Chapter 102 - Testing Limits I
Added 2025-10-18 12:30:45 +0000 UTCFear took many shapes and forms.
For Orod
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Thank you for the chapter :D "And the prodigious artist could only look paler by the moment as he realized that all the teachers and students who were in the room and either helping tutor him or watch his art were now gone. Having fled at the sight of Orodan and his drawn weapons." *now gone, having fled at "The collateral damage limited for now since the man hadn’t brought out his truly high-level ones." *collateral damage was limited for "That spell had no soul Parthus." *no soul, Parthus. "Something which would only wound even an untrained civilian." *would only even wound an untrained "The duel itself was nothing particularly special, but the teaching Orodan was giving out were." *but the teachings Orodan was "Watch closely apprentice," *Watch closely, apprentice, "Suppressing the speech was considered entirely useless and ineffectual, so the department of looper affairs headed by Tegin and Eldarion had instead given the simple directive that loopers were not to act maliciously or use the loops to harm anyone." *Suppressing speech of it was considered "I suppose I can’t ever escape being bullied into training by you, can I Orodan?" *can I, Orodan? "But for the rest of the changes he’d made, such as bringing back Zukelmux’s mother, Fenton’s father or Aliya’s brother, he had directly altered the timeline itself causing much causal changes." *causing several causal changes. -'much' and 'changes' don't work together in this case. The sentence ending could be written differently than I have suggested. "You should have said something kid…" *said something, kid… "The little terror has a point Orodan." *a point, Orodan. "Right you are Mister Orodan." *you are, Mister Orodan. "In fact, I reckon we ought to put your multitaskin’ to the test a bit, eh ser?" *bit, eh, ser? "Well Orodan?" *Well, Orodan? "…and impossibly, the full force and impact of the strike hit her square on the abdomen. His fist somehow defying reality itself to impact completely despite her far smaller size." *the abdomen, his fist somehow "Your defense of them is admirable Zukelmux, and you’ve come far." *is admirable, Zukelmux, and The burdens upon his shoulders, the weight of their expectations… he towed these along with him as he strode in a violent manner. *expectations… he Towed these along "And with the advancement came power, as he brutally wrestled and grappled space itself, trading Zukelmux’s’s spot with that of Fenton and Edrosic." *itself, trading Zukelmux's spot with "But chiefly due to the fact that the Romnara Isles needed a safe route through the waters to reach the mainland of the empire." This sentence is out of place. "the man exclaimed and then sighed letting the outrage go." *then sighed, letting the "Then you have yet to learn the intricacies of rulership my friend." *of rulership, my friend. "However, long ago when he’d gotten an education at Bluefire Academy during his very early loops. During the process of going from uneducated brute to educated warrior, he had read many books." *early loops, during the process "Come aboard sers!" *Come aboard, sers! "a Blackworth rifleman instructed, surveying a group of Alastaian non-combatants who were cross-training that they could defend themselves in a pinch." *were cross-training so that they "Greetings honored Gregory Hannegan." *Greetings, honored Gregory Hannegan. "Alright Mister Wainwright." *Alright, Mister Wainwright. "Moving forward. It might be best if you avoid looking too closely into my home at the start of these loops." *Moving forward, it might "Hold right there Mister Wainwright!" *Hold right there, Mister Wainwright! "Now Mister Wainwright." *Now, Mister Wainwright. "the other two operatives took furious notes too as their scrying eye orbs recorded the incident for cataloguing purposes." *The other two
Napalm078
2025-10-21 02:18:22 +0000 UTC"an Eastern Kingdoms’ philosopher has asked whether you can beat a lesson into someone’s head." A question many a teacher has pondered, I've no doubt. Thanks for the chapter. Impressive as always.
NameGame
2025-10-20 00:44:36 +0000 UTCI have a feeling that she could be a Celestial Skill holder in the future too!
Private Writer
2025-10-19 01:05:41 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Much testing ahead xD I am wondering when the weaver's baby will enter as Orodan's disciple. She is a prodigy of Soul from what i remember and was picking things up from observing Orodan intently when he was learning weaving from her mother.
Private Writer
2025-10-19 01:03:06 +0000 UTC
