Welcome to Ludus - new cover- final
Added 2018-01-24 19:10:24 +0000 UTCwhat do you all think?
Comments
Looks great!
Raymond Jeffries
2018-01-25 15:25:07 +0000 UTCLooks pretty good.
Kevin McKinney
2018-01-25 13:53:59 +0000 UTCIt's out now
Blaise Corvin
2018-01-25 03:32:18 +0000 UTCI like it, makes me think of a cave or temple full of danger and treasure. Is Nora 26 coming before the weekend?
Robert Brandt
2018-01-24 21:14:13 +0000 UTCIt is also important to remember that the cover does not have to convey a scene from the story, but instead meet reader expectations based on genre. I think this one does that nicely.
Linton Bowers
2018-01-24 20:09:47 +0000 UTCThe number one complaint about the first cover was that it was too bright and happy, and that Delvers was an incredibly dark (?) book.
Blaise Corvin
2018-01-24 19:31:36 +0000 UTCFirst goblin cave
Blaise Corvin
2018-01-24 19:30:06 +0000 UTCMmm.. So, skulls and fire and darkness in the background.. Trite? Cliché? I mean, every book has those. Says nothing about your book in particular. Also, one of the reasons Delvers is good? It has happy moments mixed with the darkness. Humor and characters that really love each other. This cover does not suggest that. I'd prefer a background that was either bright and naturey (suggesting a wide new land and adventure) or else split between light and shadow. As a new reader, either of those would be more likely to get me to pick up the book. The images of the people are awesome tho.
Nick Ramsey
2018-01-24 19:20:03 +0000 UTCSword needs work. Otherwise it's amazing. And true to the characters.
Nick Ramsey
2018-01-24 19:16:51 +0000 UTCNice; but what is the background from in the book?
Silver Beard
2018-01-24 19:16:20 +0000 UTCNow that's cool
Nick Ramsey
2018-01-24 19:16:02 +0000 UTC
