Hard Enough - Chapter 134 - Brock v Will part 4 - The Finale
Added 2023-07-05 19:00:04 +0000 UTCThe explosion happened so quickly that I only had time to shout “Pr—” before it engulfed Titan and the battlefield.
In front of me, the barriers that protected the trainers flared into life before glowing red ominously. The stadium barriers glowed orange before slowly filtering back. The crowd gasped and screamed in shock before calming down. Then people began to shout their outrage.
I scowled in Will’s direction but couldn’t see him due to the smoke that still wafted over the battlefield.
“Boo that man!” shouted someone in the crowd, which made me crack a smile as people stood and booed Will.
He merely huffed. “Is turn about not fair play? Gym Leader Brock used a similar tactic against Champion Lance’s Charizard.”
This line of logic didn’t win him any fans from the crowd. His own loyalists seemed to be getting into a few scuffles with others around them, but I could see Jackson was already racing to break up the fight. Oddly, Brawly was at his side, and the pair quickly calmed things down as I turned my attention to the field.
While the dust was fading away, a sandstorm was building. I smirked as a rumbling growl echoed, heralding that my Ace wasn’t out of the fight. If anything he was committed and deadly serious now.
The storm grew again, and then a large body tumbled out as though it had been tossed. Exeggutor flopped like a rag doll, its fronds singed, and its heads all lolled limply on short necks.
Dennis raised his flag. “Exeggutor is unable to battle! The match is now three to three!”
That got the crowd to stop booing. They took up a cheer quickly. “Ti-tan! Ti-tan!”
Rachel stood at the front of the crowd with a megaphone raised to her mouth leading the cheers.
I gave them a nod of appreciation and turned my attention back to Will.
Alright, he had Slowking, Alakazam, and Jynx left; who would he send out next? I noted that the Psychic Terrain had dissipated. Apparently, explosions were able to destroy terrain moves like that.
It also got rid of the Stealth Rocks Gawain had left behind. As Will considered his best option, a Sandstorm built up on the battlefield, forcing Will to act quickly.
“Go Alakazam!” shouted Will, interrupting the celebrations.
The Ace of Will’s team once again appeared, but this time he did so in the middle section. With Titan standing in the rear section of Will’s side of the field, that was the widest space that Will could get for his pokemon when sending him out.
Not unless he wanted to give me a close engagement. It was either that or give me time that I would use to have Titan slowly walk back to my side of the field. All while he passively created a proper Sandstorm.
“Miracle Eye!” said Will, getting off the much-needed move to allow direct damage with Psychic moves.
“Stone Edge!” I replied. A huge slab of rock rose and launched itself at Alakazam at ballistic speeds. Just before it could hit, Alakazam used Teleport.
I huffed in annoyance as Alakazam appeared before me, increasing the distance that Titan had to cross. Will was giving his pokemon as much space as he could, obviously leery of Titan’s Dark Pulse.
I glowered down at Alakazam as it waved a spoon cheekily at Titan.
Titan snarled as I considered my options. I needed to saturate the field to stop Alakazam from escaping with Teleport. A taller task than usual thanks to Will getting off another Psychic Terrain with his Slowking’s sacrifice play.
I’d need to break the field with another Sandstorm, which would take time, or I’d need to use Dark Pulse a lot.
“Walk forward and hold the DP Titan!” I said. He nodded and marched forward, his form building up dark energy to the point where it started wafting off him like flames as he advanced. His steps left black footprints that burned into the Psychic Terrain.
“Use Psybeam,” Will said.
I blinked in surprise; that move would see Alakazam commit to a stationary attack and… I narrowed my eyes. Will hadn’t shown himself to be a fool. He had set trap after trap with his moves. He was setting up for a Disable I was sure of it. Perhaps to trip Titan up if he tried for Giga Impact.
“Discharge your Dark Pulse into it,” I ordered, causing Titan to erupt.
His Dark Pulse slammed into the oncoming attack and washed it away.
Titan snorted in contempt at the Alakazam, and the Alakazam bristled.
“Again!” ordered Will, now more confident in his option to hit from afar with his pokemon, having it fire off another Psybeam.
“Dig dip,” I said. Titan responded to the order by sinking shallowly into the ground and popping up slightly to the side.
“Telekinesis,” Will said, only instead of having the move target his own pokemon a glow appeared around Titan.
“Dark Pulse!” I ordered, breaking the telekinetic grip on Titan instantly.
“Rock Throw,” I said quickly, looking to capitalise on the failed move from Alakazam.
Titan to use the much less powerful rock move that usually built up until a pokemon learnt Stone Edge. It was also faster to send out with Titan used to the heavier strain of Stone Edge. Almost a hundred small-sized rocks rose up and fired off at the now levitating Alakazam.
I wasn’t surprised when a Psychic was the answer to deny it. It raised its spoons and its entire body gained a blue glow before the entire barrage of rocks slowed before stopping. During the time it took for Alakazam to control the rocks, however, there was an opportunity.
“Rock Tomb!” I barked at Titan. Titan smirked and stomped his foot.
“Avoid it!” Will barked, making Alakazam drop the hundreds of rocks about the battlefield as his pokemon instead focused on hovering up.
It barely avoided having its leg locked into the ground, as instead a trio of stones snapped onto its leg. It cried out before clashing its spoons together in annoyance.
My eyes locked onto the three stones that formed a small trailing link, like a chain that dragged on the ground despite Alakazam’s levitation trick.
Perfect.
“Sandstorm,” I ordered, knowing fully what was about to play out.
Will straightened, gaining a look of anticipation. “Recover,” he ordered as the sands whipped up properly and began to cloud the battlefield.
I didn’t say anything, instead, I focused on the energy I was sharing with Titan. I wasn’t able to give orders through our bond just yet, but I knew Titan could be trusted to know what to do now.
His large form vanished into the Sandstorm, at home in the whipping winds and low visibility. I continued to remain silent.
“Alakazam! Use Psychic Terrain!” Will ordered. He must have been hoping to clear the field from Titan’s Sandstorm.
Long seconds ticked by, and then a box of psychic energy erupted, sweeping away the Sandstorm. Will’s smirk flashed toward me, only to falter when he realised Titan wasn’t in sight.
“What? No!” he said right as Titan erupted from beneath Alakazam to Crunch into Alakazam’s leg.
Titan rose up with a feral grin that matched my own. Then, without prompting, he whipped his head back and forth to slam Alakazam into the ground repeatedly.
“Nooo!” Will screamed. “Focus Blast! NOW!” he roared in desperation.
Alakazam glowed blue for a moment, and Titan paused at the tension only to growl and bite down harder.
I thought I heard a crack for a moment, only for Alakazam’s hand to shoot out and into Titan’s face.
From point-blank range, Alakazam unleashed a powerful blast of energy that slammed into Titan causing him to buckle and groan.
In doing so, he released Alakazam, and the pokemon scrambled back fearfully to escape Titan.
I grimaced. That had been a super-effective move, and it had rattled Titan.
“DP!” I ordered, knowing that Alakazam was still within range.
“Tel- Focus Blast again!” Will said, almost retreating before deciding to commit.
Titan erupted in a blast of dark energy, only to be met by a pulse of fighting-type energy that blew through the Dark Pulse and knocked Titan back. Titan tottered, and my heart sank.
He’d taken a Self Destruct to the face and two Focus Blasts, and it was just enough to see him fall.
He hit the ground, and I hurt watching him fight to keep his eyes open. I could feel the energy I was feeding him flickering as the connection faltered before fading as his energy faded and his eyes shut in defeat.
I raised his greatball and returned him, feeling a self-consuming darkness start to take over.
Will had come into this match prepared to face me. He’d had a multitude of strategies, horrible, no good, cheap strategies perhaps, but strategies nonetheless. And he was wearing me down.
I looked at his Alakazam only to realise it wasn’t standing properly. I frowned as I saw blood trickling down its leg. I flicked my gaze up to Will, but he merely glared back, unwilling to recall the rather obviously injured pokemon.
Ah, right. He’d ordered that with some of his scouting trainers, hadn’t he?
I selected my next pokeball as Dennis called out the score as three to four.
I tried pulling on my rock energy, only to find myself scraping the bottom of a proverbial barrel.
Shit. I’d been pushing it with all the pokemon I’d been empowering, hadn’t I?
Dark energy came easily, but right now it was threatening to take hold and have me give up.
I worked my jaw back and forth, I hadn’t been able to finish up the link that would allow Jorm to mega evolve, but in the future, if I planned to use it, I would either need to use it earlier or be very sparing in linking and empowering my pokemon.
Still, using that energy kept a lot of my pokemon in the fight longer than they would have otherwise lasted.
No, stop.
I needed to reset.
I slammed my hands together and closed out the world.
Forget the score.
Forget everything that Will had done.
Forget the world and just focus on my hands and the space in front of me.
I broke my hands apart and inhaled.
And clarity returned to me. The world expanded, and I knew I needed to pick myself up and fight.
“Let’s go Brock!” shouted Yolanda from the stands.
