Uzumaki Privilege Ch 5 (Naruto)
Added 2024-11-25 18:00:11 +0000 UTCSummary: It’s finally time for
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Fair enough. That’s the same reason I gave Shizune her own chapter. Tsunade usually hogs the attention
GodsShadow
2024-11-28 02:52:39 +0000 UTCI feel like the Hana/Tsume angle is done too often. Perhaps consider Hana as her own solo act and keep oyakodon to, say, Mikoto and a daughter?
Pope Yoda I
2024-11-28 02:35:16 +0000 UTCYugito and Mabui are two of my favorite misc characters, but we’ll probably focus on Konoha a while longer before we involve other villages.
GodsShadow
2024-11-26 14:52:33 +0000 UTCA certain catgirl would be perfect. And you definitely need Hana. I feel like she should compete with Tsume to see who gets Naruto first
adorsey
2024-11-25 20:17:28 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter. More scenes with Yugao are absolutely a plus. Don't be afraid to blueball your audience! Suggestion: * Have you considered other villages as 'Diplomatic Envoys'? Cloud has a catninja (* nudge nudge wink wink *) * Have you considered Hana as an Anbu subordinate of Yugao? * Have you considered more scenes with Kurenai? * Have you considered making Pakura a spy for Akatsuki and sending her 'recruiting'? Honestly, a few (more) polls to help further refine plot devices or characters you aren't too sure about wouldn't hurt.
Pope Yoda I
2024-11-25 18:41:52 +0000 UTC
