Horny Witches Ch 16 (HP)
Added 2025-03-15 01:05:13 +0000 UTCHopefully this isn't too late in the evening! Finished it out at 19k words, hope you enjoy! Editing was a rush job, so hopefully there's no glaring issues! I'll do a more thorough pass tomorrow!
Here's Ch 16 Google Doc Link!
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Here's some character art if you care! (It's AI generated) Let me know if you guys like these and want to see more. I've seen some creators have AI 'character galleries' for each character and these didn't take much time to generate so I'll consider it if there's interest!
Narcissa Black
Cassandra Vole
Daphne & Astoria
Comments
Kk :)
Shadowz1337
2025-04-24 00:38:38 +0000 UTCWanted to have it out already, but decided to split some of my plans into two parts when it got too long. Mostly finished now, should be out tomorrow evening!
GodsShadow
2025-04-24 00:33:33 +0000 UTCLooking forward to next chapter. What can we expect for it?
Shadowz1337
2025-04-22 16:45:57 +0000 UTCThis weekend!
GodsShadow
2025-04-16 10:29:08 +0000 UTCAny update eta
Shadowz1337
2025-04-16 00:01:58 +0000 UTCsehr gut nur Reiko Sibazaki slytherin aus kapitel 13 ist sie nicht im Harem?
Markus Hertle
2025-03-17 14:27:36 +0000 UTCYeah, I was re-reading it because I send some parts of the fic to my gf, since she thinks the dialogues are funny, and I went “wait a minute… there’s two head girls, one of them who graduated the year before?!”
Vinccool96
2025-03-16 23:19:06 +0000 UTCWow, thanks for pointing that out! That might be my worst continuity error yet. I must've remembered setting Penelope as Head Girl in my other HP fic. Hmm, she might be demoted to a prefect, since I gave Cassandra a bigger spotlight.
GodsShadow
2025-03-16 22:55:02 +0000 UTCWait, hold on! In chapter 12, it’s said that Penelope Clearwater is Head Girl (even if she was not longer a student in canon), and now there’s a new one?!
Vinccool96
2025-03-16 21:12:49 +0000 UTCMy writing process in a nutshell lol. B/c the last chapter was only focused on Daphne, the last chapter’s poll was for the NEXT chapter. So, Ch 17 will be the ball, unless I have some wild inspiration between now and then.
GodsShadow
2025-03-15 07:36:24 +0000 UTCI liked the chapter, but I thought this one was supposed to start the Ball?
Brojo's StrangeJourney
2025-03-15 07:30:00 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter! I hope Minerva will be included soon. I’d also love to see Tonks Bella Andy Rosmerta and Amelia included in the near future as well.
Eric Dettenrieder
2025-03-15 05:47:01 +0000 UTCI like how you did it with the art cause sometimes I just wanna keep the character how it looks in my head but if I want to see how you envision the character all I have to do is click
John Miller
2025-03-15 03:45:10 +0000 UTCLove the images, and enjoyed the update. Keep up the great work
SiriusProblem55
2025-03-15 02:53:20 +0000 UTCI have the complete opposite opinion. I prefer the AI art. I can imagine my own character but having an actual image to base it off of makes the story more real for me. Besides, anyone who doesn't want to see them can just.. not click on the link.
mintmonarch424
2025-03-15 02:36:24 +0000 UTCMore s Cassandra would be good
rangleskov
2025-03-15 01:39:48 +0000 UTCYeah, my critique was mostly about the renders in general, not really about it being AI generated. On the topic of AI, would it be preferable to use an artist to do official renders? Sure, but it’s pricey, so I understand why.
Vinccool96
2025-03-15 01:29:55 +0000 UTCThat's a completely valid opinion, though not necessarily the fault of AI I'd say. Just character art in general. I OFTEN feel that way when authors in the novels I read include some pictures or art of characters after I've been developing a mental image for several books in a series. Since I don't manually sketch or draw to feed the AI I'm pretty limited to the style of characters. The AI I use tends to prefer anime-style, which is not always great for HP fans. But I only played around with it for a little bit, and was shocked by how easy it was to make fairly decent quality so thought I'd share for those interested.
GodsShadow
2025-03-15 01:27:24 +0000 UTCThe AI generated characters are okay, but honestly, I prefer when they don’t exist. I can have my own mental image, and not go (sometimes) “yeah, I didn’t picture them like that at all”
Vinccool96
2025-03-15 01:18:39 +0000 UTC
