Horny Witches Ch 13 (Harry Potter)
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would love for them to be under a charm that completely nullifies their lust that is passed down in greengrass family from father to son.
rice1234321
2024-11-15 10:58:17 +0000 UTCYes! Tonks and Andromeda will be featured, but I can't say when. Same with Bellatrix, gotta have all 3 black sisters.
GodsShadow
2024-11-11 21:13:05 +0000 UTCLove the story! Will Tonks and Andromeda eventually be involved? I saw you mentioned Amelia earlier in the story so I assume she will be. Madam Rosmerta would be great to add as well. Iβd love to see Bellatrix switch sides like Narcissa did. McGonagall would be a lot of fun to see her give in the way Pomfrey did.
Eric Dettenrieder
2024-11-11 16:32:51 +0000 UTCLook forward to seeing what the witches look like then! I'll admit I'm partial to Angelina myself.
Darth_Chinran
2024-11-10 09:48:31 +0000 UTCI appreciate the offer, but I'll probably get into it myself. I tinkered with it for my last DxD chapter and the reception was pretty positive. I'll see about including them in my other stories too.
GodsShadow
2024-11-10 09:22:55 +0000 UTCEither really. Though yeah, multiple characters with AI really is difficult. Though... if you'd like, I'm not terrible with AI so I could make like profile pics of some of the women that have shown up in the story so long as I have good descriptions of them.
Darth_Chinran
2024-11-10 09:19:04 +0000 UTCWhile Luna would be hard to get right when writing her, I also think she would be the funniest cause she would likely be into what was going on or not mind. I can even see her approaching Harry herself just catching him off guard with something like "Can I join your harem?" or something, she just would not beat around the bush. Still I understand why she is difficult to write for, and depending on the tone you want she might throw a wrench into it because of how her character is written in canon
Jonathan Santiago
2024-11-09 19:56:28 +0000 UTCDo you mean commission artists to draw them up? Or try to make AI art myself? Quality art would be great but I'd have to find a good artist and work it out with them. Haven't really given that any time. I think I could make AI look good, but scenes with multiple characters are hard to make the AI work with.
GodsShadow
2024-11-09 19:42:06 +0000 UTCIf I made myself at the survey her the sister of Daphne who will take it but then nothing prevents having fun with Tracey and the rest of Slytherin's beauties.
yan boul
2024-11-09 19:15:57 +0000 UTCI'm 'working' on a twincest bonus with the Patils, but I keep stuffing my schedule to the brim every week, so it's been postponed far longer than I intended. If I don't get it out by the end of the year, I'll dedicate a week to it in place of something else lol.
GodsShadow
2024-11-09 17:56:00 +0000 UTCis daphne a lesbian or asexual i wonder, can't wait to find out, also hope we get some twin incest with padme and Parvati, there are also the carrow twins Hestia and the other one
David Bray
2024-11-09 15:03:18 +0000 UTCHave you ever thought of having pics made for the pictures Harry has been taking throughout this story?
Darth_Chinran
2024-11-09 09:49:51 +0000 UTCich liebe luna wΓΌrde mich auch ΓΌber hannah und padma freuen zwillingsaction
Markus Hertle
2024-11-09 07:49:53 +0000 UTCAbsolutely. Brain auto-correct is a killer, especially when you're proof-reading 14k words in one sitting.
GodsShadow
2024-11-09 04:45:35 +0000 UTCIt happens, though! Sometimes one does need to just walk away and come back a week or two (or more) later in order to find flaws like this. Or you can just have someone point them out lol. I know when I'm writing my brain definitely glosses over mistakes because it KNOWS what should actually be there, but if I come back in a month it'll have forgotten that π
VaticToxic
2024-11-09 04:44:04 +0000 UTCHonesty it's because Luna is hard to write for most people. That's why I don't give recommendations for her. If I did, it'd be to write her as a shameless person. Doesn't bring up sex unless someone else does, and frankly discusses things Witches try to keep secret. Knows where to get sexy underwear, wants to make society recover (but her only idea for that is to make porn, cuz she still a Horny Witch). The reason for her being so shameless is her Mom, who drove Xeno insane by being as lewd as possible and trying to make him interested. It didn't work, he couldn't reconcile reality and goes on months long trips searching for creatures that don't exist.
VaticToxic
2024-11-09 04:41:27 +0000 UTCI greatly appreciate this, lol. I try my hardest to comb through my works as much as possible before posting. So nothing makes me feel worse than re-reading an old chapter and finding glaring flaws like this.
GodsShadow
2024-11-09 04:31:33 +0000 UTCYou switch between Keiko and Reiko a couple times. Might wanna fix just for consistency.
VaticToxic
2024-11-09 04:29:54 +0000 UTCYeah, Luna's the most intimidating character to write. It seems hard for authors to make her true to the character without just copy/pasting the same lines we've read a million times. Eg: 'Wear a butterbeer cork necklace to keep away the nargles' I'll try my best lol.
GodsShadow
2024-11-09 00:10:01 +0000 UTCYou can probably go through the Ravenclaw girls after this slytherin ones. Luna is particularly hard to come up ideas (I've commissioned a few fics on her). You need to find a particular balance between smuttiness and her little unique weirdness or else she's just a blonde airhead bimbo. You can always have Harry help her get back at the Ravenclaw girls bullying her as a Ravenclaw Arc, after the slytherin girls are done. Or have her help him fuck some magical creature girls while trying to look for her fantastical creatures (mermaids, centauress, etc).
Hao P
2024-11-09 00:04:43 +0000 UTCHm idk if itβs Luna not being a fave, I just think the way youβve written it is all the major Gryffindor girls went first culminating in a big orgy in the female dorms, and now weβre focusing on the relevant Slytherins next. I assume that the plan is to do all the relevant girls in each House as it each forms up in the story, not just randomly piecemeal as they come along even if they are more popular. Though I donβt know who you would do for Hufflepuff loll.
Brojo's StrangeJourney
2024-11-08 23:38:51 +0000 UTC
