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Sexy Steampunk Babes: Chapter Sixty Three

Yelena clambered out of the rubble, waving off the waiting arms of her guardswomen who’d gone before her. She emerged, coughing against the dust and acrid scent of smoke that clung to the air. It spoke a lot about the situation on the surface that the air down in what had once been her palace’s basement had been fresher.

Behind her, other guardswomen and staff clambered out of the freshly formed tunnel, exhausted. The former exhausted by the fight they’d been in barely a few minutes ago and the latter exhausted by forming the tunnel they’d just used to escape.

Well, that and saving our asses, she thought.

Had those researchers not also magically reinforced the blast doors of the firing range at just the right moment, she was reasonably certain they wouldn’t have held.

Turning her thoughts away from her recent brush with death, the elven woman saw that their tunneling had spat them out into the shattered remains of what had once been the grand reception hall of her palace. Marble pillars lay in jagged heaps, shattered chandeliers dripped molten glass, and the great dome that once crowned the central hall had collapsed inward, spilling twisted iron and brass supports like the ribs of some ancient beast.

Turning, she was pleased to see her party’s orb operator standing dutifully behind her, the palace guardswoman shaking grime from her sleeve even as her other hand protectively cradled the crystal communication device. A device that, despite the crack that had formed in its surface, remained essentially operational.

“Updates?” Yelena asked, even as another distant boom rattled what little remained of the palace walls.

The woman wiped a smudge of soot from her cheek, speaking quickly. “Enemy forces have successfully retreated from the city’s immediate airspace on different headings - save for one rear-guard vessel that is still bombarding the city. The Jellyfish’s captain believes it is doing so in an attempt to force us to focus our assets on it, rather than pursuing the other ships.”

So that was what that noise was, she thought with a grimace.

Part of her had hoped it was ships firing at each other rather than at her city. She didn’t know whether it was a blessing or a curse that from her position she couldn’t see the ship in question – it apparently occupying the space covered by what few bits of wall and ceiling remained in her palace’s possession.

“Any chance the Royal Navy might intercept them?” she asked.

The orb operator spoke quickly into her communicator, before shaking her head. “Jellyfish confirms the fleeing ships are headed up and down the coast rather than straight out to sea. They believe those ships intend to submerge again, but require time to reconfigure themselves for underwater travel. Time they will attain by moving away from the Royal Navy while moving up the coast. Once submerged, we will have no practical way of intercepting.”

Yelena almost brought up the Kraken Slayer as a means of doing so, before recalling that the ‘firing mechanism’ for those devices required the beasts to literally wrap their tentacles around the devices, lured in by mermaid chum bait.

Something she doubted these underships would emulate. And without a means of bringing the underships to the Kraken Slayer devices, they also had no means of locating said ships once they dove deep enough.

Though that once more begs the question of how these ships are traveling without running afoul of other Kraken? Surely our efforts to clear out the nests haven’t left the oceans that bereft of the beasts?

Pain flared in Yelena’s ribs as she shifted, but she ignored it. “Inform Lord Redwater that priority remains those ships that were above the palace. Those above the academy are entirely secondary to those that were above the palace or the remaining one here. Those ships cannot be allowed to escape.”

It pained her to say it, much more than the sensation in her chest, but the fact remained that keeping those ships from escaping was more important right now than sparing the city further harm.

The orb operator nodded, murmuring into the device as she relayed the orders. A moment later, she hesitated, then turned back to Yelena with a frown.

“The captain of the Jellyfish reports that Lord Redwater has already deployed with his Shards in pursuit of the retreating fleet.”

Yelena scoffed. Of course he had. For all that he was a man, none could ever accuse the recently elevated boy of being soft.

Especially not after tonight.

“With that said,” the guardswoman continued, “he left behind orders to one of his assets that wouldn’t be able to catch the fleeing ships anyway, and as such will be focusing on eliminating the rear-guard.”

That was a peculiar bit of phrasing, and not one that would have come from her orb operator – whose entire role was to relay information as succinctly as possible. No, her tone and frown suggested she was relaying those words verbatim.

“Oh?” Yelena arched a brow. “Which asset is-”

A thunderous crash split the sky, cutting her off. Instinctively, she and the others turned their gaze upward.

From the thick smoke above, a massive shape emerged - a silhouette of steel and copper.

No, not one shape. Two. Entangled.

The Jellyfish, the hybrid cruiser turned true-borne carrier, had rammed itself into the side of the much smaller enemy frigate, its reinforced prow embedded deep in the hull like the jaws of a massive predator.

The warship was pushing the enemy vessel out toward the sea, propellers whirring and rear thrusters belching aether as it forced its prey out from over the city and toward open waters.

Yelena had once seen a shark take a seal while touring the nearby bay. The sight above her now was eerily similar in a way - right down to the way the enemy frigate’s ruptured starboard aether tanks were venting shimmering blue-green mist in a trailing behind it, almost like ghostly blood.

Ramming wasn’t an unheard-of maneuver in aerial combat, but it was typically reserved for ships equipped with hardened prows designed for the task. Not something one expected from a carrier. Indeed, the Jellyfish had only managed to pull it off thanks to the thick, obscuring smoke of the burning city, allowing it to close the distance unseen.

As they watched, the massive warship began to disengage from its reluctant dance partner. Its great engines reversed thrust with a deep, groaning crump of metal, prying itself loose from its ruined prey. The enemy ship, now mortally wounded, began to list dangerously, its starboard aether ballasts failing to counteract the damage. It floundered in the air for only a moment before gravity took over, sending it into a slow, spiraling descent toward the bay below.

Then, from above, the Jellyfish’s great horn sounded - a deep, resonant bellow that reverberated through the sky like the victorious roar of some ancient leviathan.

Yelena exhaled, a slow smirk tugging at the corner of her lips, though it lasted for just a moment before she returned to business.

“Get a crew out there,” she said at last, turning to the orb operator. “I want prisoners.”

She already had her suspicions about who had been behind this attack, but before the night was out she intended to have confirmation.

“Yes, ma’am.” The woman immediately adjusted her orb, switching to a different frequency to summon the salvage crews from the nearby garrisons.

Yelena breathed deeply, crossing her arms as she watched through what had once been one of her palace walls, as the distant enemy ship slammed into the bay, sending up a great plume of seawater and aether.

She could only pray that William’s other ‘assets’ handled their targets just as effectively.

 

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Finding the enemy in the dark wasn’t as hard as it should have been. Not with William’s people guiding her in.

Shards weren’t much of a threat to airships once they were down to just their bolt-cannons. But they could track them, keep them in sight, and relay their movements to shards with access to more than just cannons.

Somehow.

And that’s the mystery, isn’t it? Marcille thought.

The Shards were communicating, not just with each other but with the Jellyfish itself. Without orbs. That much was certain. The issue was, no one could afford that many communication orbs - not for forty Shards.

Void, some poorer houses often had to choose between having an orb at their estate or aboard their airship, given they could only afford the one.

So for all these shards to be in communication? Well, just one more miracle William had pulled off, apparently.

For that matter, she still didn’t know how he’d gotten so many shard-cores. Nor why the damn things screeched like tortured banshees and stank like a burning alchemist’s shop. Seriously, she’d been fighting back the urge to gag when she clambered out of the Basilisk after being lowered into the hangar via the Jellyfish’s service elevator. The air down there had been thick with the acrid stink of hot metal, bear-blood and other fumes.

Unfortunately, her attempt to sneak a look under the hood of one of the Corsair-C’s - as one of the alchemists servicing the thing had offhandedly named them - had been cut short by William himself storming onto the scene and practically shoving her back into the Basilisk.

She huffed at the memory. Not because she’d been annoyed at that, but because it had been… enjoyable in a way.

Marcille wasn’t exactly the romantic sort, but when your future fiancé started begging you to launch in your “super-Shard” and hunt down an enemy airship, well… you did exactly that.

Not that she wasn’t going to demand answers later.

Like how those alchemists were involved in all this?

She had her theories, of course. But right now, she had bigger things to worry about.

A glint of moonlight caught her eye. The Shard she’d been following signaled their arrival, a flag popping up as it pulled away, but she didn’t need the confirmation.

She could see it, the enemy undership, cutting a silver streak through the night sky as moonlight gleamed off its hull.

Her guide peeled up, rising into the clouds to join two other shards she now noticed were lurking above and back from the airship, out of weapons range but close enough to watch.

Well, she thought as she pulled on the control stick, it seems only right that the Basilisk has witnesses to its first kill.

History was about to be made after all – and while the Basilisk’s debut would likely end up being a footnote to other events of the evening, she intended to make sure it was still worthy of record.

To that end, she focused her attention on the foe as she banked around to ready her attack run.

The undership made no move to change course, nor had she expected them to. They were too focused on running as fast as they could.

And though Marcille had no idea how they’d achieved the feat, knowing that these ships were capable of traveling under the waves meant their strategy was clear - stick to the coastline, avoid the navy moving in from the east, and when the time was right, dive into the waters for cover.

The only reason this one hadn’t done so yet was that the transformation from airship to undership clearly needed time.

Marcille had no intention of giving them that time.

“Coming up on the target,” she announced into the speaking tube.

Marcille glanced back at her rear gunner as she spoke. The academy guard she’d left the academy with had been replaced as the woman was taken away for healing. Her new crew member was a dark elf. Sharp-eyed, composed, from what little she’d seen of the other young woman.

Marline, she thought her name was. One of William’s teammates.

“Understood,” the girl in question replied coolly.

…Marcille would have preferred her sister on the guns. Not least because she would never hear the end of it if the Basilisk got its first kill without her.

Unfortunately, needs must as the Fae drive, she thought as the enemy ship loomed larger in the cockpit glass, a hulking shape of riveted steel and copper tubing, its blue-green exhaust almost luminescent under the moonlight.

Marcille’s hands tightened on the controls. No enemy Shards in sight. No escorts either. The enemy weren’t even trying to dodge.

This was perfect.

With that said, she still needed to contend with the deck gunners that opened fire as she approached, spitting wild shots in her direction. She ignored them. A one-in-a-million hit was the only real danger, and she wasn’t about to be scared off by that.

The Basilisk’s bomb bay yawned open, even as she pulled another lever that had the shard almost sag in the air as power was diverted from the machine’s propellers to the payload in the bay.

She had one shot.

She wouldn’t miss.

She yanked back on the launch-lever.

The aircraft lurched ever so slightly as the thousand-pound javelin was lowered in its cradle until it was outside the craft, the sudden shift in aerodynamics almost imperceptible before the power of its twin aether cores.

