Rewrite the Stars VI || Page 04

Never expected all that build up... to be a dream. DAMN YOU UnderratedHero! Why you gotta do that😥(This is in no way hate towards you)

Boogie Man

I almost died of mixed emotions rn. Called that over reacting. But still, it's nice to be able to read again. I have been busy with life lately (p.s I just don't read rewrite the stars only, I read a lot of comics and mangas, and I love to be able to read this. It's that I am dying to know what happened next. I like it. Keep it up vro.

MR.FAN

I almost had a aneurysm trying to read this

Plane two towers

Ok i just finished reading the first 4 pages that are available to me (im not a menber also im young so im broke AF) and i was happy to see them happy at first but seeing reality cut in hit me like a gunshot at the end of the last chaper there lives seemed to be takeing the better and i think it has i suspect linclon is a jenetor at a restarant or something and has pased college meanwhile lynn is in college thay both live in the flat that scotish guy got them (i frogot his name) and he is raiseing there Daguter while lynn is within college trying to help suport her family. I suspect things for the first few pages events will be fine but from what i can tell atleast it seems things will go Darker down the line. I suspect how the loud family finds them is probably iver just bumping into them on accident on a vacation to where linclon and lynn now live A.K.A the U.K i can see some really big conflicts happening here even darker situations like imagen rita and lynn.srs reactions to the nightmare before them espeshily when it comes to lynn and lincolns child i can see both rita and lynn.sr going insane and at some point thay might try to "Fix" things bye first trying to kill linclon and lynns Daguter so theres no proof of the incest relashinship ever happening and thay could try to separat linclon and lynn again bye force to try i will say again "fix" them that way just like in the dinner tabel scene in the last chapter as lynn.sr said "make the family normal again" as also rita whold put it i could see the older siblingd luan luna lori leni and so on take linclon and lynns side and try to protect lynns and linclons child eho i will call sport witch whold only drive the perants more made and despret to "FIX" things not knowing its to late to go back to how it used to be i can see this story going on for lots more chapters. Another thing i hope to see in this story is the loud perants while prospective in more depth i can see a situation where lynn.sr looks at sport seeing a younger lynn and hesitat and rita being the more violent one since thats how thay are in canon. Hero if you see this coment what you think!

Jayden

Just a dream… OR perhaps a "vision." A vision from a near future where they are gifted with a daughter and are reunited with their family, who now embrace their love. She did mention that she KEPT having THIS dream…..

GoldwolfThePyrate .

Oh no, just when things were looking good, we now have a flash back of the tough times in their lives.

Happychap2628

After rereading the first 3 pages a few times I felt something was off. And then I finally paid attention to the borders. I was hoping it was from Lynn's pure joy, but it was all for naught. It was like my guts just fell out, followed by a broken heart. I'm guessing this is still going to be darkness before light for quite a while. Thank you for the update, and here's two thumbs up for your finals!

Ashley Uh... Oops

I just hope she doesn't have any medical problems.

DarkHammer

Then beautiful moment

Thuren Miller

It wasn't a memory

UnderratedHero

A beautiful memory

Thuren Miller

Eso es jugar con mis emociones que cruel eres

Marilu 15

Thank you!

UnderratedHero

Good job

Jason young

Some people caught up to what was going on lol

UnderratedHero

I'm sure they've had their good moments.

UnderratedHero

I honestly thought the dreamlike visual effects around them were more a metaphor, just emphasizing how good it all felt. I... man this chapter is gonna be rough. Even knowing things were gonna go south, I thought they had these years of good moments at least. I am so not ready.

Kevin

Called it.

The FoE Three

I saw the discussions about it being a dream, oh Jesus this makes me sad, still can't wait for another page! ❤️

UndeadRunt

I think the sparkly effects are pretty telling...

UnderratedHero

Thanks! I can't wait for my finals to be over and for Lynn and Lincoln to live a happy life like they deserve.

UnderratedHero

Now we know what her dreams look like, at least

UnderratedHero

Yeah, even knowing it was coming, it's still a gut punch to see her wake up from that.

UnderratedHero

I think you were one of the few that saw it coming a mile away lol It still hurts to think she'd wake up and realize it was all a dream.

UnderratedHero

At least we know what her dreams aim for!

