TSOTH - Version 1 (Storyboards)
Added 2024-11-03 22:46:45 +0000 UTCThis is the first version of the False hydra story that I made at the beginning of the year. Some people were curious to see it, so here it is! It would be a lot smaller and "to the point" compared to the final one. I don't dislike it, but I wanted to challenge myself with a bigger story and this opportunity seemed too good to pass up.
Comments
Well its kinda plausible I guess? I mean pages 2 and 3 were pretty much them getting fucked without noticing anything anyways, but does she also die at the end or does she just simply leave the sewer? Speaking of page 2, I've always wanted to know what Rogue was trying to say with that tentacle in her mouth. Something about "learning the easy way or the hard way"? Also since this is version 1, I'm guessing the one we finally got is version 2 right? Did you have any other iterations in mind before settling on this final one?
Max
2024-11-04 21:27:19 +0000 UTCI will definatly use the page 8 scene on some other project. Not sure if it will be in part 2, but at some point a will. Also yeah i forgot i put the amungus there XD. The idea for that scene is that the place was now completely empty. Also the idea for page 9 was gonna be for rogue to continue get fucked by the tentacles while she goes out of the sewer without noticing what was happening. Doenst make much sense i know XD.
Leo Yoyoro
2024-11-04 20:05:22 +0000 UTCNoice. I'm glad you came up with the concept of letting each Hydra head have a different ability. Makes it incredibly fun. Oh yeah I can see that, page 8 definitely gives off a great erotic and creepy vibe. Perhaps you could use it for a scene when you decide to start part 2? And is that an amogus standing off in the distance at the top panel? XD Also if I recall, you did say that you were going to originally draw 9 pages but stopped at 8. What was your idea for page 9 gonna be if you ever made it?
Max
2024-11-04 15:24:56 +0000 UTCYeah you are correct. In page 6, Hydra had 4 heads. At that moment i still did not had thought that it could be fun if each haad had a different skill, so they were all pretty much the same thing in that version. Rogue stepping on cleric in page 8 was my favorite scene. It was very painful not to use it in the final version XD.
Leo Yoyoro
2024-11-04 13:03:44 +0000 UTCRIGHT? Maan it hurt me a lot to not use that scene. It was my favorite from the old version.
Leo Yoyoro
2024-11-04 13:00:02 +0000 UTCI'm glad you expanded on the comic, although I do hope you use the concept in part 8 in the future. Something is super hot and horrifying about stepping on the corpse of your friend without even realising it.
Fran Franken
2024-11-04 09:43:16 +0000 UTCNice, it's so cool to see what TSOTH could have been in a shorter format. But honestly, I'm so happy you decided to make it longer and fleshed out the scenes in the final version. It just wouldn't be the same if you didn't. So if I could just do a quick run-through of this version just to make sure I didn't misread anything, as the sketches made it a little hard to make out some parts. Page 1 to 3 is still pretty much identical to the final version. With just some minor differences. Page 4 is where Cleric gets her head decapitated by a tentacle. (Poor Cleric D: At least it wasn't bitten off this time.) Page 5 is when Rogue first notices the Hydra. Page 6 is where Rogue gets attacked and pulls out her weapon. However in this version of the Hydra there appears to be 4 heads instead of 3, is that correct? Page 7 is when the Hydra sings its song and mind breaks Rogue, making her forget its presence. Page 8 shows that the Hydra has disappeared from Rogue's perception. And with its presence no longer felt, Rogue sheathes her weapon and carries on through the sewers, unaware that she just stepped on Cleric. Have I been right so far with regards to how the story was supposed to play out?
Max
2024-11-04 01:19:58 +0000 UTC