For just a moment, there was no sound, before a shriek rang through the night as the javelin’s aether-thrusters kicked in, the compressed gas so recently supplied by the Basilisk’s dual cores bursting free as the rear-cap fell away. The weapon surged forward on a stream of aether, accelerating hard as its stabilizers flared open, guiding it with unerring precision toward its mark.

Marcille was already pulling up when the javelin struck with an almight clang.

The sheer weight and momentum of the weapon carried it deep into the enemy ship’s hull, a spear of steel and sorcery punching through the riveted plates like parchment.

Then…

Nothing.

Marcille’s breath hitched.

Did it fail? Had the charge-

A thunderclap split the night. A detonation unlike any she had ever heard before.

The Basilisk bucked like a wild beast, its controls shuddering in her grip as a concussive shockwave nearly sent it off course. Marcille gritted her teeth, muscles straining as she fought the stick, forcing her machine back into line.

After she did, and she was sure there’d be no other surprises, she wheeled around - and her pulse froze.

There was a hole in the enemy ship.

A gaping, unnatural void had been blown into the enemy airship’s flank, edges still glowing with residual heat. Smoke and aether poured from the wound, curling like ghostly tendrils against the moonlit sky.

The airship was listing, its once-majestic frame twisting and shuddering in slow-motion catastrophe.

One of its propeller wings was gone.

Gone.

Marcille’s grip on the controls tightened.

William, what the fuck did you put into my javelin?

It shouldn’t have done that.

Javelins were incendiary devices containing a mixture of bear-blood or demon-piss. The steel-spear-like cap intended to pierce through the hull of a ship before unleashing its liquid fire payload within.

And a thousand pound javelin could hold a lot of liquid.

Or something else, apparently, she thought.

Because the javelin she’d just launched had gone off like someone had layered a hundred lightning bolts on it. Yet they hadn’t. That she could tell. There’d been no enchantments that she could sense. Nothing beyond the faint alchemical residue of a bear-blood infusion.

There’d been nothing that should have caused this.

The enemy airship shuddered, tilting past the point of recovery as it started to drop.

The ship was done.

Marcille exhaled, a slow, steady breath as the adrenaline settled.

Because for all that she now had even more questions for her fiancé, the job was done. And as she glanced up towards her trio of watchers, she knew they were already reporting that success.

Somehow.

 

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“Fifth target is down. That’s all of them,” the Jellyfish’s orb operator relayed, voice clear and unwavering.

For a moment, the bridge was silent. Then cheers erupted as a wave of victorious sentiment rippled through the command deck, officers and crew alike exchanging grins, claps on the back, and murmured exclamations of relief and triumph.

William didn’t join in, though he made sure to smile and nod appropriately at the correct moments.

It wouldn’t do to sour the mood.

Still, as he leaned against the brass railing at the center of the bridge, arms crossed, his gaze drifted to the command board at the center of the room – taking in the many little ship and shard shaped figures that had placed atop the map of the capital.

The whole thing was a complex miniatures and lines, marking the positions of various fleet elements and their relative states of supply and armor.

He watched as the little red ship depicting an enemy was plucked from the board and placed to the side.

And all he could think was… how anti-climactic it all was.

He had expected something to go wrong. Had braced for it. Had prepared himself to step in at the last moment - to pull out some last-ditch innovation, some desperate maneuver that would snatch victory from the jaws of disaster.

But… no.

His people had hunted down the fleeing ships with almost casual ease. The Basilisk had been the final one to report in, but the other two wings - ten Corsairs armed with rockets - had already downed their own targets.

It had been clinical.

The precision. The efficiency. The absolute inevitability of it all.

Like clockwork.

If anything, the greatest excitement had come not from the shards but from his own ship the Jellyfish ramming the enemy’s rearguard vessel like some iron leviathan dragging its prey into the abyss.

William’s fingers tapped idly against the brass railing.

He was happy. He supposed.

And the more he thought about it, the more he considered that in many ways, the real final ‘twist’ had actually happened hours ago.

The initial attack on the capital - that had been the moment. An unexpected strike. One that might well have undone everything before he was ready.

Forcing him to launch the Jellyfish before it was ready. Forcing him to send pilots into battle in equipment they barely understood - radios, weapons, the planes themselves.

It was a miracle they had managed to pull this off at all.

He glanced at the casualty report, written in chalk on a board at the back of the room.

Thirteen craft down. Eight chutes recorded. Last known positions written down for recovery later. Though that last detail was somewhat superfluous given they’d bailed out over a friendly city.

At the very least, his training cadre was down five pilots. And that assumed every pilot who pulled a chute survived. There was a decent chance some of them hadn’t survived, succumbing either to chaos on the ground or as a result of wounds they might have suffered when their plane was shot out from under them.

He wouldn’t have a full tally until morning.

As a result, William knew he should feel something about that.

Guilt, maybe? Some sense of responsibility?

It was his decision to withhold vital information on these shards that had likely caused some of those deaths.

Yet…

He felt nothing.

His grip tightened on the railing.

He needed the secrecy. Still did, in many ways. But that was over now. The ship had sailed. The secrets were out.

Combustion engines.

Gunpowder.

Radios.

All of it was in the open now.

He had opened Pandora’s box - and there was no going back.

He was firmly on the stage.

And as a result, people would come for him. For his innovations. For the knowledge he had dragged into this world, reshaping the balance of power like a hammer to glass.

And as a harrowed person – because there was no hiding that now either - he had precious few legal protections.

In the eyes of the law, he was less a person and more… unexploded ordnance.

Going forward, his only protections would come from his reputation. And the force in his arm.

Would it be enough?

He wasn’t sure.

But there was no going back now.

“Don’t grin like that, it’s creepy,” Olzenya’s voice opined from behind him.

“Ack, don’t be like that,” Bonnlyn grunted, having just recently clambered out of a cockpit and made her way to the bridge. “Let the boy celebrate his success. We just saved the capital!”

The elf scoffed. “And he can celebrate that. Like a normal person. Not, smiling like a gargoyle.”

Had he been smiling? He hadn’t noticed.

Still, with some thought, he managed to force his expression into something less… whatever it was Olzenya had been complaining about as he turned to his team.

“Celebrations can wait for a little bit, I think. Last I checked, the capital was still on fire and there are likely some enemy combatants skulking about down there still.”

The fight was over, but the fighting wasn’t quite done yet.

It would be soon though.

And when it was, a lot of people would have a lot of questions for him.

For his part, he had but one.

Where the fuck is Griffith?


Comments

It could be that he took off with the strike to take out the closest one and then returned to the Jellyfish after confirming that the Corsairs could handle it without him. That way he has returned by the time the report from the Basilisk group came in.

Trevayne

Inconsistency I noticed: “The captain of the Jellyfish reports that Lord Redwater has already deployed with his Shards in pursuit of the retreating fleet.” ... “With that said,” the guardswoman continued, “he left behind orders to one of his assets that wouldn’t be able to catch the fleeing ships anyway, and as such will be focusing on eliminating the rear-guard.” This implies that William implies that William himself got into a shard to go hunt the escaping ships, ordering the Jellyfish to conduct the ramming attack in his absence. But when we next see him, he's still on the Jellyfish, listening as his pilots destroy all the ships without him.

Andrew Lechner

"Generals gathered in their masses... Just like witches at Black Masses... Evil Minds that plot destruction... Sorceror of Death's construction..." This isn't quite what I feel is going through Wil's head as he's sitting there grinning like a demon watching the downfall of his foes, but if not War Pigs, than something similar.

Dancingrage

Ten minutes? Those are rookie numbers. I refresh every 5

O

Great news. Time to start hitting the refresh button every ten minutes.

Trevayne

Refresh refresh refresh, ugh nothing yet.

MS

Beta readers have it :D

Blue Fishcake

Ah that lovely personality of hers. Poor girl, at least she seems to be growing as a member of Williams team

MS

So Blue you ALWAYS update on American Friday?

Found&Lost

IIRC she had several sisters and had managed to offend most of them. That was why she got placed in the Royal house at the academy along with the rest of the commoners and problematic noble offspring.

Trevayne

"Blue Fishcake is never late, nor is he early, he releases precisely when he means to. ;)" The "I was captured by an evil wizard and had to escape by flying on eagles" excuse.

Random Information

Another random thought... Olzenya... what was her family situation?

MarakEvans

I am looking forward to all the big decisions to come. One of the first is what to do with the Lunite prisoners. Technically they could just execute them all as pirates and terrorists, depending on the legalities. The Lunites certainly tried to make this a deniable operation. We know they shot down at least seven Lunite airships. If they were all Lunite frigates, that would suggest relatively low crew numbers, say 40-50 per ship, but they weren't. It specifically stated that they used base hulls from a variety of sources, even a couple of Lindholm airships. That suggests more like 100 or so per airship, so roughly 700 for the seven airships, not counting the commandos in the landing forces. Assuming the airships had at least 50% dead due to being shot down, that suggests around 200-300 prisoners. As for the landing forces, most of the ones at the palace are dead, but the ones at the academy will be trying to escape or evade capture. Their best bet might be to steal shards and flee that way. A few might get away, but as soon as they realize that is happening, William could send a few Corsairs there to do the same CAP tactic on any shards taking off at the academy. The other interesting question aside from how many prisoners and what they do with them, is what intelligence can they expect to get from the wrecks. OTL naval vessels sink in the water and may well burn first. These wrecks are mostly on land and they have many fewer flammable items in board (no fuel oil, aviation gasoline, or explosives in the magazines, for example). This suggests that unless classified documents are specifically destroyed (incendiaries in the safe), they should be salvageable. The really interesting question is whether the Lunites had screamers on their underships. I suspect they didn't, since the knowledge of the screamer was Yotul's last bargaining chip. It is possible that the Lunites were screwed as soon as Yotul and the orcs left. If they tried to escape by submerging and didn't have screamers, they might well have been killed by kraken before they got back to Lunite territory.

Trevayne

Blue Fishcake is never late, nor is he early, he releases precisely when he means to. ;)

The Fire Piper

Sooo in 8 hours and 38 minutes!! :P

Vonbaron

Assume American Friday and you'll never be disappointed.

Blue Fishcake

Replying to @Cineos - Blue has already taken care of that. A bolt bow doesn't care if it is fired by a mage or a plebian. It just needs to have the gas chamber loaded by a mage. A crossbow doesn't even need that. I don't think William has introduced regular guns yet aside from the .50 cal machine guns on the Corsairs.

Trevayne

Very glad to hear it. I was wondering if you meant no more than a week from Friday or a week from Sunday?

