Early Viewing: Borne of Caution Act 2 - Interlude 6
Added 2024-09-10 07:27:04 +0000 UTCOH HONEY ITS 3AM TIME FOR YOUR SLOP
BoC Act 2 Interlude 6 is FINALLY is ready.
Between life and re-writes, this one took a lot out of me. I also expected it to be a 3k word chapter but it got bigger. This will be the last interlude of act 2, as the finale is soon upon us.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KqEHbttST6gvxredeYekrobctOaFJeKej1OuTvPPq_4/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Thank god it’s back!!! I need this story, it’s so F-ing good!
WhatAFungi
2024-09-14 10:18:10 +0000 UTCHe knows her, he's just not calling her by name
MooMoo195
2024-09-11 22:20:54 +0000 UTCReal quick: is there a continuity error? Andre battled Zinnia and Lee at the Brawl at the Beach, but doesn't seem to know of her in this chapter.
Alex Reed
2024-09-11 17:09:38 +0000 UTCMany games are afoot it seems.
Basdawimp
2024-09-11 14:06:22 +0000 UTCBut their name would fall further on the signature list!
Derpydude9001
2024-09-11 08:07:46 +0000 UTCI do love some of the unintentional humor of the report email. Stating Latias as being 380 makes me realize how funny the numbering system is. That’d be like in our world publishing a paper on squirrels (animal number 35) lol. Makes sense for a collecting/discovery game but that researchers are saddled with that system because trainer culture is so dominant is hilarious. Although now that I think about it, maybe it’s more like the SCP numbering system where number progression makes sense as it also tracks the development of the foundation’s knowledge.
Russell Todd
2024-09-10 21:43:25 +0000 UTC…..more….
Russell Todd
2024-09-10 21:23:17 +0000 UTC….mmmmm…..
Russell Todd
2024-09-10 21:23:08 +0000 UTCDat wuz sum gud slop…. mmmmm…….
Russell Todd
2024-09-10 21:22:54 +0000 UTCOh boy! I love slop!
Russell Todd
2024-09-10 21:22:11 +0000 UTCI'm saying that there's not enough to go around. Whatever Andre is trying to do, his Absol isn't eating enough.
BelligerentGnu
2024-09-10 19:46:51 +0000 UTCActually the subtext told me it's the opposite. his pokemon appear to be trying to eat less for his sake. Andre straight up told his Absol he would have to eat more, or else he would force him to eat. that doesn't sound like Andre's starving them, that sounds like he's been through hard times and his pokemon are too selfless.
K
2024-09-10 18:55:33 +0000 UTCI honestly wonder if Lee suspects Octillarly’s mentality but is just letting him work it out.
Tyric Gaias
2024-09-10 15:17:15 +0000 UTCResearch value index I think; it's probably the people who give out budgets for studying rare pokemon.
Michael W
2024-09-10 15:11:10 +0000 UTCSo Octillary can believe that a a meteor is coming to attack the planet, but not in extra dimensional travelers? The Ultra beasts would blow his mind! 😄
Lola
2024-09-10 13:26:27 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed all the pov shifts for this chapter as it really feels like the last episode of a season one show before diving into season 2
clagann
2024-09-10 13:17:25 +0000 UTCAndre becomea more troubling. I had a lot of sympathy for his anti-authority and anti-nepotism, but allowing his pokemon to go without is too far. Swallow is an absolute fucking madlad. What a boss. For some reason, Ash's bit makes me think of the tired joke about olympic equestrianism. "The horse did all the work! He should get the medal!" Octillery continues to fascinate. Lastly, who are the RVI?
BelligerentGnu
2024-09-10 13:06:23 +0000 UTCWorth it. I can sleep now
Hazel Kings
2024-09-10 11:31:14 +0000 UTCJust before I went to sleep I thought 'I'd really like to read boc again, I hope Fuggmann is doing good.' I wake up and BOOM boc chapter. Hey fuggmann if I wonder that tonight as well, will we get another chapter? 😀
dragonslaver
2024-09-10 11:06:32 +0000 UTCGo back to sleep. It'll be there when you get up.
Fuggmann
2024-09-10 10:52:35 +0000 UTCIf I had stayed up another hour I would have caught the update immediately. Now I'm reading with a pounding head and not enough sleep 😂
Hazel Kings
2024-09-10 10:51:37 +0000 UTCThanks, I needed this today.
Chaz
2024-09-10 10:46:40 +0000 UTCAbsolutely brilliant. I have a feeling that Octillery's inevitable epiphany is going to be a deeply emotional moment in the story. So excited for Grovyle to evolve as well. What a great chapter! Love how the perspective transitioned between multiple plot points, giving us a high light reel of what to expect next. I wonder where Courtney will go now? Sure hope she doesn't turn up and bother Brendan again.
Ally LeDoux
2024-09-10 09:35:08 +0000 UTCOctillery's POV is the most fascinating one to me. It helps that he is so introspective and doesn't handwave anything unexplainable, simply because that'd hurt his intellectual pride. It's because of that he recognizes that there's something off with him- something he can't share with the team. LOL @ Birch. He's so done with the gang's nonsense, even if it's raking in the research fundings.
Runaway_Cactuar
2024-09-10 09:00:28 +0000 UTCI missed this so much 😭
Miguel
2024-09-10 08:37:29 +0000 UTCJust as I was about to fall asleep during my night shift !
Sunniest Day
2024-09-10 08:31:45 +0000 UTCHONEY I HAVE WORK TOMORROW- but have devoured regardless. Very good sir
RancidMango
2024-09-10 08:10:11 +0000 UTCNice to see this again thanks man!
Phoenix Bugg
2024-09-10 07:49:30 +0000 UTC
