapter is ending and asked us not to make commands, but still I’m thinking about it.

Plague

Great work, BC! The whole story just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait to see how it will turn out in the end.

Archeus

I haven't been this obsessed with a serial drama since Buffy finished. The twists! The turns! The Zorcs! 🍆 Masterful writing and artistry as always, Mr Cheeks. 👍

Myneghon

Insane finale to the chapter! Poor Keith! Sorry too but I'm just going to be a complete lickarse for a sec and say it's honestly amazing how well Blazing takes in all these comments and requests writes a full story while keeping it on track with twists and solid prompts. This is all on top of pages with sexy great character designs and unique poses, you're an incredible artist and story teller BC Cant wait to comment more for the new chapter and help the smash squad out of this

PK Persona

Welp. What a way for things to go completely tits up at the very last moment. Although if theres an entire last chapter them who knows what can happen. I genuinely wouldn't mind BC just taking us for a ride for the last chapter

Newt

I dont think it'd be fair if I got in a command for this update and I think the Voxotaur, the Zorc King and the Drones are gonna stay standing around and do nothing for this update but just in case they DON'T just stand around, I guess the zorc king is gonna move towards the facility. nothing fancy.

Neth Rusiki Azhti

Noooooooo Keeeeeth, this is hot and all but MY BOYYYYYY

Shiny Skunk

Don't be weird about this

Crowbar

Why is it always your dream? Like no offense but this is a story controlled by ALL of us. WE "create and add" the story not just one single person. And those last few paragraphs are a tad hypocritical don't you think?, I mean you had no problem controlling the Zork king, changing things as you pleased or commanding the gorilla drone to go bang its self. Just saying... And as for the last paragraph, there's already is someone who's a personification of all our desires and decides the things we do... It's Blazingcheeks himself. He's got the last say as to what makes it in and how it ends up playing out. And he's done a freaking amazing job at it so far.

Muku

Let it be noted that there were two patrons, who shall not be named, that did this to Keth. I'll never forget this transgression committed against Keth.

Cid

Wow this was really good, [not from a villainous perspective specifically but, story telling wise] Really a big development forward and I'm really curious to see how things will play out.

Muku

Yeah man! That's the spirit! It's not over until the last monster Falls!

There was one guy who suggested to subjugate Keth to mind warping prison unless one of us answered a riddle, that and us telling him to teleport the Roo away as well as other things kinda put him at a disadvantage.

Had a super bad day today, seeing Keth just... becoming latex and his mask, the very thing i asked two weeks ago to see under slipping off, had me actually cry??? We just gotta work a little harder for that happy ending is all.

yo peeps, i think it's best if you guys avoid posting commands on this update now that i think about it. It is a end of chapter after all. Let's wait for the start of the next one!

Blazingcheeks

You INFATUATED FOOLS. I KNEW this would happen- all you did was make poor Keth a TARGET. HE WASN'T READY FOR THIS! BAH!

Star Ringer

Legion: Bad news about your missing clone. It seems to have been turned inside-out by the trip to the surface. Life is pain.

Oneiros

IF we still can say anything in this chapter (as in general we cannot really say during chapters' finale): Ok, Keth. I hope there's still hope. If you have one last shred of conscience and will, bring the body of the Ancient One to you. The meteoric alloy. Be involved by it and protect by it. Make it create a way out of finger's body and be free!

RPL

I love this story but we have to save the best monster in this story KETH

Soulfrost

TO LUCAS: Well it seems the ghosts are out of reach for now, but the Voxotaur could use some help. They have the power to control time in a limited capacity, and we could really use a reset button right now. Maybe try taking in the EYES THAT REMEMBER, cause the current body using it doesn't have the energy for time-bending right now. Around 3 minutes back should do the trick, hopefully...