Trevayne

Woo hoo, tomorrow at 12am, refresh page every hour. Blue what time zone are u in? Thanks for update

MS

What time tomorrow?

O

Tomorrow is the day! Thanks for all your patience :D

Blue Fishcake

I mean of course? Thats like his whole shtick, overturning the current balance of power by making plebs able to shoot high level mages in the face.

Cineos

There should be one more chapter for this book. That will be an epilogue and probably includes views of the reactions to the battle by various parties. Hopefully we will also find out what happened to Griffith. We may also get a sense of whether William has to worry about being institutionalized because he is harrowed.

Trevayne

Damn it! Is this the last chapter or something?!?! I hate cliff hangers man!

Hunter

Replying to @MASC - I could see the argument that technically he is still her son. She contributed her genes and the father contributed his. From a biological sense he is her son. The thing is there has been a software change in that George Statfield's memories are running on William Ashfield's body. The new "William Ashfield" (now Redwater) is indeed a composite personality resulting from those memories growing up again as a male Ashfield in the original William's body. One really interesting thing would be if Lady Ashfield asks him why he feels the way he does about slavery. Clearly he does feel strongly about it, but we know next to nothing about George Statfield, so we don't know why George has been planning his actions for the last 10+ years. About the only things we know about George Statfield are that he was an old man when he died and he was an only child. This lack of knowledge has led some to theorize that his anti-slavery and pros democracy attitudes were inserted by the Fae to generate conflict and emotions.

Trevayne

Can see Lady Ashfield debating whether if he truly still is her son due to the George persona. Will could argue with his mother that he is an amalgamation of two people as he has been shown to sway between his George and William identities subconsciously. So technically he didn’t truely die entirely from the harrowing.

MASC

Quibble, the only airship taken out with a single shot from a shard in this battle was the one shot down by the Basilisk. The Basilisk is a conventional shard, although it does use two shard cores and Marcille is a mage. The airships shot down by the Corsairs were taken out by multiple Corsairs firing multiple rockets. I think it took multiple Corsairs because the rockets aren't that powerful (the 5" HVAR had 7.5 lb of explosives in its warhead). However, once 20-30 or more rockets have been fired into a single airship, the quantity tells. The other issue is they were inexperienced pilots firing their weapons for the first time. Understandably, they missed several times, but when each Corsair has 8-10 rockets, they can afford to miss with some. They might have gotten one-shot kills with Corsairs if they used divebombing tactics with 1,000 lb bombs, but hitting a moving airship would have required going into its pivot gun range. I agree that the current most powerful weapon is a large armored airship. I think the current period in this world resembles the 1920s in OTL, where aircraft were appearing on carriers and could potentially take out battleships, but it wasn't confirmed yet. ITTL, I think some believe it could happen and there may have been skirmishes where it did happen. For that matter, the first airship wrecked by shards in this battle was one of the defending Crown Vassal ships, which was hit by three fire javelins from Lunite shards and was burning uncontrollably. As for what Blackstone decides to do, you may well be right. They could easily try to attack now, taking advantage of the losses the Crown Vassals suffered. However, they could also delay until they have a better idea of how the attack was defeated. I also think the politics might be against them as they would be seen as stabbing the crown in the back after it has been weakened by a surprise attack from a foreign power. They would definitely want to be sure that New Haven was going along. Otherwise, they are probably on even terms with the RN, before thinking about the Jellyfish.

Trevayne

From my understanding in this world the "biggest baddest" is a steel / kraken armoured air ship. William in just one evening showed the world that one non ether powered single pilot plane can take down this worlds aircraft carrier/battleship in a single strike with a rookie normie. Everyone in power in this world is going to have minds blown, especially the elves outside of yelena and poeple close to her. I would expect new haven to pull what allies they have and attack asap. Not only to judge just how effective these new weapons are to fight against but to see if these new weapons are some kind of new prototype and not in any real numbers. I can imagine Lunite would want someone else other than themselves to preform that test. I can't wait to see how this all plays out.

MS

@MS said Given that William understands and excepts the role he is playing in this world and the deaths which will result how would William react to Griffiths death at the hands of an enemy? While I don't see his plans changing i do think he may over react to the detriment of those that killed her. I said Replying to @MS - Good question. I think he would be more reasonable than if somebody killed Olivia, that isn't saying much. He doesn't have to burn the world to burn the Lunite Empire. This brings up an interesting question. Do people on this world have a concept for weapons of mass destruction? I think they can conduct bombing from airships and there was a mention of a chemical weapons attack supposedly carried out by rogue elements. However, just how bad is the worst attack? Have the Lunites or Solites destroyed a city in one attack or a short series of attacks? Is it allowed by the local version of the laws of warfare/Geneva Convention equivalent? I would expect the elves, being long-lived, but slow breeding, might have reservations about killing cities. Dead people can't do productive work for their empires. Feudalism tends to encourage the attitude that war is conducted by and for the upper classes. Especially since in this world, there is not nearly the same need for mass armies. If the average airship has a crew of 200, a hundred airships uses only 20,000 for their crews. That is a lot smaller than say Napoleon's 200,000-strong Grand Army going into Russia, and much smaller still than the European armies of WW1. Given that, I would not be surprised if city burning does not happen often. I expect cities usually surrender when the defending airship fleets are defeated and driven off. William may change that paradigm. He doesn't have to invent nuclear weapons, just fill up airships with lots of bear blood incendiaries and keep scattering them over the city until it burns. For that matter, maybe his next project after the Corsair is the B-29.

Trevayne

Replying to @MS - Good question. I think he would be more reasonable than if somebody killed Olivia, that isn't saying much. He doesn't have to burn the world to burn the Lunite Empire.

Trevayne

Agreed. I spend way too much time looking for an update or a reason to comment.

Trevayne

Lol same here. I try to let the stories build up so I can enjoy a longer period of enjoyment but I lack the willpower and give in within a minute of seeing new posting.

MS

I kinda hate that I'm so invested in this story that I've been checking this site every few hours while I'm awake. On the flip side, Blue knows he's getting my monthly check so long as he can keep doing that.

DMR1

Given that William understands and excepts the role he is playing in this world and the deaths which will result how would William react to Griffiths death at the hands of an enemy? While I don't see his plans changing i do think he may over react to the detriment of those that killed her.

MS

He only needs one of the twins to survive for his plans. And while he holds affection for them, it's an entirely political marriage at this time. Griffith's the only person on the planet he's romantically involved with for no other reason than he likes her. Even Xela, part of it was about securing her loyalty.

Blue Fishcake

I still think William is being his drama king self by reflecting on his opening Pandora's box. He is right that he is now going to be a person of great interest to many people. Given that, how good a personal combatant is he? We know that he just started to learn swordsmanship when he got to the Academy. We also know that he is a decent combat mage, although he is usually using his magic for crafting rather than holding it ready for combat. We also know he is a good shot. Given all of those things, I think he would be better off relying on guards. He is decent, but there are better.

Trevayne

I think he really cares about Griffith most. She is his longest running romance at this point, although Xela may be getting there. The twins are more political at this point, although it may become more. I expect he might have gotten word about Clarice, but it just hasn't been mentioned yet. Marcille would certainly want to know as soon as possible. I think he is engaged to both of them as part of their deal to get his support for their bid for the Summerfield duchy.

Trevayne

Is he not also wondering about Marcille’s sister? (And Is he engaged to just Marcille or both of them?)

Jacob

Thinking some more about radios, the ones in the Corsairs draw their power from the engine's electrical system. I wonder if William had to design a generator to power the ones on the airships and what powers them. Do they have small aether turbines to drive the generators producing power for the radios or do they use a steam or IC engine? I expect right now they are using aether turbines, but that might change.

Trevayne

Thinking more about reactions to William, I wonder how many are going to think: "Lets see, he has started a naval revolution and interfered with a budding civil war, along with figuring out how to kill the previously unkillable krakens. All this as a sophomore who isn't even 20. What is he going to do as an adult?"

Trevayne

Good question. I think the most useful thing would be more internal subdivision and provisions for shifting ballast. Both the airships we saw getting taken out in this chapter lost lots of aether providing lift when the gas tanks on one side were vented by a 1000 lb armor piercing bomb and an airship ramming attack. Those attacks might be too hard to defend against, but if the target airship had its aether gas lifting force in at least 8 smaller tanks, they might have only lost 2-3 gas tanks and retained enough lift to stay in the air. As it was, they lost too much on that side and started into a death spiral resulting in a crash. Almost as important as the loss of lift was the loss on one side tending to roll and destabilize the airship. This was compounded by to loss of one motor wing to the bomb explosion and disabling a wing from the ramming. This serves to further destabilize the airship because the thrust is now unbalanced. An OTL four-engine aircraft is also much harder to fly after losing both engines in the same wing.

Trevayne

Yes sect is definitely a good read. IMHO, the fav order is 1. Steam, 2. Sect and way down on the list is space babes. I just don't see Jason as having any growth to him, unless it's just shagging his way through space. I Love the Shil’vati universe but Jason needs to grow the hell up.

MS

Olivia would certainly benefit from that discussion, learning just how the politics of her world really works, and not to be a pawn. If she played her cards right she could end up with far greater allies than some xenophobic humans that think their the tough kid on the block.

MS

I don't think we will have anymore airship carnage for a while, but I'm wondering what would happen if an airship got a section blown off it and what potential damage control options William might invent

MaybeASquid

Last chapter (62) @Bluefishcake said ...You make it sound like William would have a problem with that? He'd not order it explicitly, but... He's not Jack. Where Jack was a bad guy who wasn't really a bad guy, William is a 'good guy' who isn't really that good a guy. You are the author and he is your character, but there is a lot left open to interpretation. One of the problems with William as a character is that we don't know him. He is apparently the result of a harrowing that loaded the seriously enhanced memories of George Statfield into the body of a toddler. We know he grew up as William Ashfield, now Redwater. We know he was able to do a massive amount of planning and used great self-discipline to learn many things before arriving at the academy. He has been working according to longstanding plans, but we don't know why, because we don't know him. That said, we still don't know much about him. We know next to nothing about George Statfield aside from his having lived a full life beforehand and that he feels icky at the thought of a relationship with anyone his approximate biological age because mentally he is so much older. The twins are older than he is in biological terms, but he still feels like he is violating his own standards. The author has stated that he is not that good a guy. Fair enough, but I question just how bad a guy he is. I don't see a bad guy stealing a shard to rescue some peasants and that was how he was introduced some 60+ chapters ago. The real question about William is why does he do the things he does. Is it because the harrowing drives him to seek conflict? Why does he have such a visceral opposition to slavery, considering it seemed to be normal in this new culture he has grown up (for the second time) in? I suspect the answers are in the past of George Statfield. Jack from Sect started out as a bad guy becoming better. He was still pretty ruthless at the end, but responsibility grew on him, and grew him. We have no idea who George Statfield was, so it is really hard to say if his behaviours come from his past or from the Fae? Maybe he was an amateur historian familiar with the US Civil War and the horrors of slavery that led up to it? Maybe he was an immigrant with family members who were trafficked. Maybe it is just his own morals? We don't know, because we don't know anything about him. This leads to speculation that he is a robot with his purposes directed by the Fae.

