NFSW π 9 - Suck
Added 2025-01-23 22:09:06 +0000 UTCI'll be so for real guys... this sketch is such a flop. I was planning on rendering, but it just looks so off, so I'll just leave it as a sketch and show you guys rather than just throwing it into the trash files.
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No worries, man. I believe you. This was never an argument or pissing contest. I just didn't remember it. Let's just let the artist cook and see what happens. I'm a greedy gal. :)
Li_Binah
2025-01-25 09:06:21 +0000 UTC@Li_Binah Your comment actually sent me on a search for the source of my claim (about "toxic workplace romance"), and I am going to be honest with you: I cannot find it. I remember quite clearly reading it, I remember it was about Lipstick Devil, and I even remember somebody commenting on it ("You had me at "toxic"" - that was the comment. It made me laugh, that's why I remembered it). But for now I cannot find it *anywhere*. Maybe it's on Moonbun's Patreon, I don't have an access to it right now, so I can't check. As for now there is nothing for me to say other than I am sorry, because I could have mislead some people, and until I find the source I'll stop spreading rumors.
The333Man
2025-01-25 09:04:09 +0000 UTCYou have a point. and yeah Verian is definitely not an Ideal Boss by any means atm, and Forcing Mina to satisfy her urges is sort of the point of this imo too. and I'm all for it, Let's get this kinky and fetishy and toxic. I'm sure over time if Character Development goes on, Verian could change.
Ravenna
2025-01-25 01:50:43 +0000 UTCHm, I'd have to look again because I don't remember that being a word that was used. But I could be wrong. However, I was only referring to sketch itself when I was asking questions about intent. It wasn't criticsm, it was simply constructive feedback. The aftercare I was mentioning was something to consider in the future. But if it was marketed as toxic work romamce? Then beef it up and keep on bringing iiiiiittttt! π
Li_Binah
2025-01-24 15:31:42 +0000 UTCI don't think it's a flop at all, I don't see anything wrong with it. Although I guess it's also hard for me to really say, since it's a sketch. I am not qualified to predict how it would look if finished. But the bottom line is - if you don't feel it's worth it, then it's all that matters.
The333Man
2025-01-24 13:16:12 +0000 UTCWasn't the entire idea behind "Lipstick Devil" to show us a "toxic workplace romance"? Wasn't the word "toxic" used to a letter? I said it multiple times - I do not know where the story is going. Maybe Verian and Mina develop a perfectly healthy realtionship along the way. But as for now I do not see why should we complain about such a portrayal, if it was literally what's promised. More than that - I think showing us a "caring Verian" in bonus arts would spoil an experience a bit, when she'll actually start to act like it in the main story. Because I honestly want to see it happen for the first time in the story, not in a "glimpse of the future". But maybe it's just me. In the end I do think it's the author's decision.
The333Man
2025-01-24 13:13:20 +0000 UTCLol, well that's a form of aftercare too!
Li_Binah
2025-01-24 00:04:52 +0000 UTCI think rather than that, just show that she cares by saying something afterwards. But that's just me.
Ravenna
2025-01-23 23:40:15 +0000 UTCI don't think it was a flop, but I do think you lost your drive. What were you trying to capture here? Some could be improved w color. Some could be improved through clothing placement. Is this BDSM, or are you working toward something else? If BDSM, don't forget to show aftercare. Otherwise it might turn into highly toxic SM.
Li_Binah
2025-01-23 22:26:11 +0000 UTCDamn I canβt wait to see them get involvedβ¦ Iβm anxiously waiting πππ«£πππ
LbcLove562
2025-01-23 22:18:59 +0000 UTCI like it, I can see the potential. and it's great!
Ravenna
2025-01-23 22:12:17 +0000 UTC