“Come on!” “You can do it!” “Bring it home!” The crowd started to chant their own support, and I felt myself buoyed upward as Will scowled.
I selected my next pokeball and hurled it out. “Go Jormungandr!” I said releasing my second last pokemon, but also the best option I had against Alakazam. Especially with how damaged Shrek must have been holding back the Exeggutor until Gawain could fight it off.
I ran through a number of methods in my head and considered the field. It was torn up in a lot of different areas and loosened. That would help with how much easier moves like Stone Edge could be.
“Alakazam! Recover!” shouted Will gleefully. The crowd found something new to boo Will over, and I held in a scowl.
“Stone Edge,” I ordered in reply, not allowing myself to stop and fall into despair.
Alakazam shone slightly as energy swept through him to recover the damage from the earlier match with Titan. Alakazam stood only to wince as its left leg touched the ground.
Jorm slapped his tail, and a few large stones rose up before launching themselves straight at Alakazam as he groaned with pain. The pokemon brandished his spoons, and I watched as the boulders were controlled with Psychic once more.
“Dig dip into the ground and come up with Rock Tomb,” I said, deciding to hammer at Alakazam’s weak point.
Jorm buried himself instead of enduring or attempting another exchange of attacks.
Thanks to the Recover and the Psychic against the Stone Edge, Will hadn’t yet moved his pokemon.
More notably, he hadn’t moved his Alakazam out of the region that Titan had blown up with his last Dark Pulse.
Jorm popped up and glared at Alakazam as rocks shot up from the ground and snapped around Alakazam’s legs.
Alakazam cried out in pain as the same leg Titan had brutalised earlier was struck. I allowed myself a small smile.
“Use Psychic! Lift that giant snake!” Will ordered.
His Alakazam raised its spoons angrily, and psychic energy built up around Jormungandr, lifting him slowly into the air. I could see him writhing in pain as Alakazam applied pressure to him.
He wouldn’t have been able to do this with Knight, or Titan thanks to their Dark Pulse. I chomped my teeth together before deciding to bet on Jorm.
“Jorm! Call up your dark energy like you want to use Crunch, but hold it!” Jorm growled through the pain and dark energy building up around his head. “Hold it!” I shouted, “Hold it! Now Roar and release it!” I shouted.
Jormungandr roared, and a small pulse of dark energy rippled out of him, causing the Psychic hold to fade.
I punched the air as he landed to glower across at Alakazam, who was annoyed with Jorm having escaped his clutches. I nodded. It was an ad-hoc way to teach Dark Pulse; I had barely gotten started on it with Jorm in the lead-up to this match as special attacks weren’t as strong for him as physical moves like Crunch and his new combination move.
“Dragonsbreath!” I shouted, causing Jorm to unleash a torrent of blue fire.
“Teleport!” shouted Will only to hiss as the move failed due to the Rock Tomb and the Dark Pulse from earlier in the match.
I blinked in surprise at Will not using Psychic for this.
I’d been expecting him to try and control it like I’d seen Sabrina do a number of times with her pokemon. Yes, she found it tougher to manage than Flamethrower or Thunder but she could still do it… Perhaps Will couldn’t? Dragonsbreath washed over Alakazam.
By now it was starting to be glaringly obvious that Sabrina and Will were very different in how they practised and used their Psychic prowess.
“Again!” I said to Jorm, more than happy to punish Alakazam.
“Focus Blast!” Will screamed, making my pokemon break off his own attack to weave his body like a snake, avoiding the attack perfectly.
This gave Will time to break off the Rock Tomb trapping his pokemon; once again, however, an anklet of rock surrounded his pokemon’s leg weighing it down and occasionally crumbling…
“Close in and end it Alakazam!” Will shouted, leaning forward with a flourish.
“Iron Tail!” I said as his pokemon charged forward in close, fist reared back, only for Jorm to meet him with a rising Iron Tail that caught him in the side and slammed him, sending him sailing away.
He still got off the Focus Blast however, causing Jorm to fall back as the super-effective move seemed to put him down.
“Yes!” Will cried, raising his hands for applause only for most of the crowd to boo him.
I crossed my arms and eyed Jorm. He cracked open his eye and sneakily glanced at me. I eyed the distance between Jorm and Alakazam. It was too far to make a sneak strike, but I had other options.
I nodded. “Dig down and lick your wounds,” I said, cutting through Will’s early celebration as Jorm hurled himself into the ground.
“Shit!” Will cried out. “Focus Blast into the ground!” he ordered to his Alakazam, only for it to do nothing but crater the ground.
Will cursed and furrowed his brow in thought, only to hiss in annoyance as his eyes caught sight of the trailing chain of Rock underneath his pokemon. “Alakazam hover!” When that caused some of the rock to break off will clicked his tongue in annoyance.
“Tch! Return!” he ordered returning his Alakazam to his pokeball after inspecting the ground and not seeing Jormungandr coming up.
There was a short pause as Will waited, but nothing popped back up. Will scowled at me, but I merely smiled enigmatically.
“Go… Slowking,” Will said, sending out his pokemon.
“Slooooooooooooooooooow,” said the pokemon as it yawned. I frowned, noticing straight away that it was, if anything, slightly better off than it had been when it was sent into the pokeball.
That drew a frown. Had Will used a potion, or was this an ability of Slowking at play?
“Sleep Talk,” I said, not willing to wait and give Will any more time.
Will twitched; he must have known what that move meant, as in the next moment Jormungandr shot out of the ground and loomed over Slowking, only to then disgorge a huge gout of blue flame.
I grinned. Damn, it was nice getting to pull off that combination! I could see why Lance wanted to copy that flaming chicken so much now.
Slowking barely got a barrier raised in time to block the attack while Will scowled.
Jormungandr blinked and shook himself, returning to being fully awake. Its eyes shot to its foe, and he growled as he realised that Alakazam was no longer before him.
I didn’t let it bother me. “Dark Pulse,” I said with relish, knowing my pokemon was fully capable of it now.
“Water Gun!” Will ordered, even as Jorm ignited dark energy. I could feel everyone in the crowd draw in a breath of anticipation as they leaned forward. Jormungandr exploded into his Dark Pulse, roaring as he’d learned to explode the darkness out.
Slowking stumbled, only to yawn and fire out a final blast of water that splashed over Jorm, knocking him back and causing him to groan and fall back. He shook himself off, however, and rose. On the other side, Slowking toppled, and I punched the air.
“That’s it, Jorm! Let’s go!” I shouted, causing the rest of the crowd to rise up with me and cheer. The air surged with the sudden lift in mood and I felt my dark mood vanish as I saw the way forward.
I could do this.
I felt my own heart pounding furiously as everyone realised that with that, I’d reclaimed the lead with two pokemon left to Will’s final in Jynx.
Will didn’t let me rest, though, as he returned his pokemon quickly and sent out Jynx. “Focus Blast!” he snapped out, causing his Jynx to raise its webbed hand and punch forward.
“Protect!” I shouted. Jorm barely got off the Protect. The cheers that had started to come vanished in the face of the rapid exchange of moves. I felt myself leaning forward, trying to anticipate what would happen next.
My heart thundered as I inspected the battlefield. Both pokemon must have been on their last legs.
“Future Sight!” Will ordered as his pokemon waited. I swallowed and watched as the Protect began to break apart.
Just as Jorm’s large, rocky head was visible, I punched a fist forward. “Rock Throw!” I cried out, hoping to get out a fast, if weaker, move against Jynx.
“Psychic!” Will screamed as the rocks shot forward. Jynx raised its hands, and I scowled as the entire wave of rocks was held in place. Jynx leered and swept her hand back, hammering Jorm with his own rocks.
“Di—” I started to say, only for a lash of psychic energy to come into play and hammer Jorm into the ground. He toppled with a low groan before falling silent.
I exhaled and shook my head. Damn it, we’d been close there. Will shifted, and I saw his throat bobble. He must have known how close it was given how nervous he looked.
I returned Jorm, and looked at his pokeball. “You did great out there, buddy,” I said to him before putting his pokeball away.
I then raised my last hope with Shrek’s ultraball.
Five to five. Both of us had used all of our pokemon.
Both pokemon were on their last legs with what they’d had to face.
I was frankly amazed that Jynx had been able to last as long as it had with Gawain hammering it earlier. I hadn’t been expecting it to be strong enough to to defend itself with Psychic like it had
All I needed was a final push.
“Go Shrek!” I bellowed, hurling out my last pokemon.
“Swampert!” Shrek bellowed as he landed; unlike with Jorm, there was still a sizeable gap between the two pokemon.
I drew what I had from my own energy reserves, struggling to keep them neutrally aligned. Swampert perked up at the minuscule amount of energy and croaked aggressively. It must have helped a little, as he seemed ready to throw down.
Jynx raised her hand in readiness, and I decided to force the issue.
“Surf!” I ordered knowing that I needed to get Shrek in close where he was strongest.
“Future Sight!” Will ordered. His pokemon put a hand to its forehead.
I clenched my teeth, wondering if I couldn’t have made the most of that hesitation on his part. I shook off my dark thoughts and instead committed myself as Shrek rode the wave.
