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48. Before the Storm

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"He was feeling reactionary and in an area THAT WAS out of his comfort zone." You need to break up this sentence to reduce confusion.

Christopher Ruge

To be honest I was sure how to handle this haha. He could have said something to the director, but they’re short staffed so I want Alex to be there anyway, that might be the excuse. Or he doesn’t say anything yet and goes ahead with the contingency of his own team knowing what he’s up to. Option three is I put more tension into the situation and he doesn’t have the opportunity to tell anyone at all, but I sort of did that in the celestial rift book one with him chasing Val into the rift.

OverXelous

Of course he doesn’t contact the director. I mean why let him know you have found the kidnappers? That just seems unreasonable. I wanna say it’s tropy and yet at the same time it’s just so much like Alex to not keep the boss informed.

Bob of Doom


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