Wich one you like the most?
Added 2024-12-20 02:38:25 +0000 UTC
I changed the character's filling but I had my doubts about which one you like the most?
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That’s great, but just to clarify I didn’t just mean going back to change the previous pages. I meant how on page 6, Connor is solid black with the white line art, but flashes to white with black line art when Gregor puts his dick in him. This happens on page 5 as well. I would like it if you made a version where he stays solid black with the white line art. Or if you want to keep it as is( white with black lines) maybe commit to it further. Keep the white with black lines ,but have the background change from white to black. Like a full color/value inversion. I think it would help the panel pop more.
Ty
2024-12-20 04:10:20 +0000 UTCI'm thinking of changing the first pages and making his entire body black like the last pages.
maychin
2024-12-20 03:55:37 +0000 UTCIf I had one suggestion it would be maybe see if you could keep his coloring consistent. I would like to see him keep it during those moments of ectasty. When Gregor penetrates Connor in the last panel of page 6
Ty
2024-12-20 03:51:06 +0000 UTCI like black coloring with white line art, it’s pretty unique and visually striking.
Ty
2024-12-20 03:47:02 +0000 UTCIt's not that both are worked in different ways and I was curious which result you liked the most?
maychin
2024-12-20 02:49:34 +0000 UTCYou mean like: A) his main fur is losing it's color or B) he is keeping his youthful black sheen (aside from eyebrows and muzzle)
Moku-Moku
2024-12-20 02:46:07 +0000 UTC