UnderratedHero

We can still get a good picture of what they might be going through judging by what she wishes was true.

UnderratedHero

Yeah, it's a hard cross to bear, but they'll do their best to keep going. They won't give up on their love for each other.

UnderratedHero

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Oh, boy. A new page for the comic... ( 1 Minute Later ) 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 Okay, I simply cannot tell either that was a dream or perhaps maybe it might be a memory or something. But either way, I'm not sure where this is exactly pointing to. I just hope that it was all a memory or maybe just a tad a dream. But in the meantime... ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Comes Out ) ( Straw Sticking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe ) ( Speaking Through The Straw In The Sand ) By the way, Hero, nice job. Way to do a new page before the Fourth Of July. Can't wait to see what happens next.

David Mullins

Al menos ya sabemos con qué sueña Lynn

UnderratedHero

We'll learn more about their living conditions in the upcoming pages.

UnderratedHero

There's gonna be a lot of pain, for sure.

UnderratedHero

Cartoon logic

UnderratedHero

Always 😭

UnderratedHero

Thanks, but I'm not american, so I don't celebrate 4th of July

UnderratedHero

It had to be done 😭

UnderratedHero

Too good to be true

UnderratedHero

She woke up when her dream made her remember the family she left behind

UnderratedHero

There were some signs hehe

UnderratedHero

And there is the first shoe to drop, not anything too devastating or overly sad just being brought back down to Earth. I just had a feeling that what we were seeing of their life was a little too picture perfect. I think they will end up being happy and start a family but that not really a possibility or a priority at the present. I have a feeling their daughter will exist by the end of the series and honestly if she is in Hero’s plans it is better that we are along for their journey as expecting parents than their daughter just magically appearing out of the blue. Now we get to see what they are really up to. Even though Lynn looks tired and dejected, I think they are still happy and content with where they are in their relationship and life. I will patiently wait for more after your finals Hero. Here’s to seeing Lynn and Lincoln hopefully smiling again real soon.

Tuckster1999

I knew it was too good to be true...

Anthony Nguyen

I knew it but still felt devastated. Like goddammit you didn't need to kill her in those last 3 panels

PropellerDoggo

Those last three panels may well be the biggest gut punch of all. I definitely wasn't expecting that bit about inviting the family.

Muze Clark

Aww, no. The last panel is where the sparkles fade out - it was a dream, after all. Well, it was certainly a happy reprieve, as brief as it was. Just keep chasing that rainbow, Lynn - there's a pot of gold waiting at the end. It just now becomes a matter of how long it takes to get to that pot of gold. But thank you, Hero, for this unexpected update! What a great way to start this three-day weekend!

I.O. Penner

Yep, it was a dream. Too good to be true. Dang it! Oh well, when the next page is ready, let’s how our two lovers are really doing.

Paul Hoon

The path to prosperity is often harder for the "abandoned ones"

Bruno Henrique Barbosa

Vaya al final todo fue un sueño 😟

Juan Carlos Juarez

And here comes reality. ☹️ I wonder if Lynn and Lincoln are struggling to live independently without their family. Or at least Lynn is, and Lincoln managed to graduate from high school through online classes and is probably working a full-time job. But as we know, Lynn wasn't really that absorbed with education and she even admitted in the last chapter. So, she's trying to make it as a pro soccer player without any education. But fails all the time. Not really a good page to start with before Independence Day. 😅

CipherRage0909

I can feel pain both now, and incoming ;-;

Antn100Q

Apparently she can extend her arms in her dreams! XD

Moss1998

When you Rewrite the Stars it has its consequences Lynn

Alex Ellison

They Have A Daughter & Lynn Was Having A Dream The Whole Time During The Ride Bus By Falling Asleep. 🚎 & Also Wishing You A Happy 4th Of July.🎆🎇🧨

Silvester Rodriguez

Awwwww man

Texas Gent

Of course it was a dream

Zachary Thompson

Nice page. Everyone was happy until the last couple of panels. Yeah Lynn is concerned when her daughter said invite the family. Now I'm curious. Can't wait for more 🙂

C.E. Zim93

Refresh the page. It usually works for me

Day500

Sigh 😔 So it was all just a dream I should’ve guessed 😢

SreznoJIG07

Texas Gent