“Ice Beam!” Will ordered as the wave surged forth.
The beam lanced out and froze the front wave at the halfway point, causing it to buckle and collapse under its own weight. It wouldn’t reach Jynx.
But that hadn’t been the goal; it was merely to close with her.
“Leap!” I shouted to Shrek, causing him to hurl himself up a fist raised in readiness.
“Psychic! Catch it!” Will bellowed, his hand upraised, and his eyes glowing as his pokemon copied him. Psychic force grasped Shrek and held him in the air, where he struggled.
Part of me wanted to cry foul, but I knew if I hesitated and waited for an official ruling, the match would be lost.
Instead, I decided to act. I’d just have to trust that Hypnotoad would have shown off enough against her mate that Shrek would have picked up a few things.
“Darkest Lariat!” I roared, trying to will it into being.
“SWAMPERT!” shouted Shrek as the psychic energy built up around him only to unravel as dark energy blew out of him. He began to spin through the air, his fists circling as he continued his descent onto Jynx.
Jynx reared back and tried to hop out of danger. Shrek landed and cried out as a psychic bolt of energy slammed into his side, causing him to falter.
Despite this, he twisted limply, and I could only watch as he used the momentum from Future Sight to throw himself into Jynx, his fist slamming home into her throat once again.
Jynx squawked in shock and pain before being knocked flying as the Darkest Lariat carried through, hurling her out of the field.
She tumbled end over end before falling to the ground limp.
“GET UP!” screamed Will to his pokemon.
I looked at Shrek and found him face down and out of energy.
“Get up!” roared Will, but his pokemon remained unresponsive. Will put one hand to his forehead and held the other out.
“Challenger Will! The pokemon can only return to the field and stand under its own power to be considered battle ready!” Dennis suddenly said sternly.
Will twitched in annoyance and shot him what appeared to be a murderous look, but he dropped his hands.
Dennis inspected both pokemon. Then he licked his lips and swallowed as he raised his hand and made a chopping action with his fingers spread wide. At the end of each chop, another finger dropped. Behind him, a countdown flashed out on the screen.
I licked my lips, knowing in my heart that Shrek had nothing left in the tank. I felt at my own reserves, knowing that I too had nothing else to commit.
I felt my vision darken, and I clenched my teeth and inhaled sharply, knowing I’d dug deeper than I ever had to etch out what I could.
I could only watch as Will cried for his pokemon to stand as Dennis counted down.
Three. The Jynx twitched and shuddered.
Two. It rolled onto its face and glared up at Shrek, who lay on his side.
One. Jynx collapsed fully.
“Both pokemon are unable to battle! This match between Will and Brock is therefore ruled a draw!” Dennis shouted.
I felt a wave of exhaustion run through me. I wanted to growl at the end result. Instead, I focused on something small. Instead of raging at the result, I smiled at the aghast look on Will’s face. It was something small, but it helped.
If this hadn’t been a draw, I might have enjoyed it more, but as it was I wasn’t sure I could even enjoy that result. That match lacked so much of what I enjoyed about pokemon matches.
It wasn’t a loss but… I couldn’t help but feel like it was in my heart.
A draw.
That hadn’t been the result I wanted. I wanted to crush Will, smash him with my team and show the world that he was nothing more than an up-jumped thug.
Instead, the world would consider us equals on technicalities and rules lawyering.
The podiums descended, and I felt myself shudder at the movement. I raised Shrek’s Ultraball and returned him.
I then looked over to Will and found him staring at me. He didn’t move from his podium.
This was supposed to be the part where we walked across and shook each other's hands.
Neither of us made a move to do so.
A stir went through the crowd. They weren’t surprised; they knew something was going on here.
They knew there would be bad blood with this fight playing out like it had, but I don’t think one of them realised the depth of how much I loathed Will in that moment. Movement from my family made me grimace. I saw Suzie lowering her banner and looking at me, trying to understand what was going on.
I held in a sigh, straightening my back. I would need to be the bigger man and show my family the right way to do things.
I’d just have to ignore the overwhelming urge to sucker punch Will.
I marched across the ruined battlefield, ignoring the various points where my pokemon had fallen to cheap tricks. I raised a hand, and he stared at it for a long moment.
Then he clasped his hand in mine.
I clenched his hand as hard as I could and was pleased to see him flinch and whimper.
I leaned in close. “You’re a cheap piece of work, you know that? I want you to know that you will never belong as one of the best in the League,” I whispered to him.
“That isn’t up to you!” he hissed. “And I might not have won, but I’ve shown that I’m just as good!” He snarled as he straightened.
“You call this a win?” I said, with a raised eyebrow.
Will’s lips twitched downward before he sniffed. “I will make it work for me. It isn’t a loss, Gym Leader.” He ripped his hand out of my grasp and turned to storm off.
I glared at his back, I wasn’t done with him, not by half. Some part of me knew I couldn’t simply let him walk away.
“I’m going to want a rematch!” I said loudly. My words carried through the entire arena.
He faltered, and I felt a warmth in my heart knowing he was scared.
The crowd stirred, having heard my declaration. This wasn’t the Gym circuit after all, and I wasn’t just bound here despite the perception of being locked to Pewter. I could leave.
Will remained quiet for a long moment.
He sniffed and flicked his cape theatrically. “We’ll have to see about that! You might not be worth my time soon enough!” he said, readopting his aloof persona. He walked towards the group of people that had been cheering for him the entire match.
They welcomed him like he’d just won instead of being fought to a draw.
I turned to my own, fans. I shot them a weak smile, and they rose as one to roar their approval. It washed over me. I didn’t feel like their champion. I felt like a guy who had just barely not lost. That might have been enough for them, but it sickened me. Still, I had to be an example.
I licked my lips and straightened my spine. I then noticed that a number of people were eyeing the group that had welcomed Will. With the looks and gestures being exchanged, there was a risk a fight might break out—not an orderly, sanctioned fight but a melee.
I turned and glanced over at the group closest to Will. If this wasn’t my gym, I might just let the feelings fester. It looked like the crowd was one spark away from hurling more than just abuse at Will.
I gestured to Dennis, and he tossed me a microphone that I fumbled before raising to my mouth. I waved to get the crowd’s attention and then tapped the microphone. “Uhh testing, testing one-two? This thing on?” I said playing up the clueless teen as the speakers boomed. The crowd focused on me.
“Well, that certainly wasn’t how we expected this match to go! But it was a tough battle, that was for sure wasn’t it?” I said, rubbing the back of my head and forcing myself to keep smiling.
“I’d like to thank everyone for their support here today! We’ve come a long way since I began as Gym Leader and much of that progress starts from people like yourselves that help support us!”
I made a show of clapping my hands. I wanted to rage or throw up. Or just lay down and have a nap I was that tired. I just wanted today to be over. Maybe tomorrow I’d wake up and I’d learn today was just a dream?
Sadly, that wasn’t how life worked. I knew I just wanted distance from this event. Time and space were the usual answers, and with this being my home, time would be my only option.
Despite my feelings on the matter, I couldn’t act out. Not here, not now. I had to be an adult. My eyes landed on Flint, who was watching me with the rest of my family, and I felt old feelings and memories stirring within me.
I needed to do what was right.
This moment felt so similar to back then… When I’d worked out that despite all my efforts, he’d still walked out on us. All my expectations and efforts… only to come up short.
I shook my head and considered what else I needed to do.
“I’d also like to extend a round of thanks to my staff; they put in a lot of work. Rachel, thanks for hyping up the match!” This got some heartfelt cheers, with Rachel waving to the crowd and shooting me a nod. Understanding what I was doing, she flicked her eyes to the referee’s podium, and I nodded.
“I’d also like to thank Dennis. His job today was much harder than a lot of others today. He had to remain impartial in a situation that I’m sure many of us would have struggled with. Dennis showed that he is a man of integrity, and I salute him for that. Please give him a round of applause.” I led the clap and was glad to hear that the applause drowned out the few people still annoyed enough to shout at him.
He smiled weakly at me and nodded in thanks. I thumped my chest twice with a fist and pointed at him, causing him to smile a bit easier. I turned back to the crowd and made some other comments.
“Thank you once again for your support today! I’ll turn it over to our MC Rachel, to see you home! Good night, folks!” I said, switching off the microphone and walking away.
“Gym Leader Brock! Do you think this match was a valid reflection of your skill!?” shouted one reporter who had raced to the edge of the fencing. Others were quickly at their side, microphones poised in attack position.
Questions were being hurled out so quickly that it became a wave of undecipherable noise.
I waved my hand and shook my head. “No comment; I need to see to my pokemon,” I said, delaying the issue of giving a press conference to future Brock. Instead, I marched into the medical bay.
It felt like I was retreating to lick my wounds, and in a way, I was.
I stared at the injured forms of Tide, and Knight. I handed off the other pokeballs to Chansey, just barely avoiding her grabbing me. I waved her off and instead marched out the back to the reserve.
I marched up to the closest boulder that was free of any pokemon and put my fist to it. I wanted to punch it to smithereens.
But I was just too damn tired.
