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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 51

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PLEASE LET THEM HAVE 11 KIDS

the unknown 607

Buen punto..

TendingHealer13

They did hear it, Lincoln confirmed it in a later page

UnderratedHero

We'll find soon enough!

UnderratedHero

Nah, I think it means plan C. Whatever that is...

Kevin

Sin mencionar que lisa también puede usar su inteligencia para localizarlos

José Ángel Romero Rosales

Come on, they been trough a lot, they can handle this...right?

TendingHealer13

You're right. They most certainly won't. God, the suspense is killing me. Almost every day I check my email for a notification when the next page is ready. I know these things take time, but I'm so hooked in!

Paul Hoon

The man with the plan have ran out of juice, but physically and mentally. I wonder what was Plan B? and what did Lincoln mean by "That means..." are they giving up?

Happychap2628

And during their sibling meeting. Although the walls were thin so they probably heard it. And yes, their family will most definitely get upset after reading the letter.

Paul Hoon

So do I!

UnderratedHero

I think it would've been the same end result had they sat their parents down and revealed their situation. The Canada incident made it a lot more confrontational, initially, but the whole psychologist thing would've happened anyway, and Lynn Sr and Rita's opinion on the matter wouldn't have changed.

UnderratedHero

Good thinking.

UnderratedHero

They certainly won't just give up on two of their kids running away.

UnderratedHero

The story is from Lynn and Lincoln's POV. The one time I broke that rule was during the song Luna and Sam were singing in the campfire while Lynn and Lincoln shared their moment in volume 4.

UnderratedHero

I hope their family won’t get too upset once they read that letter.

Double Gron

Same.

David Mullins

I hope so. At least, a scene of them reading the letter.

Paul Hoon

Will we see the reaction of the rest of the family?

SoulTy

Oh man, they're really running away. Whatever plan you two have, even if its risky, what other choice you got? And knowing the family, I doubt all of them or if any of them will respect their wish and let them go. I'm really expecting a later page to show them searching for them. Hopefully for Lincoln and Lynn, they don't find them.

Paul Hoon

They should sleep on it. After a night together after months together they can help them think more clearly.

Corey Peters

Ah, okay. I thought I missed something important in the previous pages. Sounds good to me!

I.O. Penner

Ooooooooh... okay, I get it.

David Mullins

Relax Dave, like I said I usually guess and think what will happen on the next page whenever I feel impatient on when it’ll come. So just guess what will happen on the next page to drown your impatience. Visualize it in your head.

Double Gron

Thank you! And don't worry, you didn't forget, Plan B hasn't been made public. It's one of the ideas Lynn and Lincoln had, but one Lincoln considers too risky to try. What it is, I leave it up to you guys

UnderratedHero

Well, it’s not like I want them to give up how they feel. It’s just that they could’ve told their parents about their feelings earlier and they would’ve helped them both. I don’t know what else to say, all I can say is that I hope they’ll be safe, responsible and came back home eventually.

Double Gron

That means…Plan C! Wow, this is so exhilarating and, at the same time, pulse-pounding! It still feels a little unreal, but I’m very proud of Lincoln and Lynn for finally listening to their hearts and leaving the Loud house. Obviously, that wasn’t an easy choice for them, but Lincoln and Lynn believe in their future together. Okay, so they have at least $4,340 and some allowance money to work with for now. It’s a small foundation, but they have to start somewhere. But in long-term format, Lincoln will definitely have to put his “Man with the Plan” thinking skills to the ultimate test. I can’t wait to see what he comes up with! I must say, thank you, Hero, for all you’ve done so far in making Lynncoln in this particular universe a reality! I, too, believe in their future together, despite what some of the other members of the Loud house might think. Lastly, I hate to say that I forgot, but what was Plan B for them?

I.O. Penner

To what? Please tell me... Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeasssssssseeeeee!!!!! 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

David Mullins

Alright then lol great work tho I really hope we get a good ending to this

TLSM 115

I pray they'll be ok. This is serious.

C.E. Zim93

Don't worry David, Lincoln clearly means to—

UnderratedHero

We have a few more pages to go to find out!

UnderratedHero

That could be a starting point. After that... Who knows

UnderratedHero

That makes two of us lol

UnderratedHero

I need time 😭

UnderratedHero

You mean give up on their love? No, I don't think so.

UnderratedHero

No me imagino a Lynn aprendiendo a hablar español jajajajjaa

UnderratedHero

Que vallan a México y vivan en monterrey es muy normal lo que hacen ahí XD

alex sonic

They are never gonna come around are they 😣😩?

Double Gron

GOATED BUT MORE PLEASE lol

TLSM 115

Now in this matter, realistic-ness will be essential. I hope you won't screw up!

Moss1998

Uh not sure he’s a fish so probably not a good ideas to inhale water 😝

Jachob(braineyac)

Looks like they're on their own. Now what? They might need to change names

C.E. Zim93

Can someone please tell me what Lincoln means?!

David Mullins

Inhaling water?! You really want him to be quiet! XD

Moss1998

What? What?! WHAT?!

David Mullins

So they're on the Lamb now huh? So what next adventure awaits for them.

Thuren Miller

We'll find soon enough

UnderratedHero

At least they have each other

UnderratedHero

Bro like calm down...inhalate h20...exalate co2

TendingHealer13

That's fair

Muze Clark

That would be a cool idea, but it would push all my plans back, so I don't see myself committing to something like that any time soon.

UnderratedHero

It seems like they don't ever get a break, so maybe sooner than expected.

UnderratedHero

That might be a short term solution

UnderratedHero

It means that they have to—

UnderratedHero

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Oh boy, a new page for the comic... ( 1 Minute Later ) What? What?! WHAT?! What does it mean, Lincoln? I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really like to know! The suspense is killing me more than any of the other previous pages! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe )

David Mullins

You are probably right

TendingHealer13

👯

Mia Roman

My guess is that they're going to have to change their names and their looks if they don't want to risk being found by the cops or anyone else who recognizes them.

CipherRage0909

As for page itself, how will our duo get out of this predicament? And how long and how far can they go before tragedy or relief finds them. Find out next time on Re. Write. The Stars!

Muze Clark

...*deep inhale, shaky exhale, screams out to the void* ... ... ... ... ... ... *reminds self that story is from the perspective of Lynn and Lincoln who wouldn't have been there to see everyone reading the letter, calms down* So, any chance that we can get an installment of everything from a sister's perspective? I've been wanting to see how Lucy saw everything since Chapter 3 and possibly getting more details on Lori's thoughts since the sister meeting. Not a necessity, obviously, but a curiosity.

Muze Clark

This is it

TendingHealer13

This are gonna be some bad days

TendingHealer13

They Are At The Model For The Night & May Not Take Any Risk $340 To Eat & Drink So They Sleep There & Left Until Next Day.

Silvester Rodriguez

Yeah right?

TendingHealer13

Oh god

TendingHealer13

Poor Lincoln and Lynn 😢 I feel their pain 😭

SreznoJIG07

THAT MEANS WHAT? EHAT DOES THAT MEAN???

Youronly_z

Ahi dios mio

TendingHealer13


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