New Commission Story

So the last commission "Aaron's Girlfriend" was good enough for another commission story of 15000 words! I'll try to finish this one as fast as possible so that I have time to work on other stories too. Here's the character sheet of the story:

Main Character - David Ashby

 - 5'9'' 31 years old

 - Love sports

 - University Graduate

 - Laid Back

 - Likes nerdy things like game of thrones

 - Good with money

 - Always willing to help

 - works at a marketing agency who's main client is GM motors

 - Project manager for Cadillac

 - 1.5 year old daughter - Jade

Location - Burlington

Erica Lang (sister in law)

 - 5'4'', 35 years old

 - Girly

 - Loves to buy clothes despite it being out of budget

 - College educated

 - Gullible

 - Agreeable

 - Asks advice of other people (Sam) constantly as she's indecisive

 - Bad with money

 - Self centered wants everything about her

 - Likes reality tv and girly shows

 - Works at the city as secretary in the building permit department

 - always on her cellphone

 - loves ot gossip

 - wears tight dresses and skirts

 -5 year old daughter - Abigail

Location - St' Mary's Ontario

Kyle Lang (sister in laws husband)

 - Redneck

 - Loves to hunt

 - Things he knows everythig but doesn't

 - Submissive to Erica as she is argumentative

 - works for cascades box manufacturing

Alysa Ashby (MC wife)

 - Independent

 - Girly

 - Strong willed doesn't always get along with Erica

 - Finds her sister to be self-centred

 - Erica asks to borrow money then takes a while to pay it back

 - registered Vet technician

 - down to earth, frugal with money

Angela Coddington (mother in law)

 - stay at home housewife

 - 53 years old

 - focus on family

 - Erica calls her constantly for advice and sometimes even annoys her due to the fact

 - tends to baby Erica well Alysa is more independent

Location - Woodham, Ontario

Roder Coddington (father in law)

 - laid back

 - sarcastic

 - very handy with fixes to cars and things around the house

I'll be uploading the first chapter in a few days!