I instead sat against it, feeling old in a way I hadn’t for years. Not since that punk kid came in and challenged me with extremely powerful pokemon. I’d lost my starting Onix that day. I rubbed my face and sighed.
When I finished rubbing my face, I wasn’t surprised to find Sabrina standing close. “Hey Sabrina,” I said tiredly.
She nodded. “You did well, Brock. Despite Will’s tactics, scouting, and extremely dishonourable methods, you clawed your way back into the fight.”
I nodded, intellectually able to accept the words even as my heart rejected them. “Yeah...” I said.
Sabrina tilted her head. “You don’t feel that way, though, do you?”
I smiled, pleased, despite myself, that she understood me.
I shook my head. “No, I don’t think I can feel that way.” I ran a hand through my hair, dislodging some rocks and dust I hadn’t noticed that got into it during the fight. “I should have won… I should have been better. I had so many chances.”
She stepped closer. “You were incredible out there.” She knelt down and cupped my face.
“For all intents and purposes, I lost. Will’s not going to—” I said, looking away from her only to be cut off.
“No!” she said, forcing me to look at her. “He is not going to slip away from you. You are not going to let him. You said it yourself! He will have to have a rematch with you! The crowd will expect it with you saying it how you did.”
I blinked. Right, I had said that. Hadn’t I? I blinked, I must be more tired than I thought. Damn, my head was feeling slow.
Sabrina tapped my cheek to restore my focus. “And this battle didn’t just end as a win or a loss, Brock. It has not cast you down. There is no question in the minds of the people that matter who is the better trainer. The manner in which you fight matters, you told me that years ago, remember?”
I chuckled. “It’s hard dating a girl so smart she remembers everything you say enough to use it against you,” I said in mock defeat.
Sabrina giggled, “It helped that you sometimes said very wise things.” She held my gaze. “Brock. Everyone knows what Will is like now. And that is thanks to you.”
“I think I would have rather beaten him… I could have.”
“And every one that matters will know that. They are also warned of Will because you went first,” she said patiently.
She put a hand on my chest. “The first Gym has been wrongly considered the weakest because the idea is not considered properly. The ones who go first are often the best of us all, and you proved that today,” she said with such honest conviction that I had to stop feeling so down.
I chuckled. “You really have gotten better at people.”
“I was always better at you,” she said earnestly. I leaned forward and kissed her.
She kissed me back, and for a moment, I forgot all about what had happened or why I was there. I was simply a boy giving a girl he loved a heartfelt kiss.
When we broke apart, I smiled at her. “Love you,” I said.
“And I, you,” she said.
She then flicked her eyes at the back door and sighed. “I kept them back while you got the anger out of your system. The others want to check in on you.” Her eyes flicked to the stone at my back, and she frowned. “But perhaps I should have them take you to bed if you’re this tired…”
I glanced at the door and, in doing so, caused it to swing wide, with my family spilling out with my friends and colleagues. Yolanda reached me first and led with her shoulder; she hugged me so hard. I braced myself with rock energy but made sure to take a step back lest she hurt herself on me.
“You were amazing!” she said up to me with watery eyes, only for the next sibling to hit me and repeat the words. Then the rest of my family hit me, and I allowed myself to tumble to the ground with a laugh as they all desperately tried to hug and comfort me.
I chuckled and smiled as they pointed out the tense or cool moments. This was new for me.
Before… If I had lost in a meaningful manner, I’d never had my friends and family around me like this. It was new, and rather nice.
Sabrina alone had seen me at my worst. During the early days, as I assumed the mantle of Gym Leader and caretaker, the feeling of failure had sometimes mounted high and threatened to crush me.
I shot my hand out and dragged her into the hug, and she came willingly.
When I eventually disentangled myself, I shared smiles and handshakes with the others. Brawly clapped me on the shoulder and offered commiserations and congratulations in equal part.
Gary even siddled up to me. “That guy was a piece of work; I’m sure Gramps will have more than a thing or two to say about him, but when I’m Champion, I’ll make sure to stop punks like that!” he said haughtily.
I chuckled and bumped fists with him, which seemed to work for him, allowing him to keep his cool guy image.
I was just about to talk with Erika when Dennis stepped up and offered me a letter. “Brock, I think I should—” I glanced at the letter, saw the first line, and tore it up.
“Nah, screw losing you to another Gym. What are you looking to start a bidding war?” I said to Dennis, gesturing to Sabrina, Erika, and the Hoenn crew in Roxanne, Flannery, and Brawly.
Dennis blinked at me. “Buwhat?” he said cluelessly.
“Dennis,” I said, clapping a hand on his shoulder. “I meant what I said in there. I respect the tough decisions you had to make. Your integrity was paramount. When I have you standing in the referee podium, that’s what you need to be. You stuck it out and made this less of a drama than it could have been if you faltered. Instead, you acted like a referee and saw it out.”
I couldn’t grin as I should have, but I managed a soft curl of the lips. “Take a few days off and spend time with Nike and your family. You have nothing to be ashamed of,” I said seriously.
The others agreed loudly, and Rachel appeared at Dennis’ elbow as I let him be. I knew she’d stay with him until he got home and make sure he was in a better headspace.
I glanced around at all the people who had otherwise come out to check on me and knew that this was only a small number of the people who cared. I glanced down at my angrily buzzing transceiver. Lance, Claire, Lorelei, Surge, and Forrest were all trying to call me.
It is a strange situation to know that friends will reveal themselves in your toughest times, not your best.
It felt good to know so many cared.
“Golem!” said Sanchez, reminding me that it wasn’t just humans that cared. I smiled and found my entire healthy pokemon team watching me. Sanchez thumped his chest and then punched his fist into his other hand. Bertha mirrored him, snorting heavily to show she also supported this idea.
I blinked in surprise as a new thought occurred to me. “How soon can I have a rematch?”
Sabrina giggled, and I felt a lightness take hold where only a weight had been present minutes ago.
I’d lost… No, I needed to stop thinking that way. I’d forced a draw, and that wasn’t the end of the world. If the way my pokemon were eying me was any indicator, they were now more motivated than ever to grow stronger.
Another thought occurred to me as I was led back to my room, yawning and nodding as Salvadore gushed about the fight. Sabrina supported me while Yolanda walked on my other side.
How far could I take that motivation?
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A.N. Thanks to all my Patreons for their support, and comments. Sometimes the comments can really drive me to think about new aspects of the pokemon world that I have created with Hard Enough.
I hope this proves to be a satisfying close on the first match between Brock and Will. It’s been a unique experience trying to write the MC into a corner.
This chapter has had 4 rewrites in the past week, which has been killing a lot of my writing time and making it a tough slog. Despite that, I think I have arrived at a great chapter that I can be happy with.
Originally, I had it that Brock lost, mostly due to another rather blatant cheating attempt. This, I determined, was too rage-inducing to read and required Brock to grasp the idiot stick. I imagine this would have pissed off lots of people. I anguished over it a lot and decided to touch it up, and I think I arrived at something much better.
Now the cheating attempts still occur, but are subtle enough to still make you wonder.
Have a good read through, I have deliberately pointed out a few inconsistencies that should not be possible for certain pokemon such as Alakazam’s Ally Switch working like Baton Pass as well as Brock not being able to use his pokeball’s to recall Tide and Knight, two heavy hitter pokemon that cost Brock a lot of initiative. By all means, pour through the last few chapters, as there are more points where Will cheated.
Now, I have a few chapters that are in my backlog that will need to be adjusted slightly, but there are a lot of fights coming soon!
Fights are coming to Brock and the other Gym Leaders!
This chapter is unbeta’d and I apologise for any errors that seem obvious!
Chapter 135 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/hard-enough-135-85911076
Comments
> Take a few days off and spend time with Nike and your family ....uhhhhhh I thought Dennis' wife's name was Martha? (from back in ch43)
Sswanlake
2023-08-26 03:30:50 +0000 UTCIm disappointed by this. It felt cheap after several chapters of build up. I would be fine if it had a nice conclusion to it but i feel like im left hanging. We know some shady crap is going on and theres bo resolution to it. Will feels like a minor character after all this so whats the hold up with concluding it?
Michael
2023-08-22 08:35:05 +0000 UTCNo way he's gonna be in the e4 now unless he has backers who will twist Lance's arm and force him to add Will. I don't see that happening.
Emily
2023-07-26 18:47:32 +0000 UTCYeah, I don't understand how people keep complaining about it. Why did everybody want Brock to lose? If it was Journey Brock it would make sense but Gym Leader Brock has more power and experience then what Brock canonical had in the anime while also having enough ideas and cash to have a vast and powerful repertoire of pokemons. It would be strange for Will that is a new Ace, even if a very good one, to be able to win against Brock's best even tough his pool of psychic pokemon is more limited and Brock already had time to prepare some countermeasures.
world-concepts-are-breaking god-is-dying
2023-07-26 00:40:59 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter , this is your story so final decision is always yours, still this is much better then brock losing and is a good motivator for his pokemon .
