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Do you want help to write a script?

hi guys! I am doing the script for the next comic I will draw for you, and I thing that could be a funny idea let you help me to write it if you want.

So this is the template for the comic storybord. You can choose a page and make a suggestion for what can happen on the  page, I can or not follow your suggestion. The characters I wanna use is Wong, Julia and Natalie from Jabcomix.

I will consider the suggestions until next Friday, and you will only know if I use it when I finally draw the comic page, ok? 


Do you want help to write a script? Do you want help to write a script?

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Page 2 - Wong comes over and offers his tutoring services with Sharona as an example of his abilities. The girls tell Wong they don't have any money to pay him. Wong tells them not to worry, they can do him a favor later. Julia gets an eyeful of Wong's package and whispers to Nat to check it out (also Sharona had been filling in the other girls re Wong's talents in the girl's PE locker room). Nat eyes get big and a big smile lights up her face. The girls agree to let Wong tutor them. Julia offers her house for first tutor session as she knows her Dad is "working late". Hmmm... wonder what would happen if Claire catches a glimpse of Wong's package?

hal

Well of course they would have to use the tree house or Natalie's house to study because Julia's dad Richard would be hovering the whole time and Wong's house is out because his annoying sister Ashley would never leave them alone. It would be nice if Sharona gave the girls a heads up and an endorsement, with a wink, about Wong's academic and physical prowess. We know the girls can handle him and his brain. To put the teacher in his place Wong would already know how to do that by having confronted the teacher before about handing out bogus grades for favors, therefore making the girls all the more grateful to Wong.

Robert B.

Hmmmmm . . . and of course N & J are only in this fix because they didn't go along with one nastycreature teacher's demands that they submit to his ugly self . . . who is lurking in the background. So, not only do they need Wong's academic smarts (and, of course, his other vigorous parts) they need him to help find way to thwart the nastycreature teacher! etc., etc. All while their threecum group pays attention to bigger things.

RH

The best way that Wong can keep those two BFFs happy at the same time is if he is also endowed with a long, talented tongue.

fannum


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