Wasn't able to proofread this one as much as usually like to, so there may be more typos than usual. I did run through it a few times to make sure there is nothing game breaking. As usual, should have most typos fixed after I get feedback for the public build.
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I just finished this build right after adastra and im loving the story and can't wait to see what comes next!
Vajra
2021-01-08 22:30:00 +0000 UTC
thanks for the amazing update ily <3
tanukio
2021-01-06 11:47:08 +0000 UTC
The music that plays when Scipio is recalling his time at elite school isn't playing on the Android version.
JohnWolfen
2021-01-06 00:26:03 +0000 UTC
this was a fantastic build as always. I loved it so much. can't wait to see more in the future.
Lagucci_Tiddle_Cans
2021-01-04 00:07:14 +0000 UTC
I like Scipio's character...but dayum! Neferu is so damn sexy...lol.
Darkvision777
2021-01-03 14:18:43 +0000 UTC
(Spoiler) Meera is long dead, not her time
PLZDJoe
2021-01-03 09:33:49 +0000 UTC
(Spoilers)
So this game takes place in the meera timeline? So was the meera ending supposed to be the “true” ending in adastra, cuz I haven’t gotten around to finishing that route yet (oopies lol)
bhp11
2021-01-03 06:40:31 +0000 UTC
Scipio is one of my favorite VN MCs! I can't wait to see more of Khemia itself and the relationship between Neferu and Scipio.
JohnWolfen
2021-01-03 00:04:41 +0000 UTC
No android version?
Asteros
2021-01-02 13:12:40 +0000 UTC
Two typos that I noticed:
#1: *when Scipio and Neferu are talking* "Still, this feels like the right path, and I imagine there has to be some level of genuine emotion involved if I am to ME most effective."
Correct "me" to "be".
#2: *when Scipio is staring out the window at Khemia* "But in TH end, we've paid dearly for it."
Correct "th" to "the".
Sнеf
2021-01-02 10:56:50 +0000 UTC
Looks like there was a mixup with the Linux link, the Linux link is to a build of The Smoke Room
Southpaw
2021-01-02 04:55:51 +0000 UTC
Loved the update, one of the most fantastic parts yet. Another question are there links to the soundtrack somewhere? I love them so much! (Nevermind found it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZboGXXxDvR8&feature=youtu.be )
CPN EZ
2021-01-02 03:34:30 +0000 UTC
Loved the update! A lot of context and information about Khemia was given here, apart from Scipios mental state. I can't wait to see how khemia is from the inside!
2021-01-02 01:57:32 +0000 UTC
No android yet?! Nuuuuuu!!!
KaiPhaze
2021-01-02 00:10:19 +0000 UTC
I've just finished the update and it left me with mixed feelings...
SPOILERS AHEAD
The scene that truly got to me was Neferu and Scipio talk. I mean that part when Neferu intentionally mentioned Alexios in order to implify, that he knows about Scipio's espionage mission. Even if the jackal probably figured out the wolven plan on his own he's still ready to trust Scipio and let their relationship grow. It left me with a question whether Neferu is just so lonely and good-hearted man, determined to have someone close to him or he's just about to play his own little game and outsmart the wolven schemes.
All the above makes me feel more and more disgusted with Amicus and I'm truly starting to dislike him. Why? Because he seems to be dishonest towards alliance with Khemia. He chose Scipio only to spy on Neferu and collect the intelligence using him and his closer relation to the jackal. Emperor's intentions seem to be slightly wicked because in my eyes he cares more for proving that wolves are higher in Galaxias hierarchy than true and clear alliance. Veteris' spiteful comments towards Khemia and lack of Amicus' negation at the end seem to prove that.
Though, I really hope I'm wrong because I truly loved Amicus in Adastra and I don't want to dislike him.
Mikky
2021-01-01 22:27:46 +0000 UTC
Ah so good! I hope Scipio can eventually open up even more to Neferu, I really see Nef as trying to connect and its so hard for Skip right now. I'm glad Neferu isn't mad at Skip though, that would be sad. Super crazy seeing [Spoiler] again though! Didn't expect her intervention to ever happen again, well see if its for better or for worse. So excited to meet Pharoah dad and the family!!! Great update, only spotted one or two spelling issues!
Cryptid
2021-01-01 21:34:25 +0000 UTC
When's the android build will be release?
JohnWolfen
2021-01-01 21:13:34 +0000 UTC
I love reading every update you put out Howly because it messes me up more than the last. Super excited and also worried for what's gonna happen but that's part of the charm! What a great way to start the new year, you did a really good job and I can't wait to finally set foot on Khemia!
2021-01-01 20:36:21 +0000 UTC
Great, good way to start the year :)
2021-01-01 20:32:30 +0000 UTC
Yheees you made my day with this. There is no better start to the year. Thank you for the upload!
Greyol
2021-01-01 20:25:52 +0000 UTC
I’m excited about it but we’re paying for a rough rough draft though....
BlackWolf007
2021-01-01 19:58:31 +0000 UTC
Take it no Android build yet? Oh well. I can do it on my laptop I guess.