CSD2022
2023-07-24 17:56:49 +0000 UTCTYFTC. I'm here for the ride, wherever you take this vehicle. Sometimes something better and/or surprising happens when there are delays and detours. I'm looking forward to whatever you show us.
Ch W
2023-07-11 16:37:21 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter mate but i gotta say, that was so….. unsatisfying on such a deep level after being hyped for around 60 chapters i had hoped we would be done with Will. he is an annoying antagonist at best and at worst just an unworthy rival who really doesn’t deserve more attention. i was hoping to be done with him but it’s just being dragged out even more the writing is still great and i suppose you greatly succeeded in stirring our emotions against Will so well done on that aspect thanks again for all your efforts and hard work mate! sorry for the rant
AlthePal
2023-07-11 04:57:56 +0000 UTCA part of me is concerned by Will’s actions. I find it hard to believe he didn’t think there would be consequences with how he did this Pokémon battle and peoples perception of him. Yes by technicality everything was within the rules but anyone watching would see the rather underhanded if clever tactics in exploiting the rules. Also the current champion decides who will be in the elite 4 and I don’t see Lance wanting this guy in his 4 after watching this display. So what are we missing here?
Bat
2023-07-10 21:30:15 +0000 UTCThat’s sarcasm right
HonorBound Fate
2023-07-06 23:42:38 +0000 UTCTechnically both Karen and Will could make it into the E4. With Agatha retiring and Lance making it pretty clear he wants Lorelei gone, thats two openings. Thats hopefully not going to happen, I'm just saying that it's possible
Kailblade
2023-07-06 17:44:14 +0000 UTCI think, the best result was Will winning without Titan being in the fight and none of the sketch shit he used in match. We’d know Will is dirty and he’d do absolutely anything to gain an advantage yet when it comes match time he’s squeaky clean looks like a competent trainer and doesn’t burn any of his bridges thus actually giving him a chance at the E4. With what happened here, it doesn’t progress his character or story at all. It ruined him.
Tank45
2023-07-06 12:27:28 +0000 UTCI do hope that countless people will comb over every single act in that match and analyse Will into pieces, revealing his tricks and uncover the cheating. After all not many gyms have the Camera setup like Brock has, I doubt Will could prepare perfectly for that.
ShinLupin
2023-07-06 05:47:37 +0000 UTCAre items allowed? There's psychic seed that boost sp Def of psychic terrain is used. Maybe his possy of psychics helped? The anti teleport is only outside the gym not inside right?
Zax
2023-07-06 04:53:50 +0000 UTCThis was a doozy of a chapter, there's a lot of different things to talk about but I want to take a moment to discuss Will, because even if there will be a rematch we're only two months into the circuit and that feels like an end of Circuit event. So I feel it's likely he'll be moving into the background as the future gym leaders start to take center focus. First off, Will's not making it into the elite four, and the greatest reason for that was never Brock or even Sabrina, it's Karen. The woman who's competing for the same slot as him, who trounced 10 Johto gyms, who is his worst type matchup, and already has ties to the elite four position.(Will has already burned his public bridges, and the whole reason Madame pushed fourth getting him the position was because team rocket didn't have any pull in the elite four.) Now for his future run against the remaining gym leaders, Blaine and Giovanni will take the dive, and even if his draw with Brock was due to a combination of cheating and Brock being unable to use key members of his elites, he still got a draw against a champion level trainer and in game he had the ability to gain the first slot so the only people I believe he'd have to resort to cheating against would be Sabrina and Koga. Everyone's talking about his future match with Sabrina and how she'll likely expose him but I wouldn't count out Koga from exposing him earlier than any of us expect. Onto the cheating itself or rather what it means. I'll skip my theories for how, but let's just take a moment to think about how far this man went into sheer refuge in audacity. He may have been subtle in a few things but he was blatant in others, directly on live television performing things that should not have worked with his only defense being no one can prove exactly how he did it. Because of that no news outlet will directly say the words he cheated, but Erica already noted he pissed off quite a few companies due to his stunt with the poke ball. So even if it's not said directly everyone he's trying to impress like major corporation heads and the champion! Knows he cheated the question everyone's asking isn't if it's how. Onto Will's personality, even with our relatively limited screen time with him I believe I can confidently say what Will is, and that's a petulant egocentric child. Every time he opened his mouth during this match he shot himself in the foot. This was on live television and he conducted himself like a brat. He lives for the Spotlight every time he got a leg up he couldn't help himself from sneering and being condescending. And when things weren't going his way he clearly got so flustered and heated that if he lost I have no doubt in my mind that he would've thrown a tantrum like a toddler. It's the starting line and he has done everything to burn every public bridge available to him just to soothe his ego. Hell even if he doesn't have to I believe there's a fair chance he would cheat during his other gym leader matches purely for his ego. As for what team rocket thinks of Will's conduct. I believe Giovanni sees it as a win-win. If he somehow does make it into the elite four then the organization finally has a man on the inside, if he fails he's already burned all the bridges so the organization is now getting the powerful psychic both for gambling in ACE battles and some other possible activities. Worst case he gets exposed as a cheat and his careers over and he's unusable. Even then no skin off Giovanni's back, this was his mother's idea his eggs weren't in this basket, Will's not a member of team rocket or even a part of their match fixings, he's just an egocentric idiot that they were taking advantage of, might get the plus of not having that upcoming loss against him affect him much if his cheating is exposed by just having Will cheat during their match. All I know, I don't know exactly who will expose him or how it will be done, but it will happen. If I were a betting man, Will will be exposed as a cheat before the rematch. For Will this will be his desperate last chance to make something of his career and prove that he wasn't just smoke and mirrors, and on Brocks end it will be the cherry on top of a dish best served cold, in other words Brock will destroy him showing the world that if they stand on equal footing Will never stood a chance and put the final nail in his careers coffin.
the pyro stick figure 76
2023-07-06 04:34:00 +0000 UTCyou know, now i wonder of how much this result was foreshadowed so far. The Girafarig showed how Brock reacts to violent fights. (as seen with Alakazam) The Pokemon which was drugged before the match to land a fissure. (Did Will use any stat-boosting items before the match? just not as obviously?) And now if you are right, the "secret power"-pokemon which was given to Forests "friends". The berries which nullify advantages started to circulate. Heck was there any foreshadowing to the ally switching?
Yobikir
2023-07-06 04:08:11 +0000 UTCIt was a good chapter. Any time it feels like the villains get even a small victory people aren't going to like it. Doubly so for a character like will that has been built up so much. I read more than enough to see that while for some this looks like an unsatisfying climax to an arc, it's really just a falling action in the overall plot. I'm sure we're going to see a lot of rising action building to a big climax soon.
Christopher Ozouf
2023-07-06 03:33:22 +0000 UTCI agree with the sentiment that a lot of Will's tricks are legit, and shouldn't be patched out of the rules. The only exception is the 1-minute deliberation period for a voluntary switch. That's just ripe for abuse by any trainer with half a brain, and has no business being in a competitive ruleset. Imo, that should be changed into a lower time allotment with the possibility of the referee extending it in justified circumstances (poor trainer health, technical difficulties, spillover effects that impair trainers like flash or supersonic).
Imef
2023-07-06 03:20:25 +0000 UTCI had a thought did Medicham use secret power during the match? If so wills pokemon could have hidden in a secret base in the gym floor. That could explain a lot as far as Ally switch working. It could also be a place for wills pokemon to use potions or grab type advantige nullifying berry's I realize will never called the move but he was communicating to his pokemon psycicly at that point.
rezo42
2023-07-06 03:16:00 +0000 UTCI really liked this outcome, especially as setup for future stuff.
Kerrus Magrus
2023-07-06 03:11:16 +0000 UTCThe B Team had a massive type advantage and surprise factor though. I think that more than makes up for any level difference between Sanchez and Gawain/Jorm/Knight. I'm surprised Will didn't use a Claydol. Ground has a bunch of 4x damage matchups.
Imef
2023-07-06 03:05:40 +0000 UTCI think it's looking like Yolanda will eventually take over in Pewter. Maybe the seat is being prepared for Brock. Would allow for more insight into their other official roles. Speaking of the E4, who's substituting for Agatha during her recovery? Do challengers go straight to Lance after Bruno?
Imef
2023-07-06 02:57:08 +0000 UTCI've been wondering for awhile now why I'm still enjoying this series despite it being so far along. Normally, I lose interest around chapter 50 of any series. But now it makes sense. You actually understand what makes a good chapter and you're willing to rewrite a bad idea. I think you should have a much higher following. The other pokemon fanfics I read start good, but come chapter 50, they all universally suck. It's too bad.
Colby Last
2023-07-06 02:40:25 +0000 UTCThis is an excellent resolution, great work! You wrote Will so well that a good amount of people can't even accept a draw, much less a loss, truely excellent writing.
NostalgicTime
2023-07-06 02:39:56 +0000 UTCAfter all the buildup and the scene with Sabrina last chapter, this resolution was a bit unsatisfying.
asyn
2023-07-06 02:06:50 +0000 UTCI enjoyed the chapter itself the only problem I had with it was that brock's Pokémon didn't feel like they were at their best. It felt like some of them went down to easy, especially titan. Whether or not that's because of something funky that Will did I do not know.
