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Rewrite the Stars VI || Page 12

Every rose has its thorns.

Rewrite the Stars VI || Page 12

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They Do Miss Each Other So Much Until They Got Home.

Silvester Rodriguez

Great as always man. Can’t wait to see how their resilience pays off in the future. I just have to finish the lyric: Just like every night has its dawn Just like every cowboy sings his sad, sad song

Tuckster1999

( Speaking Through The Straw Poking Out Of The Sand ) You know, I don't think I can ever stop reading this page. It's just so... Romantic. Can't wait to see what happens next, Hero. I hope you're doing alright and all.

David Mullins

So bittersweet, honestly its amazing theyre holding up as well as they are given the circumstances. 2 people with no money, one trying to finish highschool when they showed up. Also I am so not ready for the "-or worse" on the next panel

Kevin

That's a pretty safe bet considering my track record.

UnderratedHero

Thanks!

UnderratedHero

It is!

UnderratedHero

We all went through with these struggles, so yeah, I hope I can deliver that sense of relatability.

UnderratedHero

Thank you! The adoration should be for Lynncoln, I'm but a mere tool to deliver the greatness that it is.

UnderratedHero

The way I placed Lincoln ended up covering it, but he's coming out of the elevator, so that door Lynn is going to is supposed to be the entry to their home. But we'll see it in the next page!

UnderratedHero

I'm doing alright lol They really are such a great couple, though.

UnderratedHero

Great page by the way

Thuren Miller

I saw it! It's a reference of Taki8hiro, right?

Moss1998

I have a feeling things will turn sad eventually

Thuren Miller

Thank you, that's kind of the purpose of this chapter. To be as relatable as possible.

UnderratedHero

Unconditionally

UnderratedHero

Yeah, they knew what they were getting into, and they're willing to go through the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, because they know that despite all the hardships, they're in the right path.

UnderratedHero

Thank you! I had a lot of fun with some of the panels

UnderratedHero

This is such a cute page hero!

LynxTheAnimator

It's so loving and endearing to see Lincoln and Lynn savor these small moments together. As a few other people have mentioned already, it was never going to be an easy task to build new lives from scratch. With making that choice, Lincoln and Lynn have had to make sacrifices for things most of us take for granted, like forgoing the taxi ride so they can buy dinner. Or not spending as much time together, so they were able to get their educations and careers in order. Those were not easy decisions to make, but it meant striving for something more healthy and long-lasting in the grand scheme of things. And it certainly shows how responsible and serious Lincoln and Lynn are taking their new lives to help their relationship thrive healthily during these troubled times. So more power and respect to them for taking the hard road and making it happen!

I.O. Penner

They love each other so much

Paul Hoon

Nice page. This is relatable to a lot of people. Keep up the good work

C.E. Zim93

I love your work hero Lincoln and Lynn are such a wonderful couple in your story! I also hope you are staying healthy

Jhmilam

They're living on a shoe string budget while sharing a blanket or an air mattress and calling it a bed, aren't they? Inferring from the practically empty main upon walking in when compared to the dream sequence with a flat screen, full book shelf, and fairly decent couch. And I really hope that's all the upcoming "for worse" is gonna refer to.

Muze Clark

It's cheaper, I suppose.

Bruno Henrique Barbosa

Might wanna join the discord and keep up with the Chats we have there. Hero has other things going on and we respect that.

Matthew Czuprynski

Absolutely loving it, pure adoration for your work, keep it going and keep yourself healthy!

UndeadRunt

Why Chinese food?

Den dung

So sweet and the struggle is relatable to couples irl not that I would know for being single for years

Zachary Thompson

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Yeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh-Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! Whoo-hoo-hoo! A new page for the comic! I wonder how this one plays out... ( 1 Minute Later ) Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! That's just so... romantic. Lincoln and Lynn Jr. going to get some Chinese food and going for a walk home while catching up with each other. I have to admit, Underrated Hero, looks like Lincoln and Lynn are doing fine so far. But there's something that is still bothering me though... I get that for the first two years, Lynn and Lincoln were having a bit of a struggle, but now with Lincoln having a job and Lynn studying, I wonder what Lincoln means by for better. Unless he means for better or possibly worse. But other than that, nice work, Hero, as always. I give 20/10 stars. Can't wait to see what happens next. And in the meantime... ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe ) ( Speaking Through The Straw Poking Out Of The Sand ) Hey, Hero. I almost forgot to ask you something. Do I have to wait another week or two again?

David Mullins


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