Trevayne

Replying to Arkyrion and MS - I finally got around to reading Sect so now I understand. It was excellent. I think Steampunk is still my favourite by a hair, but I certainly wouldn't mind another arc of Sect. As for Huang, I can just see her nagging until Jack shuts her up by building an aerospace plane. She certainly can no longer fly by ki, but I expect the ability to fly higher and faster than any of her siblings would be a pretty good replacement. For that matter, depending on the cost to place mass in orbit, rods from god are a reasonable substitute for divine lightning.

Trevayne

Replying to Kaywye - He did talk to his mother and actually negotiated. He didn't fly over in his airship and demand his sister at gunpoint. For that matter, if Harrowing demands that he solve everything with violence, why is his former family still alive? I think his issues stem more from the fact that negotiation didn't get him anywhere with his family before so he figured direct action was the only thing that worked. He is starting to realize that while he had no power as a child in his family, he does have power now as a count in his own right. People listen to him and take him seriously. They will be even more inclined to do so after this battle. Not only is he a count with an airship, his airship is probably the single most powerful weapon on the planet.

Trevayne

Are you going to go back and edit the chapters themselves, or are you going to rerelease them? If the former, would you be able to make a post about how you edited them?

SmallTownBo

Honestly, I don't think he's capable of anything other than gunboat diplomacy. Remember, his personality is being influenced by the harrowing he experienced. I believe that it makes him less likely to use tools other than the Hammer to get jobs done.

Kaywye

A grand idea I would love to see it in the story but no skin off my back if we don't get that conversation.

br900

Another thing I would like to see in the epilogue is the first meeting between William and Tyana. I imagine she has really mixed feelings about being lured out of the capital and away from its defense while it is sneak attacked and her mother is nearly killed. She is grateful that William's airship and shards saved her mother and many others, but she probably has mixed feelings that the fleet she leads is now obsolescent at best.

Trevayne

That would be interesting, Olivia meeting the Queen. A frank discussion between them about why the plots Olivia was involved in were likely to lead to her death would be interesting. It is one thing to hear it from her brother, it is another to hear it from the monarch who would have ordered it.

Trevayne

I vote she stays at Williams place!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MS

I am wondering where Yelena will be staying, now that her Palace is in Ruins. Does she have something like Windsor Castle? Or will she be staying in the Academy or, heck, take residance in Redwater until her Palace has been rebuild?

Drasta Septim

Huang... Sect... William... Steampunk? Do we mean Jack?

MarakEvans

Bet he never knew how many souls would shrug off that mortal coil from his math

JollyRodger

Thinking some more about Yelena, who are her people? Monarchs rarely rule alone. They have advisors and councillors. Does Yelena have a chancellor or privy council? We have seen that one of her daughters, Tyana, is the admiral running the Royal Navy's main force. Who runs her treasury? I really enjoy this story, but I think that is one of its weaknesses. If you are telling a story about William's time at the academy, the government doesn't need much fleshing out. However, he is now going to be involved in national decision-making for the queendom. He is advocating for several major policy changes. Some of them, like emancipation, go along with the Queen's own intentions. Some, like democracy and an orcish homeland, do not. Previously a lot could be explained by the need for security. That need has decreased. The fact that Lindholm has several innovations in use is now obvious or will be very soon as the news of the battle spreads. While the details of just how the innovations work and how to build them will still be secrets, that they exist is no longer a secret and more of the government needs to be involved. It sounds like a family business, but the reason I ask is who would Yelena seek advice from? For that matter, what is her background? Did she serve in the Royal Navy? We know she is familiar with personal combat, but how well does she know shards and airships? Does she think William got very lucky or does she know enough to realize that the airship combat paradigm has changed? Even if she is reasonably familiar with airship combat to appreciate the changes, I expect she would want to discuss things with Tyana, her admiral daughter to get a second opinion. She would also want to talk with her heir and foreign minister, her daughter Palmer IIRC.

Trevayne

The audacity not to read Sect is tantamount to treason. Read it at once

O

I am really looking for any indication in the next chapter of what Yelena wants to do in response to this Lunite attack. My understanding is that Lindholm is sort of like Britain in the 16th century OTL, if you move it farther from the main continent and imagine that continent as roughly divided by a Franco-Austrian alliance opposing a Russo-Prussian alliance. Either alliance could defeat Lindholm, except that they have to keep most of their forces opposing each other. With that kind of political-military situation, Lindholm really wants revenge on the Lunites, but how much damage are they willing to suffer? Also, if they upset the balance to the point the Solites win, what stops the Solites from going after Lindholm next, as soon as they complete their conquest of the Lunites? A monarch, especially a long-lived elven one, has to keep the long-term picture in view. As satisfying as revenge on the Lunites would be now, if it means Lindholm's conquest by the Solites in 20-30 years, I doubt Yelena would think it was worth it. This is where William and Yelena really need to talk. His technological advancements could mean that the Solites and Lunites are effectively irrelevant in 20-30 years. She really needs his tech and he has a lot of soft power. She knows that his ideas are very important, but may not yet realize that his mage-smithing skills are nearly as important in trying to implement his ideas. I expect as soon as his role in the process is explained, she will recognize William as the single biggest advantage the queendom has. Yelena has heirs. They might not do as well as she would, but I doubt they are terrible. William is not replaceable. Building Corsairs without him will take several years and possibly decades, even with his team. He was the ultimate assurance that all the tolerances were within the limits.

Trevayne

Depending on what his harrowing entailed, he could have something like a combination of "big stick diplomacy" and "gunboat diplomacy". In either of these force is not the end point, but a political lever. Now granted, he REALLY leans on this lever, so Blue could do with showing us the other side of the coin. Nation-building, support-building and institution building is so very important to what he is trying to do.

Katz

Replying to @MS - I doubt William is "fine" with it. That sort of implies that he is happy to cause massive death and destruction. If he could convert Lindholm to a non-slaveholding democracy without killing anybody, I think he would be happy. I just don't think he sees anyway of doing that. Yes, he could try to work for slow change from the inside, but it might not work and even if it does, it might not succeed in his lifetime and he would understandably be worried at the prospect of everything he worked for falling apart once he was gone. As for the argument that his changes are going to get a lot of people killed, that is true, but it ignores that feudalism and slavery are killing people too.

Trevayne

She was the half-dragon magistrate in Sect

Admiralthrawnbar

Huang? Who is that?

Mika Willems

Yes please. You've been kind of blitzing through the ending. Skipping past a good amount of potential content. Would be nice for you to slow down and have stuff happen instead of being essentially a summary after the action.

Vonbaron

Whoa, this is gonna be the end of the book? What's coming next then? Book 3 or back to space babes or sect? Or are you gonna go on a vacation

Void Vagabond

A week at the most.

Blue Fishcake

Knowing that William fully understands the about of death and carnege he's unleashing on this world and the fact he's fine with that I find myself wondering what lengths he'd go to protect the ones he cares for. Also there's the "you can't get away with messing with me and mine" thing. If griffin doesn't escape on her owe, you know cause she a total bad ass in her own right, I personally think someone's going to be in for a massive ass whipping.

MS

Lol same thought I had.

MS

I have to imagine that Huang's reaction to Jack being mortal would be tantamount to "I am going to shoot you/stop banging you unless you give me a way to fly again you little shit"

Arkyrion

Oh the DRAMAAAAA~

MarakEvans

Was captured at the Academy, then brought to an airship, which were then captured by Yotul. I bet this.

Katz

I personally think it's better odds that Griffith was personally targeted rather than her being a double agent

MaybeASquid

Honestly, I figured you had two more to wrap everything up.

Borisoff72

Thanks for keeping us informed, although could you please give us an idea. Are we talking about a few days or a week or are you still unsure?

Trevayne

I demand the updated section when finishes!

Found&Lost

I think... I think I'm going to take some more time with this final chapter. Mostly because there's a lot to cover. Partially because I've a history of final chapters I've not been entirely happy with. ...The fact I never actually got around to writing Huang's reaction to the revelation that Jack was mortal is something that still bugs me - and something I intend to rectify while editing Sect in this coming month between books. So yeah... more time. Sorry and thanks for your patience. Please know it's not taken for granted :D

Blue Fishcake

Thinking some more about what was known previously, I think at least some people thought he was building shard hulls. They knew he was building shards but he did not seem to have that many cores. I think they thought he was building replacement shards to sell to houses that had wrecked their shards, but still had their core. This allows them to get an operational shard faster than building a bespoke replacement.

Trevayne

Yes, it seems like whether the marriage is matrilineal or patrilineal depends on the highest noble rank held. Since William is a Count in his own right, everyone of equal or lower rank is marrying into his family. His problem with marrying into the Blackstones or the Royal family is that they are higher ranked so he would be marrying in with no power.

Trevayne

I suppose anything is possible, but Griffith has been Yelena's close friend and confidante for a very long time (since childhood IIRC). I doubt Griffith has any other loyalties. Edit: Thinking about it, this could be a problem in the future. If William actually does wind up in a serious conflict with Yelena, both he and Griffith will have to make difficult choices.

Trevayne

@Morpheus exactly! At the marriage negotiations there was a countess, a countess heir, the countess spare, a knight and a soon to be knighted orc. That is pretty clearly patrimonial as they weren't all sisters/cousins/allies like in every other aristocratic marriage shown. So,as long as no one else outranks him patrilinial marriages seem to be weird but okay. So Yelena and her first born would cause a problem but not anyone else. So @ Blue your argument is invalid! Now I'm going to try to drink some water and slip into a coma. Being sick sucks

Found&Lost

*yoda voice* But to which country's queen, loyal is she? Hmm?

MarakEvans

I will pay you for a non-canon bat bombs chapter.

Borisoff72

Ugh, you take those words back! Never question the beautiful dark elves loyalty to queen and country!!!!!.

MS

Random thought... Maybe Griffith was the "leak."