Hendobear1
2023-07-06 01:46:20 +0000 UTCCan't wait for the months it will now take to get a resolution to the constant cheating :/
mushroom
2023-07-06 01:29:50 +0000 UTCI have to say (and it might come off as odd) that I am glad Brock has come to a stumbling block like this. This is how we get character growth and plot, and this is also what separates a truly great storyline from a mediocre "MC always wins" power fantasy. But also, thank you for not making it a total loss. I might have actually cried.
S. Nutter
2023-07-06 01:12:45 +0000 UTCAll I can say is that for all the build up with Will for so long for it to end up with this unstatisfying mess, I'm not sure I can enjoy the Will plot thread anymore. Before Will's BS was a good kind of frustrating that makes a pay-off better, but now it has firmly turned into the bad kind of frustrating that just makes me not want to read about it. Or at least, for me that has happened. And now I have to wonder how long all this Will stuff will drag out since it seems like he is gearing up to be a medium or long term reoccuring antogonist that I will get no satisfaction from. Even if the next chapter was just filled with Will getting totally screwed I don't think I would find it satisfying. And now every time an arc in this story happens I will wonder in the back of my mind if it will turn out like this one and be completely bitter in a bad way.
David Hedges
2023-07-06 00:36:14 +0000 UTCTbh I feel like there needs to be a conclusion to this arc.if this is just left unanswered/unfinished when it comes to the cheating idk how that will feel
Carnifex-Chan
2023-07-06 00:15:27 +0000 UTCI'm torn. What great writing. I think it needed to be a loss though it would be incredibly hard to read. I honestly don't know the right way. Thanks for the chapters!
focus2x
2023-07-05 23:53:24 +0000 UTCTHIS IS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT! Man that was crazy! Will is a lying, cheating BASTARD! Fuck that guy! And the fact YOU made me feel that way with your writing is awesome! This fight was fantastic. Also infuriating because Will is a shit head. Man good on Brock for sticking through that! Imagine if he had his two new Pokemon even better trained, or had his mega evolution complete!
Laharl365
2023-07-05 23:52:58 +0000 UTCEz will cheated
MurkyTruths
2023-07-05 23:38:56 +0000 UTCHoping his official statement after the match is "You are the person you practice being. This is doubly important for leaders."
Quincy
2023-07-05 23:34:21 +0000 UTCHonestly these last few chapter were hard to read not because they were bad or badly written. But because of the emotional roller coaster and the stress toll. And having to read it in parts instead of all at once. That being said phenomenal job navigating a hard to write rival battle. You captured wills personality to a tee with out going over board. I also feel like you wrote the mental warfare that Brock was subjected to really well and ultimately is the main reason I think Brock did not get the win. Cause despite the subtle frequent cheating. I feel like will would have lost in the end. if Brock had brought his a game from the start.
Galen Tanner
2023-07-05 23:24:22 +0000 UTCWell, that was disappointing, it might not have been a loss but it might as well have been. Was expecting a turn around with Sabrina and Co finding out how Will was cheating but that obviously didn't happen.
Wayne
2023-07-05 23:16:14 +0000 UTCI personally didn't mind most of the tactics that Will used. Will even reminds Brock that he used some of the tactics like Explosion so it's kind of hypocritical of Brock to be be that upset. Plus as an elite trainer, Brock should be able to adapt around these tactics. I hope the league doesn't change most of the rules. As long as it's within the current rules, it should be fair play. If the league changes the rules, that just seems shitty to me. If Will was JUST using down and dirty tactics I'd honestly be happy. Brock does need a loss and this would be a perfect reflection of his fight with Lance where there was more info on him this time compared to his opponent. I will say though that no one catching on to the cheating is upsetting. I get some of it was subtle enough that it would be hard to question. But others are too blatant that I find it hard that it wasn't called out like the Ally Switch and Mean Look/Pokeballs. The only reason it works is that no one ever really uses these moves so no one really knows the true extent of how they work, which leaves everyone confused. If it isn't immediately caught next time it'll honestly be disappointing how everyone is holding the idiot ball. Though this is assuming they are smart enough to catch on that there was cheating and prepare accordingly...
Silentlaze
2023-07-05 23:13:10 +0000 UTCA-M-A-Z-I-N-G I loved this battle and it was very well shown to us how Will fight and cheat and how Brock do his best to overcome it.
Lazy Lemon
2023-07-05 22:24:22 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter! And a fantastic ending. With the long afterword I was almost expecting the protagonist walking of into the sunset.
Abborre
2023-07-05 22:05:51 +0000 UTCYeah which is fine characters should be challenged. But losing because the other guy is cheating, we know he is cheating, the characters know he is cheating and yet it all still just plays out is nearly as unsatisfactory.
Biomass
2023-07-05 21:52:19 +0000 UTCIt didn't even occur to me that a draw was possible.... I am not a smart man.
Anonykor
2023-07-05 21:48:13 +0000 UTCI liked the chapter but oh boy im gonna need to mentally prepare a bit if their next fight is also going to be another 4 part chapter. Its exhausting dealing with a heel thats written that well. TFTC!
Nitrous_Hail
2023-07-05 21:46:39 +0000 UTCreally shows how serious team rocket's cheating attempts with Jessie and James's schemes shows how they could have gone if they were done right devious and clever is a dangerous combo when competently done and the ego rubs salt into a wound of a job well done! will is masterful at subtle cheating over dramatic cheating makes him dangerous to an opponent the steps and willingness he was going to take to win them what he almost did to Forrest he dangerous man willing to crosslines who got into a draw fair despite his "win" it was close and it taught brock a lot!
angie bell
2023-07-05 21:42:15 +0000 UTCi can accept a draw but not a loss rematch is a great choice with bertha and co healed and ready and maybe even a mega evolution great plot decision a loss wouldnt have been stomachable after winning against the champ and being elite/champion level all the time this would had probably ruined the novel for many
Lobo
2023-07-05 21:26:00 +0000 UTCI know this is your story and this isnt the game. That being said, I would like to suggest having the alakazam do a defensive move before that crunch, in the games, if you have an alakazam with 252hp, 252def EVs, and a defensive nature, he would still be 1shot by a crunching tyranitar. Thats assuming both pokemon are at the same level. An alakazam at level 100 without defensive evs would be 1shot by a tyranitar at level 70. What I mean to say is that I cannot picture an alakazam staying alive let alone not fainting against a tyranitar that is at the same level of Lance's Dragonite. Perhaps Sabrina's alakazam? But even then I'd find it hard.
Jose Ricardo Passos
2023-07-05 21:21:53 +0000 UTC"That hadn’t been the result I wanted" He was so close to a win. Amazing chapter. I would have liked it better if the crowd had started the stomp stomp clap and the aura and energy of the crowd had been enough to rouse Shrek to their feet just before the final count. Still it is good to set up a recurring antagonist. By my count we had scoping out the gym under subterfuge, having team rocket sideline the A team before the match, mean look, baton pass, levitating jinx, using psychic to hold back Shrek, Pokemon being healed outside of the match, possibly being boosted and buffed prior to the match, and using a flaw in the rules to set up environmental effects. To say nothing of scummy plays and possibly influencing Brock's mind when his dark energy was low that is a lot of cheating. Did I miss anything Great story and I will see you next chapter.
Michael Hughes
2023-07-05 21:14:46 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter and a great finish. Very possible a riot might have broken out over the other ending. But one must fall to rise ever higher, and I believe we would have enjoyed the story any which way it was written.
OBS
2023-07-05 21:13:59 +0000 UTCI agree!
Giant Sloth
2023-07-05 21:10:15 +0000 UTCDoes Will realize that even if he has the support of a few wealthy people, he's burnt a lot of bridges with his showing against Brock. Lance alone would want to refuse him on principle alone, using cheap tactics like that. He'll catch a lot of flack from tradionalist who value the unspoken rules of battling
GameJunkie999
2023-07-05 21:10:14 +0000 UTCDon't forget that the last Giovanni Interlude basically said that he was going to support Will in his fight against Brock, which means that Team Rocket Resources were in play to help with the cheating.
Thomas Keller
2023-07-05 21:01:30 +0000 UTCWe're still waiting on the Lance Call, so I suspect we're going to get an Official League Update on the bullshit that Will pulled, plus we're likely to get an assurance that Will won't get close to an E4 position like that, especially with other E4 contenders on the docket.
Thomas Keller
2023-07-05 20:55:07 +0000 UTCLoved this, thanks for the fun match. I do think that the pacing needs to take a step up a bit though.. Particularly shows after this match being 4 parts. Unfortunately, when we only get 2 chapters each week, it feels like the story is crawling at a snails pace right now. Even worse when we get the occasional 'fluff' chapter which while I do enjoy, as it adds characterization to the story, they DO feel kind of wasteful. I'd like to recommend maybe turning those kind of chapters down the line in to 'interlude' chapters and additional weekly additions. You don't need to put as much effort towards them, and they would be supplemental to the usual 2 per week, rather than taking up one of the actual spots. It would help to increase the pacing of the grittier stuff too.
