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The Son of Star and Snow Chapter 8 (The Bastard Who Would Not Bow)

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Vjollce

Chapter 8 now says it is missing when you click on the link.

Entilzar

I am absolutely loving this story. Jon is so easy to like and I am really enjoying his relationship with Arya and Robb. Real Siblings for him to take comfort from, no matter his bastard status. And, his dance with lady Alys was absolutely splendid, I loved reading their chnisty and when Lord Karstark showed up after the dance to speak to Jon, only to ask him about shipping made me laugh, well done dude. You're doing a phenomenal job so far with this story and I absolutely can't wait for more. Keep up the great work. This is easily my favourite story of yours.

ReeceM

Ya, after reading up to this point, this one is definitely not for me. It's kind of hilarious how much you have to contort the plot for Jon to find any relevance, through characters that ACTUALLY have relevance. Somehow, for no apparent reason, he can warg into a cat that belongs to his canon selves sister, literally on the other side of the world.... Ok..? I doubt I'll follow this story after this, but my main problem, that I mentioned in a previous chapter still exists. Jon being the son of Ned and Ashara completely ruins his relevance to the greater plot of the story, which now has to contort around Jon to force him into relevance. Mind you, if you don't plan on this story following the greater themes and plot of ASOIAF, then this comment means nothing, and I don't think I'd like it anyways. Lol

Hakai

Leave it to Robb to be the best brother, who isn’t blind to how his mother treats his brother and his future bannerman. Though I do acknowledge that Ned is in a difficult position, he also can’t just pretend he didn’t hear what Catelyn said to Jon, and needs to actually talk to Jon about it. Also with Theon saying that Catelyn has been playing the game before Jon was born, he is forgetting that the game she was “playing” was southern politics, not northern politics, which is entirely different.

Gabe Sarti


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