Borne of Caution CH19
Added 2021-02-25 12:23:35 +0000 UTCWelp, I probably would have waited until tonight to post everywhere, but work is putting me on the road and my access to a computer will be limited for a bit, so up it goes now.
FF: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13390578/24/Borne-Of-Caution
SpaceBattles: https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/borne-of-caution-pokemon-isekai.849292/post-74382266
RoyalRoad: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36950/borne-of-caution/chapter/637316/chapter-19
AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/24161833/chapters/73022076#workskin
Enjoy!
Comments
Awesome chapter, I love how real it feels. Definitely worth the wait.
Tim Maguire
2021-02-26 07:22:51 +0000 UTCWow... I must say I’m impressed with how real and adult that conflict resolution felt. Both parties owning up to their mistakes og Lee’s internal critique to validate the argument for us readers was masterfully done. Personally I’m very pleased with how you handled this chapter in the end, whilst managing to stay true to your adult and realistic tone and style. 11/10 Also that last scene with breeder was adorable!
Drekin
2021-02-25 14:45:03 +0000 UTCLol sorry I couldn't get around to doing any editing till now :/ I'll still leave my thoughts but yeah good luck on your work!
Shawn Liu
2021-02-25 12:38:03 +0000 UTC
