🚨Question for you!🚨
Added 2025-06-11 23:48:22 +0000 UTCWas the pacing of the narrative appropriate?
Is the story well paced?
Comments
I think it's going too quickly, I think the relationship between the MC and the girl is going a little quickly with the bathroom, it should take a little more time, since he doesn't like it at first
Daerdestructor
2025-06-12 13:27:26 +0000 UTC
