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Red Riot - Chapter 27 - Red Grind

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Oh Midori should be a desk ninja haha…and not an important one in case someone tricks her

Astra

Lot of interesting bits here. Midori is cute, and it’s really sweet that her mother clearly realizes that every moment with her is now a gift as she absolutely should be dead. It’s a nice way to see the impact of what Matsu has done.

Raikor

Wow l really enjoy this story

G 21

I think the reason it was being considered rare at that point is almost the whole clan was dead, same as Yuki Clan. I think it's like Sharingan, where all members have the potential, and most of them does activate it, but never go beyond one or two tomoe

oakes

Hey I read all the previous chapters and caught up great story so far! So one thing I was curious about is the Kaguya member's bone manipulation powers, isn't that supposed to be a rare kekkei genkai? It seems like every Kaguya member has those powers and it would be nice to see it mentioned from the MC's perspective if it's different from canon (but I could be wrong about the kekkei genkai being 'rare' since it may be entirely fanon)

Intimidating Swan

Midori stated she had no talent for the Terumi secret jutsu or bloodline but I wonder if may be that no one taught her in the best way or they made assumptions that overlooked hidden potential. Its possible that she could be more open to revealing some Terumi jutsu to Matsu whose chakra sense may be good to help guide her.

Tay Rob

Matsu does his best to hide his full moveset and Midori just tells everything to her mother. I can't!*laughs*

Amagendor

Wow, it interesting what having just one Hyuga eye can accomplish....hope Matsu keeps that one he decided to keep for himself hidden and dosen't need to use it for awhile as leadership gonna be pissed as hell he kept that eye

War sage

She's definitely going the brawler route. Gonna be the next gate user for sure, if her chakra control gets good enough maybe she'll learn Matsu's Tsunade punch and string armor in the distant future, but i feel less sure about that.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

Teaching them the Rasengan is kinda crazy in a good way.

Izaya Silman

So good. Need this more than once a month.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

She's tall and muscular and still growing. Either she'll go the brawler route and become a taijutsu monster or subvert expectations and be a nin/genjutsu monster

Jericho Rising

Tokubetsu jonin n 2 churning? Definitely serious.

Jericho Rising

Early systems tend to have slow developments is all. Still better than wasted resources.

Jericho Rising

See the problem is I'm equally drawn to both. Unfortunately the other projects are what get sideshafted by these two being so darn great.

Jericho Rising

Those kids desperately need to be told they're better off mudanin than dead like everyone in previous years. Maybe midoris mother will spill after a few more pointed questions.

Jericho Rising

I got the impression the mom was subtly interrogating Midori for info on Matsu. I assumed it was on the clan head’s orders, because of the line about it not being a good idea to have him over for dinner.

Anonykor

I always count the days till the next chapter. Sensei Matsu is awesome.

Skinnybonz

I really think that if you do the popularity strawpoll again RR would win against HE, if not at least a draw

Konan2020

And Gai. There's just something about quirky ninjas that gives them an edge in the later powerlevels.

White Neko Knight

I get the same feeling. She’s got that energy for really. Kinda reminds me of Luffy.

Based_Bass

Need more

HeavenlyReader23

Too bad most of those mudanin will be used as expendable Canon fodder and not given a chance to rise up the ranks.

Jairo Enrique Quevedo

glad that shone through. Sometimes with Kiri being so terrible I feel like I need moments like this to show that there is good in Kiri. It just can't shine through honestly or openly lest it be derieded and exploited.

Viva01

Man, love both Midori and Rei. I want to see more of them!

Wildebranch

Why wasn't Han conscripted with the other civilian kids into Matsu's training program in the academy?

Fran

I have to hand it to Gengetsu, the mudanin system could use some work, but it is ingenious conceptually for a military dictatorship. Since the alternative was just killing them off (which was just a waste of personnel) it is a preferred alternative. Align some incentives for the teachers to get the 'mundanin' up to par, and you have the basis for a highly effective system that forces even your cadets to put in the absolute maximum effort when training in the academy. It's for sure evil, but I could see how it works. Like military hazing / group punishment, it's morally concerning, but psychologically sound for getting results.

nugitoBambino

Agreed. The interplay between the... straightforward, let's call it, midori and her mother picking up the subtleties around her situation and being fearful but cautiously hopefully is just fantastically done. Also, all the little details show how much her mother loves her - cooking her favorite foods, sleeping closer to her, brushing her hair. It's just a beautifully described scene with a lot of depth.

nugitoBambino

Iwa on the other side of the continent? Can't be something small

Petrox

You will feel the cliffhanger pain you evil....

Blahful

The entire sequence with Midori and her Mother was beautiful.

Daniel Ryan

Midori is going to end up as one of those powerful shinobi that breaks common sense. I wouldn't be surprised if she ended up as one of his key supporters down the line.

White Neko Knight

I wish this updated more often, its so good!

Carter


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