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Percy's Odyssey (Percy Jackson)

Summary: In ancient times, Pallas Athena guided

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I wouldn't call Annabeth the end game for this one. She seems suitable for a 'tough romance' by Percy but not the main (or only) romance. Glad you liked it, and I'd love to write more soon!

GodsShadow

I liked this a lot, and while Annabeth being the ending point seems logical I think it would be nice if that wasn’t the case. It’s been done SO many times and I’m just tired of wonderful, intresting, and unique stories (like this one) end with what is in my opinion the most boring option out of all of them. Percy having to explore to find a woman truly for him, or maybe loving an entire family of different women equally, or maybe even ending up with Aphrodite after learning and growing from all those different women. I love this one shot and your other stories. (PJO and HP ones) PLEASE don’t make Annabeth endgame, or at least don’t make her the only endgame woman. Granted no matter what I’ll end up reading everything, this chapter is so incredibly well written and I loved it sm. Greatly looking forward to more no matter what direction you take it in

KirbyLover

I really do hope you'll continue this as someone who is a fan of the Percy Jackson series I would love to see where you take this and how it would differ from the original story 😀

Shane

Great start, would love to see more. Liked what you did with Nancy though I would still prefer if Annabeth ends up being his main love interest.

Nikola Pleše

I liked the setup but couldn’t we finish the other PJ story first? Seems like that one was pretty close to being finished.

Brojo's StrangeJourney

Oh never mind this is new

Conner Jackson

Glad you liked it!

GodsShadow

Nancy is a very minor character that is only in the first few chapters of the first book.

GodsShadow

Never actually read these; they were a bit after my time. But my brother got really into them while I was in college and I enjoyed hearing about them from him. And I did love Greek mythology once. So I don’t know if Nancy is an original or not, but I don’t mind more. And I hear he added Norse/Egyptian/etc. stuff later, so that might be neat.

SpectralTime

I think this is maybe the best written chapter you’ve ever put out. I’m obsessed with this!

S

Flirting with bullies, monsters, gods, and more? Yes please.

VaticToxic

might be time for a new story just my opinion

Conner Jackson


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