Adam Even

Holy fuck, I'm blown away by this update, I'm speechless, such an epic way to end an amazing chapter, so SO satisfying. What happened to Keth makes me feel so sad, he's such a hero, but I think I feel even worse for Legion, that poor boy has been though dying once, I don't know if he can take this. Poor sobby demon boy. Do we post commands on this page? I know traditionally we don't on end chapter... but the disclaimer up top...

Crowbar

while we wait until we know how to proceed I just wanna say that while this update didnt turn out how I would have hoped, and I'm not happy with the outcome, I AM content with us getting more story! people were complaining that we got this huge amount of power and that nothing that would happen mattered because the story was over. and well, obviously that wasnt the case. we should have continued to try and push forwards towards helping the monsters out, if we actually care about the story in any way. I feel kind of vindicated by the fact that because people trying to start shit, shit did indeed hit the fan, and things are indeed about to end really really badly, and the story will in fact end in the worst way possible that we've been trying to avoid for the past year or so. What my DREAM is for this story, is for us to lose the final say on what we do with the monsters. I like the way we ask Keth to do things, and he decides whether he does them or not. The drones and the Voxotaur are kind of bad because they allow us to put our hands in the story, and more often than not we just break things rather than make them better. It'd be REALLY cool if we had a personification of us patrons to act for us and decide things for us... which is what I've been trying to push forwards for some time now.

Neth Rusiki Azhti

Can't the Truthsayer just teleport the Heart into itself? That's a pretty definitive game over.

AnotherMeekOne

i second this. so I guess we can't leave commands for the next update?

Neth Rusiki Azhti

I want to make the truthsayer and the bad drones see nothing but darkness. If possible I also want them to hear horrifying sounds so loud that they can't hear anything else around them. Except for Keth and Jack. Just make them unable to hear or see while they still under the truthsayer's control.

DePanda

Roro get the sword

Redeyesdrago

(Not gonna lie. I was worried for a moment. But after reading it all twice I think I have a plan to get the arm's to us. But someone beat Me to the punch. Lol so I'll be using my command to punish Monilius) To Monilius:*Spawn 3 Harvey's to Stop him from Going any farther* Monilius You absolute Bun We Thought we could trust you but it seems not. If you had just Ran Away That would have been one thing BUT TAKING OUR CURE IS UNFORGIVABLE!! So our Friends here are gonna Teach you what happens when you try to cross us. You'll either be Fucked or Beaten up that's up to fate to decide.

...Things look so dire right now, it would take a massive ass pull to turn this around. My boy Keth got turned into whatever he is now and I'm just speechless.

Cid

Sure. What can we do to help?

Redeyesdrago

I'm sure Keth is fine.

Redeyesdrago

Oops my bad😅? While I don’t mind a good corruptive ending(like one in strange flesh) it’s probably best I do read the whole thing first before making that decision, haha😅. Well if what you said is true my one vote probably won’t matter in the end.

ZooFan 123

Wow same thought as above heh

Retronicus

Holy shit!!!

Retronicus

((Holy SHIT)) ((So are we still making comments or are we supposed to wait until the start of the next chapter?))

WorgenRouge

Void are you still in there? Surely your perfection isnt taken over by a virus that easily right? Can you do anything to remove the connection the corrupt patrons have over the latex host's? It would be the most effective way to defeat them!

Yeah might want to go back and read before saying something like that. Everyone is trying to stop exactly that...

Roro quick the sword! It's made of the same material as the Sagitta facility, if you grab it it'll link and give the Arms that destroy a way to fuse with you. If you two work together you may be able to split Keth and Jack from the truthsayers goo!

Kageichi

I’m pretty new to this patreon, and while I do love the pictures of this story I’m not that exactly caught up with all the plot that much. So all I’m going to say is that, things are pretty hot and the giant latex monster should corrupt all of creations! (That’ll be my answer until I can get the time to read this from the beginning)

ZooFan 123

NOT a command.... I’ve never understood how this is works but just to know : Will you post something with the complete story? (Not easy to read the pictures on the phone)

WolfyNours