MarakEvans

LOL the combination of matrilineal marriages AND multiple wife polygamy is already odd enough. come to think of it. How DOES that work? If he's going for the Duchy by marrying the twins. one of them is like the 'main' and then what? all the other wives are basically marrying into HER family?

Morpheus

Possibly, the the purpose of the picnic was to get all William's potential wives together so they could see if this would work and what their ground rules should be. I expect they are pretty much engaged, but have not yet made it public because of the potential political impacts. Blackstone in particular, might rebel if it became convinced the Summerfield duchy would never be on their side.

Trevayne

I agree, but a minor quibble. The Jellyfish was careful to push the enemy airship over the harbor so it would crash into the water. The capital in general and the palace in particular, have suffered a lot of damage. The capital had 16-30 airships and 4-6 sky towers brought down and that was before the palace was bombarded and then blown up.

Trevayne

Good question. I think there are limits as to just how much compression a mage can manage, but it could be the limits of the storage tank technology. I think it is more likely the former because presumably, mage-smiths could manage thicker tank walls that could take more pressure. They might be too heavy to be practical for airship use, but I think they would try. It wouldn't matter how much the vessels could hold if the mages can only get them up to say, a thousand PSI.

Trevayne

I've actually been wondering if aether compression pressure limits are currently due to the limits of the storage vessels or the mages themselves? Do mages feel aether pressure pushing back when they try to top off a near-full pressure tank?

Jacob

Anyone who notices that he appears to have cracked the aether storage time limits will also probably note that he appears to be able to also compress aether to record pressure levels as well.

Jacob

Pretty much. The success condition was getting all of them. Even one getting away could have resulted in compromising the secret. Thinking about it, they still aren't sure unless they can verify that they either have prisoners or bodies for every one of the palace attackers. It is at least possible that Cynthia, for example, got off her airship with her flight suit and the blackpowder sample. She might well try hard to evade and get to a smuggler/pirate who can get her back to Lunite territory.

Trevayne

A couple of additional issues with your points. William and the Queen did not have to magically designate which Lunite airships could be carrying the information, it was determined by the situation. The only ones that could have gotten the blackpowder secret were the five airships at the palace. The ones at the academy were too far away. As for infiltrators boarding airships, I don't know what you are talking about. The only airships boarded during the entire fight were the two the orcs boarded to capture. It was only possible since the orc ship had been directed by the Lunite admiral to assume a high guard position over the other two airships. This let the orcs use parachutes to get to the two airships they boarded. The Lunite Dark Elves would not have needed parachutes because they are all mages and can use flight suits with aether jets. The only infiltration operations were Lunite commandos taking the lighthouses (probably by exiting the submerged airships and swimming or using their flight suits to get ashore) and probably some of the sentries at the palace and academy who might have noticed a hundred-plus commandos arriving in flight suits with a few orcs or other specialists rapelling or parachuting in. They would be hauled up by aether winches or just climb knotted ropes for extraction. The dark elves and any non-standard elf mages could extract via flight suits. As for landing, airships can land by touching their hulls to the ground. They use sky towers in the city because cities don't have nearly enough open space for landing airships that are probably at least 100-300 meters long and 30-70 meters wide.

Trevayne

This last scene reminds me of the last control room scene in battle for Britain, where all the controllers are waiting for a contact report to come in

MaybeASquid

Replying to @jacob. We have no evidence that the orcs did not make a clean getaway, so I think the three fled part stands. William sent out a first group of twenty shards without rockets to clear away the enemy shards. The other twenty fired on two Lunite airships and took them out. They then went back to reload with more rockets while the first group finished off the last few shards and maintained contact with the airships. They focused on the capital because the Queen didn't Cate about the ones over the academy, but destroying the ones over the capitals was a "at all costs" mission. Between the Corsairs, the Basilisk, and the Jellyfish, all five Lunite airships over the capital were destroyed. Thus, William's forces destroyed seven Lunite airships and the orcs got away cleanly with the other three.

Trevayne

@Bluefishcake said "You mean a... patrilineal marriage!? The shame of it! Interesting question, is it impossible or just difficult? Due to the French version of the salic law, reigning queens were not possible in France. They were possible but unlikely in Britain due to the UK rule of male preference primogeniture. While the vast majority of British monarchs were men, there were reigning queens, Elizabeth I, Anne, and Victoria. This is Blue's world, so only he knows if patrilineal marriages are possible but very rare and socially frowned on or completely impossible. Granted, in a feudal monarchy, even things that were previously impossible can now happen if the monarch changes the rules. I am just wondering what the rules are now. In this world, especially in Lindholm, is a patrilineal marriage impossible, like a French reigning queen, or just very rare, like an OTL British noble title that can also descend through the female line?

Trevayne

Yes, the screamer is apparently a noise maker that nobody except the orcs knows how to build. An interesting question is if the only screamer in the fleet was the one on the orc ship. If it was, the Lunites might not have been able to safely withdraw by submerging. As for its use as a beacon, their opponents have to figure out how to listen for it. They have to invent hydrophones, which are effectively underwater microphones that can indicate direction. This is the basic component of passive sonar. The active form makes noises and detects the echoes as they bounce back from the target. That will be more work. Eventually, we may see airships with dipping sonars, but I expect they are still several years away.

Trevayne

Definitely a battle for the history books, but a very different one than the battle that created Al-Hundra's nest. That battle was a major fleet engagement over open water with dozens of airships on each side. The battle ended with only a small portion of each fleet being destroyed. The attack on Capitol meanwhile, had relatively few airships on each side, but was fought to the death, with the attackers losing all airships and the defenders losing all but one. Quick, vicious, decisive. The perfect unveiling of William's tech. He single handedly saved the battle.

Andrew Lechner

Black powder sea-mines should be an option for the crown. As a modified kraken-killer. But i would be terrified someone stole a deep-mine and get access to Black powder. Maybe an enchanted/magical one would do the job. I guess its not worth the cost&risk either. A detection net/system would be better.

LongDreamer

Sonar already exists..in a form. The Screamer is a form of noise-making device that I think Yotul had on her ship. I am not completely sure whether other underships had it. Detecting such noise would be much easier, than the need for a proper sonar.

Katz

o7

MarakEvans

You mean a... patrilineal marriage!? The shame of it!

Blue Fishcake

While I appreciate the enthusiasm, as things stand, Patreon earnings more than cover my needs :D And while I don't doubt some generous people would be happy to give more, there's no need for it. If I did indeed have snippets or other concepts I considered *worth* posting up here, I'd just post them up anyway. No extra charge needed.

Blue Fishcake

I would note a few counterpoints. It was specifically stated that forces on the ground were helpless against airships. I fully agree that effective ground-based anti-airship defenses would be very useful. That said, they are not possible given the existing state of technology and magic. Anything an airship drops is going to hit something on the ground. That is not true for things defenses on the ground try to put into the air. "1) Trebuchets, launching normal rocks into the sky. As much as the world has typically relied on magic, range has been stated time and again as a major concern of theirs - it's why Will's rifle is so important. Someone, at some point devising something to throw rocks at defenders from outside of their range has to have happened, especially for the races which don't have as many mages." Trebuchets and aether cannon aren't going to work. They just can't get useful projectiles high enough. Trebuchets are also going to have issues with accuracy and figuring out how to aim them against moving targets. They were originally designed as stationary devices to take down castle or city walls, neither of which move. The real problem is gravity. It works for airships because anything they fire at or drop on a ground target will hit harder. At the same time, anything fired from the ground can only go so high. 2) A modification on the aether javelin which focuses purely on making it BIGGER, since it doesn't have to be carried by a shard. Even a small payload, unguided, would be enough with large enough quantities of javelins, especially since airships haven't been described as the most agile ships in the world. This is a possibility, but it means that a mithril core or shard has to be diverted from an actual shard or an airship to power up these larger than normal javelins. I still have doubts about how high an aether javelin can go given that it is effectively a compressed air rocket. 3) Enchanted projectiles - enchanted cannonballs already exist, so say we have towers in the city, periodically, which have super-enchanted balls of bear blood in either cannons or the aforementioned trebuchets, which when launched are boosted towards their target by the enchantment (a la enchantments William considers in the earlier chapters) and detonate by splashing against their targets, even if higher than normally reachable. If this is possible, it would definitely help. However, IIRC every described enchantment we have seen is relatively short-ranged. They are intended to help airships hit their targets a few hundred yards away by attracting the projectile to the target. They are not intended to help an aethercannon on the ground have a projectile hit an airship that is several thousand feet past its normal range. 4) Some sort of glider system that allows individual mages to boost not just themselves, but also a complement of regular ground troops, up using aether jets then gliding towards enemy airships after they've unloaded their own troops to capture them with significant numbers advantages. These would be sitting ducks for shards and would get slaughtered trying to get to their targets. They aren't getting gliders larger than shards to altitude without a continuous aether production system. Stored aether in tanks isn't going to cut it. This is a different technical paradigm where effective ground-based air defenses are not technically feasible, so they don't exist. I agree they would exist, if they were possible, but until the technical revolution William has introduced, they were just not feasible. As for the Dark Elves, they made up all of the ground forces except for some specialists like the orcs. The orcs were there because they were stronger and could move recovered material like notes and researchers faster than the dark elves. They might also have some dwarven tunneling experts, but nobody on the ground team is there to divert attention, they are there because the mission had a specific need for their talents. The slaves/prisoners on the airships are different. They are there to divert suspicion and muddy the waters if an airship is shot down. It isn't that the Dark Elves were specifically choosing mages, they were choosing Dark Elves and all of them are mages.

Trevayne

Reply to @Random Information. Yes, but right now the Blackstones don't know that. They might well think that they are better than the Lunites. They will certainly want to delay long enough to get a decent idea of just what happened. For that matter, they were preparing their own squadron of underships. It will be interesting to see what they do with them, given the politics of using them have changed( Using them would immediately reveal they knew about them and every Crown Vassal house that lost people and an airship to the Lunites will want to see them dead).

Trevayne

reply to @JR9364. Minefields are an option once they develop a good impact fuze. Depth charges are also doable, but they really need sonar, or something that lets airships detect submerged underships. Maybe they can invent aether-sniffers that detect trace amounts of aether coming from the water. The bad thing about minefields is they are stationary. The good thing is that they do not need to see underships, just get bumped into by them.

Trevayne

1. No need to spend more. Every Current Tier keeps their benefits. 2. Time isn't a concern. Anything that got written but cut out, rewritten, or unused would be the bonus for the higher tier. Recycling. 3. Ultimately, Blue gets to decide. Perhaps I came off as a bit forceful.

