Elysia
Added 2025-06-30 03:39:18 +0000 UTCI was going to upload it right after the prologue,
but something came up so it got delayed a bit.
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希望能尽快出续集啊，等不及了
huihui11123
2025-07-07 12:43:32 +0000 UTCOh, I forgot the pdf file. Thanks, it's been added, check it out.
Sdeng
2025-06-30 16:51:32 +0000 UTCwill this upload pdf file too?
Tiong Jia Yi
2025-06-30 16:44:44 +0000 UTCThanks for your comment
Sdeng
2025-06-30 08:59:14 +0000 UTCAlso, a few things that I was thinking about, since this is a really good setup. As a fellow writer, I respect your skill and abilities, and of course, please trust in your plans and ideas. These are mere observations that I have made, that may or may not help you, please use them or do not use them at your own decision and discretion. 1: What is the aftermath of the NTR / affair? Does Elysia get pregnant or does she avoid the consequence? Is there stress? Fear? 2: Does the guy that she was with and had the NTR with contact her, or does she contact him? Do they bump into each other alone, or perhaps while Elysia is with her boyfriend / lover? 3: Does Elysia miss the thrill of the NTR, perhaps enjoying it? Does she want to see the other guy casually, and secretly? Perhaps her lover has to keep going to work to leave her alone and she feels lonely and abandoned. 4: If she does get pregnant from the NTR, perhaps she tries to hide it by making love to her lover without a condom, but he feels it is too risky and she needs to convince him to hide her affair / NTR? 5: If she is pregnant and it is discovered later on, does she leave her lover for the other guy? 6: Perhaps there are no consequences and pregnancy from this, but Elysia continues the affair / NTR anyways, enjoying it? There are other things, but these were the immediate ones that I had thought of. As I said earlier, you have great skill with your work, and this looks exciting, so please trust in your vision, ideas, and plans. I merely wanted to point some things out as sometimes it helps to have some questions back and forth to consider the path forward in a story. Have a lovely day and take care!
Oldspice
2025-06-30 08:53:42 +0000 UTC
