Reworked page 1-2
Added 2025-05-13 21:38:16 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
I’ve been working on the 6–8 page preview that’ll serve as the opening to Hidden Curves, and wanted to share some reworked pages in the meantime.
I made a few changes to the narration—focusing more on Viola’s internal struggle to match the physical one with her body. I also tweaked her expression a bit to make her feel cuter and more relatable, especially since this is her first big intro.
First image is the new, second is the old.
Curious what you think—do you prefer the new version?
More art and updates coming soon. Thanks for being here!
Comments
Thank you so much! I wanted to start off a little more abstract and then on the next two pages we get our establishing shot
Andrew Rodriguez
2025-05-23 17:03:48 +0000 UTCThe update is outstanding, the change from a room to underwear really fits to what the story is trying to show. And I simply love the new face and lips~
BiggFrosty
2025-05-18 19:08:16 +0000 UTC