MarakEvans

$20 is way too much for me lol, but a higher tier with one-shots that exist around the mainline series, or any other extra side content would be cool. Doubt he has time for that though. The constant pace of these chapter releases is already hard enough and we don't know their work/life situation. Wouldn't want Blue to burn out.

Void Vagabond

I agree it is a good weapon,especially as boosted by William. At a guess, it is about 400-500 lbs of metal and 500-600 lbs of payload. That much magical napalm would be a mess to put out, but the fires don't matter as much if the explosives can blow a wing off and rupture enough of the aether tanks it has to crash. The airship is probably dead either way, but the crew might be able to fight the fire. They can't replace a missing wing or the lift gone with the aether. Edit: One moderately amusing discrepancy is that it was introduced in chapter 44 as a 1,000 kilogram fire lance. One or the other probably needs a retcon.

Trevayne

That is the key point. If he could get the marriage contract written so the princess is marrying into Redwater and not as him marrying into the Royal family, that might work. He is not going to be a Prince consort by marriage, he is a count in his own right.

Trevayne

In addition, while the world has aether powered rockets, they are propelled by compressed aether. That compression takes place in the last few minutes before launch and places a significant performance penalty on the shard while aether is diverted to the rocket. The Corsair were firing salvos of rockets (usually 8-10 at a time) with no performance penalty. So on top of the massive use of enchanted weapons, he figured out how to store compressed aether for long periods.

Trevayne

Blue. Make $20 Tier. I know you have scrapped concepts and continuities. You don't even have to rush or worry about publishing on time. Maybe let us know what you had going, but didn't work out.

MarakEvans

His new shards are too loud, too fast, fly too high, and to top all that they shot off several vollies of what most would consider to be a houses entire stockpile of "enchanted" weapons.

Business Casual

Part of it. That's not the whole reason, at least to my mind. His smile and thoughts remind me a little bit about his thoughts and feelings after he had a conversation with his aunt.

Jon Arbuckle

If the queen would promise he wouldn't be relegated to the role of chef husband and "controlled" like all the other men in this world and the queen would do cover story for his harrowing status and she was milf 🔥 I could see him going for it.

MS

Think Blackstone will dely, cuase now the underships are a known. Blackstone probably had a similar idea, but now can't with the elfs beating her to the punch. Underwater mine fields and depth charges are probably next for production

JR9364

I wonder if the queen will push for Will to marry one of her daughters (or herself). Not as a spy or anything (though the extra insights would be good), but because Will is very protective of what's his. So just that might skew Will into being a good supporter and ally to her and greatly decreasing the chances that he'd turn on her. Of course I don't know how LIKELY that is as we know far more about what's going on between Wills ears than everyone, much less anyone else.

Found&Lost

I think he was still sort of in shock that everything actually went smoothly. The only chance the Lunites had died with their shards. After that it was really more of a mopping up exercise, even if they did not realize it. Until airships mount conventional guns that out range the rockets, they are just big targets for Corsairs. He was expecting it to be harder and it wasn't. The only really difficult part was ramming the rear guard airship, and even that didn't do much except hasten the inevitable. After all, even if he didn't didn't direct the Jellyfish to ram, it would have been destroyed by the returning Corsairs and definitely once they rearmed. The ramming just spared the city from about 45 minutes of bombardment. Aside from all that, he is worried about Griffith.

Trevayne

Agreed, he did not harrow himself deliberately and in chapter 31 it stated that he did not know just what the infant William Ashfield had asked that led to the Fae overwriting his mind with the memories of George Statfield. He certainly wasn't five. He didn't really start rebelling until he was 8. He even reflected that his mother was trying to ensure he had a good, comfortable life as a husband to the Blackstone heir. By talking to her, he might offer comfort by saying it wasn't anything she did that changed her son, it was the harrowing.

Trevayne

I agree this was an epic battle. In terms of cores lost, there were 7 Lunite cores and 16-30 Lindholm cores lost from the Royal Vassal airships, so roughly 2-3 times as many as Al' Hundra was guarding. The other difference is most of these were lost over land and are much easier to recover. Thinking about it, the capital of Lindholm is now sitting on a massive pile of wealth. I wonder if it will attract attention.

Trevayne

Good points, but it seems illogical to me for nothing at all to be put into place to defend static locations when airships have existed as a threat for a long time. Sure, spells are the primary weapon of this world, but as we've seen throughout the story, the lack of ubiquity of magic has led to a lot of innovation. I can't imagine that the capital thought of the eventuality of "someone rocking up with a bunch of airships we didn't see" and went "welp, guess we'll die." It's mentioned that the lighthouses have fortifications, so I imagine that the city itself does as well. Some ideas, going from less to more imaginative: 1) Trebuchets, launching normal rocks into the sky. As much as the world has typically relied on magic, range has been stated time and again as a major concern of theirs - it's why Will's rifle is so important. Someone, at some point devising something to throw rocks at defenders from outside of their range has to have happened, especially for the races which don't have as many mages. 2) A modification on the aether javelin which focuses purely on making it BIGGER, since it doesn't have to be carried by a shard. Even a small payload, unguided, would be enough with large enough quantities of javelins, especially since airships haven't been described as the most agile ships in the world. 3) Enchanted projectiles - enchanted cannonballs already exist, so say we have towers in the city, periodically, which have super-enchanted balls of bear blood in either cannons or the aforementioned trebuchets, which when launched are boosted towards their target by the enchantment (a la enchantments William considers in the earlier chapters) and detonate by splashing against their targets, even if higher than normally reachable. 4) Some sort of glider system that allows individual mages to boost not just themselves, but also a complement of regular ground troops, up using aether jets then gliding towards enemy airships after they've unloaded their own troops to capture them with significant numbers advantages. Regarding the enemy dark elves, I didn't realize they relied exclusively on mages for their troops. I suppose it was mentioned that these were their shock troops, so it makes sense in hindsight, but I was under the impression they were using a large number of different species to hide who was actually executing this attack, and that not all of those species' troops were mages themselves. Plus, it's explicitly mentioned that the spec ops team was using mercenary orcs to carry the researcher - was that a mercenary orc mage? It didn't seem like it, based on how they were described, so I assumed that they had a different method of insertion.

Lucas F

"Can't imagine anyone in their position who's sane doing anything other than trying to figure out the capabilities of William's new tech. "? Yes, but the point is that the odds are only going to get worse. If you cannot beat William's forces now, then you won't in 6 months time. So delaying now really means giving up on rebellion for the foreseeable future.

Random Information

@Mark He didn't harrow himself intentionally. I don't recall where, but there were a couple references to trying to figure out magic from the Fae and learning to crawl and talk at the same time.

just_some_guy.

She refers to him in this chapter as her “future fiancé” instead of just fiancé. Maybe they’ve been socializing and discussing the future enough to know where this is going but haven’t openly declared intentions yet.

22junk

Seems to me that this is at least in magnitude to the sea battle that dropped 14 cores into the sea for Al-Hundra to guard. Definitely one for the history books.

DMR1

Grinning like a gargoyle, you say? Love that little tidbit, and I can guess why.

Jon Arbuckle

"They went up against odds of 1-10 and won, with seven enemies shot down and three fled." Minor correction, it should be "seven enemies shot down and three fled *and then shot down too*" Got to give William the credit for scoring 10 / 10 😄

Jacob

I feel like we already got most that conversation in spirit when they talked after his match against Tala. The only thing missing was the precise detail that harrowing the cause.

Jacob

Agreed, and everybody in the capital that survived is going to know there is something different about these shards. They are much too loud, making noises that nobody has heard before.

Trevayne

Plus this cements William as the ultimate wildcard. He showed up with *40* shards (cores) *and* pilots whose origins their assessments & intel of him can't account for. They have to ask themselves what else do they not know about? My guess is that they'll try to get him off the board by taking advantage of the legalities around the fact that he's harrowed. Makes me wonder what the queen will do about that fact too.

Jacob

Not to mention forty shards whose cores seem to have miraculously appeared out of thin air as far as their intelligence network can tell. That's a pretty f****** big intelligence gap from LB's perspective

Jacob

I love the phrase ‘needs must as the Fae drive.’ It’s such a good turn of phrase that’s close enough to the original to be obvious in meaning, while clearly having evolved in a different world. The little details like that make the story more enjoyable

Larynx Punchworthy

A thousand pound armour piercing rocket. Noice weapon for the Basilisk

NotAWeaboo

I think so, either one more chapter and the epilogue, or maybe just the epilogue. Hopefully we find out Friday, since Blue will be back to his normal political and personal intrigue.

Trevayne

Lots to try to comment on here, but two points for starters. 1) You asked why the ground defenses didn't do anything. IMHO the answer is easy, in this world there are no effective ground based anti-airship defenses. They don't exist in this world because aethercannon and spells are relatively short ranged, so an airship at over 3,000 feet or so is invulnerable to anything on the ground. 2) You made comments about the attackers descending via rappelling. Why? The only attackers that used rappelling were the orcs, because most of them aren't mages. All of the dark elves are mages and none of them need to rappel to descend to the ground. Instead, they just use flight suits and slow down via the aether jets. They also extract the same way.

Trevayne

I agree the conventional military balance just swung in the Blackstones' favors because the Crown Vassals just lost 16-30 odd airships. The cores will be recovered and the Crown just got an addition seven cores from the dead underships. That said, it will take 2-5 years to build all the new hulls, so the Blackstones definitely have a window of opportunity. However, that is offset by the Jellyfish and its shards. They went up against odds of 1-10 and won, with seven enemies shot down and three fled. The Blackstones do value innovation, so they probably have an even greater understanding of just how much innovation the Corsairs represent.

Trevayne

It certainly would be amusing, but I doubt the Blackstones are giving in that easily. They hate the orcs too much and are too stubborn. That said, I think William has bought at least several months. They are going to want to know more about what happened before they decide to go for it.

Trevayne

We know the Lunites committed at least ten under ships and lost all of them. William took out seven and Yotul took her own ship and captured two more Lunite ships. We know they had 20 shards and apparently lost all of them. The Lindholm losses are less clear. We know that multiple sky towers were destroyed but not exactly how many were fully occupied. At a guess that it is between four and six, so say 16-24 Royal Vassal airships, along with a few that weren't docked, including the Honorable and the Marmaduke. We also don't know how many shards the Lunites took out between their initial attack and their later efforts at putting a CAP over the three land airfields and shooting down every shard that tried to take off. In addition, we don't know if the RN fought the decoy force at all before it was recalled.

