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The Rival: Part 8

The Rival: Part 8

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Not sure I want either Lucinda or Dr Collins controlling the other. I like to think of them both as unstoppable goddess-like manipulators that can't hurt each other directly, but ruthlessly manipulate every other character (especially me!!!) to do the dirty work of fighting their war.

morphtavist

I love what a devoted servant Professor Williams is. So deeply programmed, loyal to Dr. Collins even now

Michael Schroeder

Nothing is certain in Presley's World, but I am cautiously optimistic that Dr. Collins will regain her dominant power and put Lucinda back under her control. That being said, I'd love to see Lucinda become one of Dr. Collins' disciples of strong hypnotherapy and open a practice of her own. Los Angeles is a big place, after all, so the more hypnotherapists, the better!

aelfstone

Exactly, we need part 9 asap

L

I am so glad that Professor Williams came to Dr Collins' rescue. I knew that somewhere deep inside her, the true Dr Collins would rise from Lucinda's hypnosis.

GeminiFantasy86

So glad to see Professor Williams help out Dr. Collins and I'm definitely looking forward to Dr. Collins next visit to Lucinda.

BlueBear3221

Can't wait to see more of Lucinda plan come to fruition

Tom Boston

Awesome! I knew Professor Williams would find a way to help Dr Collins or at least I had hoped she would. Still Petra lurks and we don't know her story. I get the feeling once Dr Collins is restored and Lucinda broken and banished there may be a final showdown? Sleep Dr Collins, rest and restore.

David

As accomplished as Lucinda is as a hypnotist, it looks like she just wasn't good enough to fully reprogram the doctor's loyalties. Such a pity.

James Pierce

I knew that Lucinda's control wasn't permanent. the doctor is too strong to be permanently defeated

L

Interesting episode, more deeply emotional and heartfelt than usual.

Bill Walker


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