SwiftFate
2023-07-05 20:49:12 +0000 UTCIf they even accept his challenge. Remember, not everyone takes all challengers for Ace challenges. I highly doubt the Cerulean Sisters are eager to fight him...
carebear90
2023-07-05 20:43:57 +0000 UTCYes I definitely want other people take on this. I am interested in surge, lance, pryce, and the online trainer thoughts on how it went down. Also on what side and how the media is reporting this. Ohh and of course the pokeball company definitely what they do about this situation.
Chopper4ever
2023-07-05 20:41:27 +0000 UTCWe do know that Brock's gym has a ton of tech to record matches. I wonder if any of it caught Will's cheating.
Lambert
2023-07-05 20:30:18 +0000 UTCI honestly wouldn't have had a problem with a loss if Titan had to be forfeited through time-out. (Because Brock couldn't manage to carry a Steelix out of the Arena after he spent so much of his energy earlier.) I actually expected something like that since Will was very carefully saving up Jynx and Slowking. It would have been a fitting ending to this shitshow of an exploitationist AND cheating match.
carebear90
2023-07-05 20:29:40 +0000 UTCBrock draws or -according to OP's original intention- lose the match for some needed character development? Great! There's a rematch? Yes! Hints to Will being a recurring character? From the hype and lead up to this match all those months ago, the pacing has left much to be desired and left me burnt out of Will and his shenanigans. Weaving all the plot points along the way as they have would do that. Going forward, i hope the pacing of the narrative was better planned even if it means sacrificing some Family Fluff Time.
Kevin Lee
2023-07-05 20:23:16 +0000 UTCVery fun set of chapters. The draw sucks but a straight loss would definitely been worse. I wonder if Will had someone switching/teleporting his pokeballs out to buff/heal his Mons.
Sage Berthelsen
2023-07-05 20:22:49 +0000 UTCMixed feeling over these last 4 chapters. Writing was amazing. Just gripped the whole time and felt the tension almost physically. I logically understand that the actions and consequences are completely logica.l Emotionally feel so torn as you have written will as scumbag so hate him getting even minor wins, and with the ooc perspective of everything going on and block balancing so much I want him to have the win. Even if realistically this is a more probably outcome.
Kavantissa De Silva
2023-07-05 20:12:36 +0000 UTCThey expected a statisfing beatdown on Will. They though that what Brock did to prepare against Will would be more then enough. They got a draw, thanks to cheating. In short they got the same crash that Brock had at the end, they just react differently then him. EDIT: The following part of the chapter fits perfectly: I wanted to rage or throw up. Or just lay down and have a nap I was that tired. I just wanted today to be over. Maybe tomorrow I’d wake up and I’d learn today was just a dream?
Yobikir
2023-07-05 20:11:04 +0000 UTCLoved the fight. Especially those little moments of Brock's team going above and beyond. Also I'd take the general.. emotional reaction to this fight as a testament to how well you made Will into a hateable heel.
Murderouslemon
2023-07-05 20:07:16 +0000 UTCI really hope they are able to later prove not only that Will was cheating, but how. Let him get a cheater's just deserts.
Trevor Fuhlman
2023-07-05 20:06:40 +0000 UTCOkay, here is my wishlist so to speak. This was bitter to read. Not what we were expecting at all. which is why i think it was amazingly done. But you did set some expectatives that need to be addressed. First, there were too many Expert level trainers there for the cheating to not be found out. Will should be exposed relatively quickly, and trashed. Then Brock should publicly call him out on the cheating, demanding a rematch, which should happen in a League controled enviroment, and absolutely trash the motherfucker using the same team from this match. Also, cheating in a official match should have serious repercussions for Will. As said, wishlist xP
Ricardo
2023-07-05 20:05:25 +0000 UTCIm reading peoples gripes about some things being unclear and being left open to speculation. How it leaves a bad taste in their mouth, and i can't disagree less. Sure I'm slightly bummed out about Brock not winning. But the fact that it's so open ended and the fact that it's not completely clear to me how he cheated is just hyping me up and wanting for more! It's kept me on the edge of my seat and the mystery is keeping me incredibly engaged with this story! Props Viva and keep up the amazing work!!!
Thijs Bader
2023-07-05 20:00:16 +0000 UTCIt could be interesting to have a reaction chapter next, incorporating the Pokenet and articles similar to other stories such as "A New Normal" and "Borne of Caution." It would be intriguing to see if the "internet sleuths," akin to real-life scenarios, can unravel the mystery behind what transpired. I do believe that the revelation of Will's cheating should occur soon; otherwise, there's a risk of the fanbase revolting. Another thing I wanted to mention is that if I recall correctly it was mentioned way back in the beginning that when Brock was fighting Lance, he had to bring rock-themed Pokemon and so he couldn't bring his strongest team. But now it seems that the team he brought was the best he had left and even his non-rock-type Pokemon like Tide seem a step below. If that is the case, maybe some new team members like the Empress could be an interesting addition.
ST
2023-07-05 19:54:46 +0000 UTCI feel like while we as an audience who sees things from Brock's perspective have been led to believe that Will sent all those Psychic users Ace challenges as a way to case Brock's teams and strats, what he was actually doing was planning how to cheat. They were looking for holes in the Gym's security. For a path that they could use to sneak with teleports and/or use telekinesis. For gaps in the cameras paths. Whether ot not Brock kept security close to the challenger's podium/box and if they checked the challenger's Pokeballs before the match AND how throughly. Brock's expected the sportsman like way of cheating: Prepping in advance to an opponent. He wasn't expecting outright nefarious cheating because that's not how he thinks.
Paco Castro
2023-07-05 19:52:39 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! I really liked this arc, for what its worth I think the outcome of the fight makes perfect sense, Brock went into the fight after fighting a goddam Moltres, a good chunk of his team are down and Will was relying on some scummy tactics. Not to mention both Brock and Sabrina noticing something further being off with the fight, im interested to see how Will was cheating, and how it will be discovered. Im also looking forward to his inevitable fight against Sabrina and her absolutely dumpstering him. I don’t get why other people think Brock is stupid tho, hes clearly noticed something was off, it would have been completely unrealistic for him to figure it out during the fight.
AnotherRandom
2023-07-05 19:51:16 +0000 UTCHe only got a draw from Brock B team. If Bertha or Sanchez was here he would have won. Besides, Will is going to carry the reputation of a dishonorable coward. The match was televised. Everyone saw his cowardly moves and his scumbag attitude. If Brock was petty he would hire a journalist and give all the footage of his scooting, hired thugs and about the situation with his brother. Will’s reputation is already low, a scandal like that will kill it. And really, does he really think that Proud Dragon Master Lance is going to accept him on his E4 with the way he tied with his best pal and rival? Lance was willing to cast out Lorelei just because she uses Ice type and it irks him as a Dragon Master. Never is he going to accept a Cowardly cheating trickster on his E4. It’s anathema to his draconic nature.
KarmaHoudini
2023-07-05 19:49:34 +0000 UTCThe climax of Arcs, when you need your protagonist to really struggle, I’ve always took longer to write. … just ask my readers patiently waiting for the next chapter.
Docnox
2023-07-05 19:47:20 +0000 UTCThe only way I could see Alakazam surviving that was if he had max Defense with a defense related nature. Probably someone/something boosted it. Maybe someone slipped it some X-defends and some X-specials.
datguyFrost01
2023-07-05 19:45:21 +0000 UTCI salute you author!! You have done fantastic with these 4 chapters!! I honestly think the biggest dig is that wait for the second half. Rarely have I felt stress while reading a battle and boy was I at the edge of my seat!
Bat
2023-07-05 19:45:08 +0000 UTCBrock’s pokemon and Brock himself were dumbed down for a plot that sucks. Jynx and Alakazam, some of the frailest pokemon tanking hits and keep going is such bullshit. Titan’s first loss being meaningless is such a waste for a big moment you can never take back and it’s tragic. Some terrible choices in this battle. I would’ve been fine with a draw if Titan was taken out by Moltres after having a very good showdown with him but since he was involved he should’ve won the battle but barely. For a battle that had so much build to end like this? Disappointing.
Tank45
2023-07-05 19:41:27 +0000 UTCApparently, explosions were able to destroy terrain moves like that. A short while after that. The terrain is there. Not sure what to make of it.
MaliMi
2023-07-05 19:41:08 +0000 UTCI do like Brock struggling to eke out a tie with Will and the implications of his cheating, but it makes me wonder, how did he get away with it? I mean Brock’s got a hi-tech gym and Sabrina there watching so I’m curious how Will could have cheated
Ryan
2023-07-05 19:40:38 +0000 UTCI'll be honest, this feels like a cop-out. The fact that the details of Will's cheating, and Will himself, are going to get stretched out for months of updates, is not encouraging either. This feels a lot like the Flint thing, in that it's being dragged out way too long.