Trevayne

Blue. Thank you for all your creative work u do, love all your stories. I found out about u listening to readings of your work on YouTube. I wanted to support you so I signed up as a patreon.

MS

I would even add that he harrowed himself intentionally to avoid the slavery issue. She was directly the cause for her 5 yr old to harrow himself.

Mark

Curious to see if/how it will affect his relationship with his sister, as well.

Gregory Sampson

Can't imagine anyone in their position who's sane doing anything other than trying to figure out the capabilities of William's new tech.

Gregory Sampson

I suspect they’re not quite ready. Militarily the situation has swung in their favor with the loss of so many vassal ships, but - and I am just guessing here - I think possibly striking now might be complicated politically since it would make them look at best like they’re taking advantage of the damage caused by an invader and at worst like they’re in league with said invader. Either could cost them support, which changes the military situation. Or maybe not, I suppose we will find out soon.

Sea Wolf

Im looking forward to the conversation between Lady Blackstone and Tala. LB: "so the queen, academy and town was attack by a large force of ships, shards and that new undership. They where on their back foot and failing badly. William, yes him, Flys in and saves the day, takes down scores of ships and shards with his new weapons we have zero defense against. I'll bend the knee to the queen you pretty yourself up and get down to his estate and get on your knees for him.

MS

Has anyone done a win / loss of ships and shards? I got a little lost.

MS

The big question now is: How will the Blackstones react? They can either strike now, or delay until they can better assess William's new tech. Story-wise I hope they delay because the political maneuvering will be fun.

Random Information

Imo he was following the queens orders. Edit Ugh sorry I miss read your post. I totally agree 👍

MS

Good write up!

ZBTmaniac

I take it we're near the end of the book?

SmallTownBo

great stuff

Marius Petrauskas

Great chapter. But now for the real fun! You'd better not skip out in the interactions between characters figuring out the new tech, Blue!

Oreo-belt25

Now that his harrowing is going public, I would like to see a conversation between William and Lady Ashfield. Hopefully he can tell her that the infant William effectively died via harrowing. The "child" she tried to raise was older than she was and that is why they disagreed so often. That and his stance on eliminating slavery.

Trevayne

That was part of it, although I think he went to the hangar to brief the outgoing twenty shards. I expect Marcille got briefed later. IIRC the sequence was 20 Corsairs without rockets went to clear away the enemy shards. They were followed by 20 shards with rockets to go after the airships. I expect they were unsure of the effects so ten Corsair volleyed rockets at each of one of a pair of airships. They then headed back to rearm escorting Marcille in the Basilisk. In the meantime, the orcs captured the other two airships over the Academy and departed. The first group of Corsairs stayed out and finished off the last couple of Lunite shards and maintained contact with the airships over the palace. Those then scattered with one remaining behind. That rear guard was rammed by the Jellyfish, while the other four were taken out by the 20 rearmed rockets firing Corsair and the Basilisk. We saw how the Basilisk did its part. I suspect they divided up the 20 rocket Corsairs into groups of 5, and had each group of five volley its rockets into one airship. The last five of the 20 was a reserve and would finish off any Lunite airship that wasn't clearly falling.

Trevayne

`The whole thing was a complex miniatures and lines,` We missing an 'of' in there? Only issue I have with the chapter is I have to wait another week to read more :d

Benneb

Not really, the whole Royal Navy force could turn around and go after them. If the pirates have any sense, they should have scattered to make themselves harder to find. It is pretty clear that if an airship goes after a surface ship, the surface ship is dead. Remember, the Royal Navy Capital Fleet of roughly 30 ships was sent out to defeat the pirate squadron and its airships. Those ships are undamaged, unless they actually fought the 12 Lunite airships that were last seen running away.

Trevayne

Let me first say that I love the *feel* of these chapters - they're consistently exciting and manage the tension pretty well, especially in contrast with the potentially boring "...and then they all died to modern technology" resolution a lot of stories with comparable (ish) premises tend to pull. The whole objective of this battle revolving around trying to prevent the black powder from being captured instead of just defending the capital, like it initially seemed, was a great shift that sets up a bunch of potential conflict in the future, whether William and co. succeeded or not. I also love the style of this, especially compared to Sect and Space, where it feels like an much larger drama with far-reaching stakes instead of Space's just revolving around Jason and his immediate acquaintances or Sect's revolving around Jack and first the town and later the city he was protecting. William feels like a player in a political intrigue, and I love the way that's gone so far. To be honest, I love your work in general, Blue, and I believe its some of the highest quality serialized fiction out there. That said, I do feel like a lot of things *happen* in these chapters without us understanding where the people they involve and things they happen to are relative to everything else. The Jellyfish starts nebulously "a few hours away," launching fighters that apparently have a flight time of "thirty minutes instead of seven." Those fighters hit a bunch of the underships and clear a large number of their shard escorts, losing a number in the process, then head back to the Jellyfish to rearm, picking up Marcille along the way. They all return, land, and rearm, and as they're finishing rearmament the enemy underships start leaving with "only 9 minutes until they could disappear," so the Jellyfish chases them to reduce the flight time of its fighters to intercept. It then launches 20 fighters armed with rockets, 3 escorts for Marcille's bomber, and the bomber itself, which chase down the enemy vessels now traveling along the coast. They successfully intercept those targets, but they do so after the Jellyfish manages to close the entire distance to the city and rams the rearguard vessel. And hooray, the battle is won! It all works if we make some assumptions *in hindsight* about the time intervals between events, the distances everything is from each other, and the speeds of the vessels, but in the moment we don't have the benefit of all the information and are just left confused. Normally this is fine, since tension is usually built on interpersonal conflict, situational drama, and information (or dramatic irony), but tension in battle scenes lives or dies on the reader's understanding of the stakes of any action or the threat of any opponent's action. Throughout these last few chapters, though, I constantly found myself asking "wait, how did X happen?" or "what happened to/what about Y?", and feeling like some threat I thought was forming had just disappeared or vice versa. In some cases, this makes sense, like with the spec ops extracting a researcher and some black powder - it's important to keep that info hidden to maintain that tension. But even there, a little tidbit about *what* ship they boarded would have been really helpful, because this chapter here hinges on William taking down the ship they boarded and are trying to extract on, and without any knowledge of what kind of ship they boarded or what it did, we have less ability to appreciate the stakes of this chapter... until we belatedly figure out "oh, William and Yelena have somehow designated a number of fleeing vessels as the ones containing the stolen black powder (which they know about somehow), so they're chasing them down. Okay..." I have more questions: how did the infiltrators board the airship - did it land? Did they take a shuttle shard up? If the airships can just land, why were the queen's ships using skydocks? We know some elves rappelled down to infiltrate the castle and the academy, but are those airships still there even after William's fighters hit them? Evidently there's something because they shot at Marcille as she left, but when did that occur in relation to the infiltration team boarding their ship, the Jellyfish recovering its wing of fighters, and the airships scattering, since a Jellyfish fighter participates in the defense of Marcille? Did the airships stick around for a while after getting hit by William's fighters, or did they do something in the intervening few hours while William's fighters returned, landed, and mostly rearmed? How did those ships get so close to land troops without any ground-based anti-ship defenses taking them down? Were those sabotaged, or did they not exist in the first place due to the hubris of Yelena or her forebearers? The latter doesn't seem likely - Yelena has been pretty pragmatic so far. When did the fighters have time to launch, assuming they take a similar amount of time to land, rearm, refuel, and launch compared to real-world ones? Does the Jellyfish have something special that allows it to launch/land more than one fighter at once? What does the Jellyfish even look like, and what about its design allows it, an apparently down-armored carrier, to ram another ship and come out mostly fine? What do airships in this world generally look like, and what is a "propeller wing"? How big is that? Without knowing its size, hearing that "a propeller wing" was blown off loses a lot of meaning. Are they similar in shape to modern naval warships? Ace Combat-style flying wings? Classic steampunk bits-and-bobs-everywhere extensions? I'm leaning towards the latter, but there's nary a description of these ships that would let me know what their scale and style is. This seems true as well for most things in the setting, especially when they're brought up once or twice, never described in shape and style, only to be destroyed (skydocks come to mind). Ultimately, these questions are somewhat immaterial. They're nitpicks, small plot holes, and my own misunderstandings of the narrative, and that's fine to have in small quantities. The issue is, when they're this numerous, it causes whiplash when people appear in places they either previously left (like William at the end of last chapter), never were described getting to in the first place (the javelin on Marcille's ship being replaced), or nebulously being "around" (the Jellyfish throughout all the past few chapters). I think this probably could have benefited from another chapter, as much as you've mentioned you don't like writing battle chapters, or some more little lines dropping bits of exposition in key places (e.g. "My Queen! I saw some hooded figures rappelling away onto the biggest enemy ship after the large explosion went off!" ... "Mention to the Jellyfish's commander that they are to target the enemy flagship and its escorts. They have stolen cargo we cannot afford to lose" but not so hamfisted). All that said, this series has been phenomenal so far, and I can't wait to see what you have cooking for the end of this part and whatever is next, whether it's sect, steampunk, or even something new! (maybe not space, though - I feel like your writing is beyond that at this point.)

Lucas F

It's over? But... what about sea-ships that participated in the attack 🤔? Jellyfish is about only one left operational to intercept them.

Vlad Cold

I think he went out to the hangar to tell Twin#1 to get back out there and loaded her up with his own explosive design.

22junk

Well, that was a pretty cool conclusion to the fight! There's not many authors that can manage to sustain both tension and payoffs over multiple chapters, especially when writing a serial that stretches out over many weeks, but that's what makes Blues' work worth paying for!

Baron Von Mott

Interesting point about anti-shard weapon effectiveness. In the last chapter, William had lost ten shards, most presumably in combat with the Lunite shards. Unless the last two Lunite shards took three Corsairs with them, I expect the airships managed to shoot down three. I expect those shard pilots were careless, and got too close to the enemy airships while using their rockets.

Trevayne

Yelena's people might get info from the wrecks. I doubt anybody else will get much, especially since they probably burned on impact and because they have to get what they can under the noses of the Royal troops.

Trevayne

Agreed, the story had been building up to this and describing after the fact as a event that happened would have felt like a cheat.

Trevayne

William's activities are a little unclear. He was headed to the hanger bay at the end of the last chapter. The orb message received by Yelena's orb specialist said he was deploying with his shards. Clearly he is back on the Jellyfish, but it is unclear if he was with the shards or the Jellyfish. As for the Orcs, they apparently got away clean with their original ship and the two they took from the Lunites.

Trevayne

You did well. Now of course comes the cleanup and the social and political maneuvering, which hopefully is a nicer habitat for fishy blue authors.

