Mind Games - Minor Edits to Chapter 39
Added 2025-09-18 01:50:48 +0000 UTCWhat it says on the tin, basically. Nothing huge changes about the chapter, but one piece of feedback said that it might read better if there was a reminder about who Ami was and what her relationship with Toga is, since she hadn't been in focus for a while.
Also, embarrassingly, my copy-pasta cut off the last two lines of the update. Probably a result of posting immediately after a writing binge and being a little bleary, my bad.
I also fixed one or two errors in the text while I was in there, so it should read smoother all around. But that's it. One paragraph up at the top and two extra lines down at the bottom. Should be pretty easy to pick out the changes.
You may now return to your regularly scheduled program.
Comments
The fact he needs a successor at all is in a flux currently considering he is a teen again
Axel Wate
2025-09-18 08:08:00 +0000 UTCNothing much, some people commented that it'd been so long that they might have forgotten who she was, so I added in a little bit of an introduction at the beginning.
Slayer Anderson
2025-09-18 07:44:28 +0000 UTCApologies but what exactly changed about Ami? I can't reread currently
Axel Wate
2025-09-18 07:35:13 +0000 UTCoh shit, the two extra lines at the end - Nighteye is pushing for Kirishima as All Might's successor???
Erin
2025-09-18 03:03:01 +0000 UTC