Empty Shelf
2023-07-05 19:38:20 +0000 UTCIt's weird to not have considered it. For most of us readers it was really win or lose, no middle line, so it came out satisfying for us despite being the complete opposite for Brock. The emotionally charged moments in the comments from the last few chapters just go to show how invested the readers are in what the author is producing. Such an excellent story should have such a stone to grind itself against to produce better and better writing, so my commendable thanks to both the readers and author for working against each other to dish out such a satisfying conclusion to this arc.
Jericho Rising
2023-07-05 19:36:39 +0000 UTCI think for now, it's only a noodle incident, but it will get revealed later on.
Jonathan Phu
2023-07-05 19:35:37 +0000 UTCMaybe he has heal balls and using psychic energy in them, it acts like a weak heal pulse, or something. I'm 99% sure he had outside help though. Drugs, boosting, ally switch pokemon with someone in the stands who has preboosted Pokemon. Anything could be possible. But right now I'm too tilted to even read between the lines to even build a theory on what the hell happened. One thing is for certain though. It kinda killed my motivation for this series. Readers on other sites are gonna riot when this chapter drops. Holy hell.
datguyFrost01
2023-07-05 19:35:32 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always, definitely a more satisfying ending than WIll eking out a win through his cheating. But now I'm kind of confused on where the E4 of Kanto is gonna head towards. Koga and Bruno are a given and with Karen remaining solid on her own Ace Challenge circuit she seems to be taking Agatha's spot for sure. But if Will's position is truly done for then what's gonna happen? Will Lolerelei stay on?
Paco Castro
2023-07-05 19:34:30 +0000 UTCI call BS on that Jynx,Exxugutor, and Alakazam. That jynx took way to much damage for a Pokemon that frail and kept coming. The Alakazam which is notorious for its poor defense took a point-blank crunch and got rag dolled before taking a dark pulse to the face from a champion-tier tyrannitar and still had more.
G4Life
2023-07-05 19:34:24 +0000 UTCI like it. This isn't a kids book. The MC doesn't need to have plot armor. An MC can only be as good as their antagonists. People who think otherwise just want a power fantasy with no substance. Cheat codes all the way to the finish does not a good book make.
Alex C
2023-07-05 19:34:19 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed Brock seeing the results of his actions leading to so many supporting him after the battle.
LazyF0x02
2023-07-05 19:34:05 +0000 UTCIn the best of worlds, we'll get both: Brock beating him in a rematch, AND Sabrina crushing him with a mega evolved Alakazam.
olyver
2023-07-05 19:33:32 +0000 UTCI'm confused about the line with the "starter Onyx". Afaik, Flint said that Brock didn't need an Onyx as a starter because he already had something better. Did he get an Onyx too or was there a mixup?
Imef
2023-07-05 19:32:11 +0000 UTCI also really want to know how Will cheated. I also hope that they manage to demonstrate the fact that he cheated by proving it in another televised match.
olyver
2023-07-05 19:31:40 +0000 UTCI really dislike this ending, it should've been a win for brock. Ending it as a tie is a copout as far as i am concerned and it should've ended up with him winning. Massive letdown from the hype this match has been getting for the past like 30 chapters i would've even been fine with will winning, but a tie is just lame both story wise and character wise.
Icemoo
2023-07-05 19:30:44 +0000 UTCI'm thinking he has illegally modified pokeballs designed to interfere with normal balls, moderately heal his pokemon, and allow some sort of fake batton pass ability.
Anareth
2023-07-05 19:30:05 +0000 UTCI’m very satisfied with this outcome. Hard tie is better than a sucker punch loss
Dirk Gent Lee
2023-07-05 19:29:23 +0000 UTC... I just... this is such a bitter fucking outcome. seriously. and he wasn't even actually called out for cheating. I was expecting him to get disqualified, or sabrina to realize he was cheating, but no. apparently Will can do whatever the fuck he wants. I'm glad you didn't make brock lose. this already leaves a bad taste in my mouth. and brock ALWAYS taking it on the chin and not calling it out pisses me off so much. I think I need to be away from this series for a while. I can't summon any kind of interest in the next arc. Not with Will still being able to claim to be as good as brock
MagicWafflez
2023-07-05 19:29:17 +0000 UTCNext battle better be a mega tyranitar sweep. These last few chapters were like liking an ashtray and expecting to find chocolate. F-ing hell, where was taunt one of the most basic moves in Pokémon? This reminded me of some fics where the writer, drops everyone's IQ by like 50 to make the MC seem smarter than he is, although you did this with Will. Yes Brock needed a kick to his behind and get back in gear so to speak, but this ain't it fam. Sabrina better expose and 6-0 him, for this to even feel somewhat worth it. I feel Brock drawing the idiot stick so many times just for a character like Will to even be relevant, brutalises his character. And the fact that Brock still doesn't have/train dark type pokemon is so bad, having dark aura and all. Brock was looking for Flying types, where is Honchcrow? Absol? Sableye? Something? Anything?
datguyFrost01
2023-07-05 19:28:38 +0000 UTCI do think this just shows how strong Brock is. Blatant cheating, the advantage of scouting Brock out and alot of Brocks heavy hitters being wounded (Bertha, Sanzches ect) and he still forces a draw. Also gonna love to see what you do with this new found motivation Brocks team has gotten!
Well_sorry
2023-07-05 19:22:42 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! I really wanted the fight to end and it was a great ending in my opinion. Will’s cheating not wining at the end is just the cherry on top. Also a wake up call to Brock, he’s to passive at times and needs to step up his game. Looking for Sabrina to beat Will’s ass tho
Sabriel Umber
2023-07-05 19:21:21 +0000 UTCWhen in doubt as a writer, make it a tie. Always seems to work out story-wise. I'm very happy with how this mini arc ended. Amazing fight, amazing writing. Hoping to see someone else theorize what exactly went down with the cheating. And presumably spelled out in the fic itself at some point later on, for those clueless like me. The best I got is that he's SUS. Meanwhile, anyone with power is gonna still respect Brock and look down on Will. MFer tanked a Moltres and got all his Pokemon horribly hurt. Barely any time later to heal and he has to fight this jackass, not at full health. Plus him scoping Brock out. Plus some cheating, though they probably don't know that yet, though they might also think that things were off. I'm sure Lance doesn't really want people beating Brock considering how Brock beat Lance. Sure, one battle, Lance is obviously stronger, but it's not a great look. Those that beat Brock have a good shot at the throne. So I'm sure everyone is pretty happy with a tie. Happy enough. Meanwhile, Steven Stone knows that soon enough Brock and Lance (and idk if he knows about Sabrina) are gonna become a lot more powerful. Plus he himself is already super powerful. Some chump like Will? Nah.
Green0Photon
2023-07-05 19:21:11 +0000 UTCWell done with tying this up (heh) in a satisfying manner. You've definitely established Will's ability as a proper antagonistic rival here (Also Future Sight is just as much of a pain in a real battle as it is in the games, huh?). It's a watershed moment for Brock too - deciding not to sink to Will's level, to stand up and be a better man than his opponent, and using it to drive him onwards. Not many authors could portray that properly, but I think you've pulled it off, so well done.
James Redmond
2023-07-05 19:20:40 +0000 UTCHuh. I didn't expect that ending. Nice.
SailorOfHouseThunderBird
2023-07-05 19:20:32 +0000 UTCOut of curiosity, what was the original cheating attempt? Was it using stimulants/drugs before the match to allow one of his Pokemon a quick KO? You've generally foreshadowed most of what Will did, but that one didn't seem to end up happening. And I can't say I'm looking forward to any future matches between Brock and Will. I expect them all to generally be rather infuriating to read. Considering that Brock wasn't allowed to win this one the next best outcome, for me, would've been a thorough beating by Sabrina with mega Alakazam. But it sounds like we're not going to get that either if Brock's going to have to fight Will at least one more time.
Matt H
2023-07-05 19:20:26 +0000 UTCWith how many gym leaders like and respect Brock, they will be out for blood when Will makes his rounds.
Rinaldo
2023-07-05 19:19:29 +0000 UTCYay more battles! I hope we get to see Karen vs Pryce and Clair. I still say Brock has probably accidentally screwed her over by getting Pryce a Mamoswine and introducing Clair to moonblast. Also looking forward to Bugsy vs Brock. TFTC
SaintRhon
2023-07-05 19:19:00 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter! I appreciate your insight on the outcome. While I agree that a loss would have been excessive, I must admit I'm slightly disappointed by Brock's defeat. It's particularly disheartening considering how he convincingly defeated Lance with a Pokemon to spare. However, taking into account that Will is an Elite 4 member in the official canon and considering the challenges Brock faced, including cheating and a weakened team, it adds an intriguing twist to the story. I'm eagerly anticipating the revelation of the cheating method used by Will and hoping it will be captivating. Moreover, I'm looking forward to seeing Brock eventually get his well-deserved revenge in the future.
ST
2023-07-05 19:17:29 +0000 UTCThanks for the Chapter, I have got to ask if the leage will catch on to Will's cheating after its all happened?
Flipflop
2023-07-05 19:15:50 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
BlackRazaras
2023-07-05 19:00:52 +0000 UTC