I'm glad you liked it! I've fixed the issues now, but thank you very kindly for catching those! Let me know what your partner thinks, I hope they like it as much as you did!
Dragon Jak
2022-12-09 11:02:01 +0000 UTC
Damn, incredible work again! I was so invested and then when I got to the last page I realized I'd have to totally go back and reconsider all my choices to try to get the most benefit out of it. I *love* that in a CYOA!
I hope you don't mind if I offer up a couple lil copyediting notes:
Getup, get down: What's an impossible stain?
Au naturale: Does "eye class" mean "high class?"
Powerhouse: electric "conversation" -> "conservation"
Thanks for all your hard work on these, can't wait to share my build with my partner! :D
