Borne of Caution CH 18: Patron Editing
Added 2021-01-25 04:01:08 +0000 UTCHoly shid :DDDD I actually got 3 updates out in one month. This one is only average sized, but I think it's needed to set the tone for incoming chapters and the challenge the real pros of the pokemon world are going to present.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13Xcuqlm0QDxs96h3c_qOtoNfjQD2Z3yH7p_cCZAF1uY/edit?usp=sharing
In a day or so, It'll go live. Enjoy!
Comments
Maybe I miss understood, but it was Lee keeping her out, while she was trying to get in and comfort him. The sleeping stuff bothers me a lot too... bad feeling it is a side effect of all the telepathy on her young mind. Hopefully nothing permanent..
Yeno Memevig
2021-01-26 01:49:26 +0000 UTCI don't know what to think about that chapter. I was surprised to see Zinnia call him out, but it totally makes sense the way she explained it. I like that she has caught on to it, and I can understand why Lee is taking the actions he is taking, what makes the least since to me is Vulpix's actions. Why would she give him the cold shoulder like that? She is obviosity upset about being called out by Zinnia, but it just seems weird that she wouldn't want to reassure Lee. It makes me wonder about her exact origins. I really hope this is cleared up soon (Why Vulpix acted the way she did). I wonder if it has something to do with why she is sleeping so much.
2021-01-26 01:34:27 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. I recently stumbled upon pokemon fighting game called Pokken (official from Nintendo) and thought it was a good idea to mention it, in case you need more material or inspiration.
JohnZ
2021-01-25 09:59:02 +0000 UTCThe madman actually did it!
2021-01-25 09:28:35 +0000 UTCGreat work, i really want to dislike this chapter but it's important for character development. Go Corvi!
TheRaptorOfHermes
2021-01-25 07:47:59 +0000 UTCCorvi best wingman
Spartanstoryteller
2021-01-25 06:54:54 +0000 UTCWell damn, bit of a rollercoaster this one. Excellent chapter as always, it's so nice to get a story that actually deals with some real life stuff for once.
Meadow
2021-01-25 05:11:03 +0000 UTCIt's about time he face his emotions, memories and behaviour to self reflect because bottling it up for so long isn't safe and may lead to more serious problems and mistakes along the lines in the future. First of all he should share the story of his scars with his traveling companions. Leaving past behind is also a good idea. Or trying at least, It's hard to forget especially with scars on your face which will remind you of everything every time you look into mirror.
2021-01-25 05:06:58 +0000 UTCGreat chapter can't wait for the next. Glad to see the world getting some weight.
Yeno Memevig
2021-01-25 04:43:41 +0000 UTCSo... he's finally facing his problems. Good
Tyric Gaias
2021-01-25 04:18:31 +0000 UTCYuhhh, good work my man, and dang bro, deep chapter
Paul
2021-01-25 04:02:54 +0000 UTChuzzah! good shit. Congrats on the pace :)
Shawn Liu
2021-01-25 04:02:38 +0000 UTC
