Radioactive Cultivator - Revised + Extra chapters
Added 2024-10-22 18:00:05 +0000 UTCXianxia meets Warhammer 40k meets… Sports?
In the toxic wasteland of the Rot, Rai Jin Paul is an Expendable, fused with a cockroach and sent to die, regenerate, and die again to make a meagre living.
Above, the cultivators reign supreme, led by the unstoppable Hellmarchers in their mechs. But Paul refuses to be crushed. To escape the Rot and enter Sanctuary, the legendary cultivators’ city, he must master radiation qi and fight through a brutal sporting tournament where the losers earn nothing and the winners gain everything. It's his only shot to rise—or be buried for good.
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And to be clear, when I say something "works well" i mean that I personally enjoyed how it fit together story wise.
Aaron Greene
2024-10-23 18:18:34 +0000 UTCI think the prologue and the beginning work well together. Especially with the thoughts we get from the MC about his family, all that to culminate in the nightmare scene was quite good. The MC's "dont let them break you" refrain also works well as a counterpoint to the world around him.
Aaron Greene
2024-10-23 18:17:23 +0000 UTCAwesome! What do you think of the beginning? Would you prefer a quicker beginning, like him already in the nightmare. Or did you like it? Sorry for the questions haha, just need to see what you liked about it :)
Sean Jackson
2024-10-23 18:07:28 +0000 UTCThe whole thing is right up my alley. Grimdark-ish tones and cultivation and scifi sprinkled is a mix i haven't personally read before. I look forward to reading MOAR!
Aaron Greene
2024-10-23 17:49:15 +0000 UTCYeah, didn't know of a name to use. It's only a raw doc rn. What did you like about it the most? Would you continue reading? Thanks!
Sean Jackson
2024-10-23 07:52:56 +0000 UTCI like this so far! One correction "Paul cracked his neck, recalling how *Placeholder Name* always said that thinking wasn’t his strong suit."
Aaron Greene
2024-10-23 04:39:22 +0000 UTCLet me know what you think! Chapters don't align, need to fix that.
Sean Jackson
2024-10-22 18:20:08 +0000 UTC