Sea Wolf

Did we get a timeskip to bring William back to the jellyfish? I thought he'd went out on a fighter craft. I wonder what survivors exist of the orcs and former slaves now that the ships have been crushed

Slade

That's incredibly enjoyable to hear. I know I personally don't much enjoy reading battle scenes and tend to skip over them - which is likely why I also don't enjoy writing them - so, to hear I've managed to remain engaging from week to week is exactly what I wanted to hear :D And for those wondering why I'd spend all that time on a topic I don't much enjoy? The plot required it - and writing doesn't always have to be fun for the author to be fun for the reader :P

Blue Fishcake

I agree they have to figure out better anti-shard weapons for airships. Until they do, there is no point in destroyers because they are hard pressed to destroy anything. The variations will probably be small CVE style carriers with 4-6 shards and bigger carriers like the Jellyfish or even larger.

Trevayne

Maybe, but the Queen would be hard pressed to force the brand new national hero who saved her life and avenged her crown vassals to marry into her family at near gunpoint. As for his being a major power, that is still a few years off. He needs about 3-5 Jellyfish and about 200 or so Corsairs, and at two corsair per week, that is about 3-4 years.

Trevayne

Great chapter, as always. Got a bad feeling about Griffith tho. I don't know how you feel about people speculating in the comments so Imma keep that to myself but I just wanna say you are great at doing that continuous hype writing that the best serials and comics rely on lol This one battle has gone on for weeks and I've been hooked since the beginning.

Void Vagabond

I think this will ring the bell for the end of feudalism, at least when it comes to military obligations. When a torpedo boat stabby boy can nulify one's contribution to the crown, the crown will have to professionalize its armed force fully. Secondly, this means that destroyers have to be developed and fast. Fighters on CAP can only go so far. I have no idea if aether destroyers can be made, or if they have to make the water-floating kind. No clue how fast an airship can go.

Katz

I agree. After ramming an airship in public view of the entire capital, any legal and public proceedings would go down as a lead baloon, no matter how 'harrowed' any prosecution will claim him to be. Maybe he does not realize that his flair for drama just granted him a big chunk of political power. Any danger to him will be cloak&dagger.

Katz

No matter the universe, Sir Isaac Newton remains the deadliest son of a bitch in space (or in atmosphere).

Katz

That and a shard one-shotting an airship with extreme ease is going to make a lot of people crap themselves.

DMR1

Still need to pursue and capture any enemies that survived the crash. 13 downed friendly aircraft. Likely 2 or 3 would be looted. 4 or 5 examples would give away a significant portion of technical specifications to agents of the other houses or the Crown. Would be lucky to recover parts or salvage from the rest, given the nature of the wrecks. The other surviving houses of the capital will have demands of Redwater. Blackstone will have some angle on the Crown AND Redwater. William will likely have some personal customs and duties to the deceased that served him. ... Oh... and the interrogations... would love to see Elf Milf Unhinged... more than usual.

MarakEvans

The problem is nobody knows what the question was. The original William Ashfield is the only one that knew and he disappeared with the harrowing. The current "William" is the identity used by George, although I expect George's mind is being affected by William's body, the one he now inhabits. The current William Redwater is apparently a composite personality formed by George overwriting the original William and then being affected by inhabiting William's body as it grew up from a toddler to adulthood.

Trevayne

Well done! Really liked this chapter!

The Fire Piper

One loose end not mentioned yet is what happened to the pirate fleet and the 12 Lunite airships that were intercepted by the Royal Navy capital fleet. I expect the pirates scattered to try to stay alive. The Lunites ran. In theory the RN fleet could have detached six airships to sink all the pirates, but I think they would have been vulnerable when the main body headed back to the capital.

Trevayne

Agreed. Too many times battle scenes turn into infodumps because the author is telling what happened. Here Blue was showing what happened through the eyes of some of the participants.

Trevayne

Well this was Pearl Harbor and Midway in one battle. Willian’s real problem now is how will the Queen react, Willian’s little holding just announced to the world that he is a power unto himself. With his tech not needing nobles to fly shards he could takeover a large chunk of the world. The only way he is going to not end up chained to a work bench is to marry into the royal family.

Richard Anderson

I think either the book 1 epilogue 1.1 or chapter 57 is going to need a retcon. The former says 34 ships between the Royal Navy and the Royal vassals. The latter says the Royal Navy fleet intercepting the diversion outnumbered them nearly 3-1. Since the diversion group had 12 airships, this suggests the RN had 30-34 ships present. The Royal vassal ships were all back covering the capital. I think chapter 57 is more recent and its numbers should be used, but I agree the only hard numbers are in the book one epilogue.

Trevayne

Especially by focusing on the characters in the scenes rather than the mechanics of the fight. The final airship takedown was basically - flew in and fired a torpedo- but by expanding on the feel of the act and it's meaning it expanded the scene into a satisfying coup de grace. The defense scene of reloading guns and bandaging wounds told the story of the defense better than a gunfight. I really liked the way you did it.

thomas

What would be interesting is when the shock wears off, what did he ask the fey? What was the question that resulted in a harrowing that no one saw? The perfect question to ask and keep your sanity?

G

I think William is overreacting to an extent. The knowledge that his secrets exist is out. People will know that he had to have long range comms between his shards to do what they did. They know that he has somehow created artificial cores and will know soon enough that they can be flown very effectively by non-mages. They know that he has created some form of explosives and will connect it to the Krakenslayer. That said, they don't have a clue about how he did all these things. In short, his drama king tendencies are acting up again. I think he is justifiably paranoid because lots of people are out to get him. The Lunites, Solites, Blackstones, New Haven, the Queen and every other noble in Lindholm would like to learn his secrets. Scratch that, every other noble or person with aspirations on the planet (with the possible exception of the wood elves) wants to know his secrets. That said, there are some offsetting factors. All the factions competing for his knowledge do not want any of the other factions getting it, so they will all sabotage each others' efforts. Also, he is going to be a Lindholm national hero, the man who saved the Queen and took vengeance for all the dead in the capital.

Trevayne

Gahhh...does that mean there's going to be a long wait for the next bit? I hope not I wanna see some loose ends tied up... William getting his just rewards from the queen, explaining ship killers to his fiance...reactions from the attackers high command...whether or not the Intel got out regardless of the fact that they downed the enemy ships. So many question marks to turn into exclamation marks. Lol awesome chapter...I especially enjoyed the way you describe the jellyfish taking down the bombarding ship over the palace. Whether or not this is your natural habitat, you really nailed it.

Kaywye

His family will support him because he’s standing between them and the Queen’s wrath for their treason. The twins will support him because marriage will give their house access to his brain instead of the crown getting a monopoly. Marline’s family will support him (hopefully) out of gratitude. The Queen theoretically has 34 loyal ships according to book 1 epilogue 1; 18 royal and 16 retainer. Some of the Queen’s retainers have wooden hulls and many of the royal ships are now a burning wreck. I expect William’s super carrier and 3 modern airships armed with radios and explosive payloads will protect him from brute force diplomacy. The Northern threat will also serve as a counter-balance. Invisible kidnappers are his main threat now. Edit: reread book 1 epilogue 1. I think it says 34 ships under direct control of the royal house or royal retainers, and roughly that number again of supposedly loyal duchesses across the continent. Plus 3 downed airships that needed new cores. Its some of the ducal ships that have wooden hulls.

22junk

whats your plan? on to book 3?

mike wade

For something that isn't your preference, you do them pretty well.

Trevayne

Yes, I would like to see those conversations as well. Marcille asking "WTF did you put in my javelin?" Clarice saying "How dare you get the first kill without me?" Both of them asking about the Corsairs. I expect they will also talk about their relationship, but it at least started as a political marriage of convenience. I would like to think it will not end there, but they have to get things stabilized first.

Trevayne

I mean to be fair their marriage is purely political. Both parties have intrigued the other don't get me wrong. But other than that they haven't shared many moments. Unwanted ramblings aside I do agree it would be nice to see the twins get more screen time.

Medical-Cyanide

Thanks for the awesome chapter! Are you going to write a third book for the sreampunk series like your other two series or jump to something else after finishing this book? Because I can't wait to see how the succession of the Summerfield duchy plays out after all these reveals.

CM

Great chapter, with lots to think about, as usual. I am hoping for a reaction chapter and then an epilogue with the other reactions. I am really curious about what the Lunites know about what happened. They sent in ten airships and executed a brilliant sneak attack and fended off the ground based shards without any problems. Then they got surprise attacked themselves and things went horribly wrong, from their perspective. William has now demonstrated that the Jellyfish can take on odds of 1 to 10 and win (at least with the benefits of surprise and darkness). Once word leaks out, this should give everybody pause.

Trevayne

I think this well be an epilogue chapter at the earliest, but I can't wait for for family. D R A M A when they find out Will is harrowed

MaybeASquid

And here I thought he was gonna take off in a shard without a propeller to save the day. ;D Looks like Will gets to keep some of his toys a secret for a bit longer.

Frayo

Of course! There's still plenty than needs wrapping up.

Blue Fishcake

woo hoo. now for the long conversation and trying to dredge out some of his various fiances. I do hope you don't overly gloss over the talk with the twins and such. They could use more time, specifically WITH him. Going from 'just talking' to them to 'engaged now' did happen sort of abruptly and they both do need more proverbial screen time.

Morpheus

You managed to pull off a six chapter long fight scene and nailed it. I was hooked the whole time, almost two whole months of combat and none of it was stale.. "Not Blue's natural habitat" Fugget aboutiiiiit

Skonnchy

Thank you!

Andrew

Sooo, that's it then? the end of the book? Please tell me there's an epilogue.

mraanonymous

thanks for the chapter

JackPlague

The ships orcs took over were above the academy. William was hunting those above the palace, as they posed risk of escaping with gunpowder.

Szulczyn

Nope. Queen specifically states they aren't a priority - and they dipped before the ones over the palace.

Blue Fishcake

Well done Blue! You've done it! Now, let's switch back to drama, scheming and plots!

Loganlee20

So we're any of those ships that were destroyed ones the orc rebels commanded / tookover?

Carlos Torres

That doesn't mean that Blue doesn't do them well :) Next few chapter with the result of the nightmare gonna be interesting

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland

I'm glad it posted now cause I was too busy with the Superbowl party but would have definitely wanted to read

Ryan Gammon

We love SSB don't we chat

Skonnchy

The combat is over and this author couldn't be happier. Fight scenes are not Blue's natural habitat.

Blue Fishcake


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