Rewrite the Stars V || Page 41
Added 2025-01-13 05:18:37 +0000 UTCThere's a palpable sense of unease.
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Bruh. 💀
Mark John Banzon
2025-03-04 23:23:06 +0000 UTCDamn it's too awkward. 🫥
Mark John Banzon
2025-03-04 23:19:13 +0000 UTCEstou muito ansioso para que as as outras páginas serem liberadas para membros que não consseguem pagar a assinatura de 35 como eu kkkkk😅😅😅 não minha assinatura não é muito mais é de coração
NOBINHO
2025-02-28 17:54:45 +0000 UTCAll their hearts are sinking 😞🙁.
Double Gron
2025-01-15 04:10:27 +0000 UTCDefinitely needs to be an alternate page where Lincoln and Lynn do that
Darthpyro
2025-01-14 22:00:26 +0000 UTCI'm sorry for making you explain it all. I just don't like misinterpreting things or reading them wrong. And yes, we're excited for what Lucy thinks and how this story pans out.
Paul Hoon
2025-01-14 01:14:22 +0000 UTCYes, that's what "you broke my heart" and her tears imply. And her reluctant acceptance of their relationship when she tells him "Everyone wants you to get over it, but I know you won't. I hope you're happy, cause you're my siblings and I love you both". And she keeps bringing up that they all make their choices, and he chose Lynn. Which one could interpret that it's because she chose the family instead of fully going for her feelings. She thought about everyone, Lincoln and Lynn only thought about themselves. That's part of what makes her angry. I really don't like writing all of this down, I would rather have my readers interpret the material with the little clues I throw in the characters dialogue and make their own interpretations. I usually spend about an hour or more picking exactly what they say, cause I don't like giving away everything or having the characters outright say what they're feeling and why they're doing what they do. But everyone keeps asking me to spell it out for them, so that's it. Lola is heartbroken cause her crush loves someone else, she's mad because she thinks Lincoln and Lynn were selfish, but she won't get in their way because she knows how strong a love like that is, and if Lincoln doesn't love her that way, the way he loves Lynn, then she won't try to change him or get them to break up. She's prideful, but she's not cruel and she still loves them as family. All other character arcs will be conveyed through expressions, body language, and dialogue only. And there's 17 pages left, so if someone doesn't know what Lucy thinks right now, they might get a chance to figure it out in a future page.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-14 00:54:12 +0000 UTCTo me it looks like she was making subtle moves towards him, but when the secret come out, she begrudgingly came to terms that they could never be together. Hence her broken heart. Is that right? I’m asking to be sure.
Paul Hoon
2025-01-14 00:39:14 +0000 UTCI saw all that just like everyone else but that doesn’t my question. Did she come to terms with it and accept they couldn’t be together? As she said she loves him differently?
Paul Hoon
2025-01-13 22:24:53 +0000 UTCThe answer to this is in previous pages, explained through Lola's dialogue and what she reciminated to Lincoln.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 21:57:18 +0000 UTCIf Lola is in love with Lincoln, did she come to terms with herself that she and Lincoln couldn’t be together or was she planning on trying to win his heart in secret when she got older?
Paul Hoon
2025-01-13 21:54:57 +0000 UTCthe tension in the room is thicker than the pizza crust.
SoulTy
2025-01-13 20:39:53 +0000 UTCWell if anyone doesn’t say anything thing are gonna get worse for them. And I mean for the entire family.
Double Gron
2025-01-13 16:45:09 +0000 UTCKissy 😘 faces 😘
C.E. Zim93
2025-01-13 16:04:23 +0000 UTCGood point. I wonder what's going to be said.🤔
C.E. Zim93
2025-01-13 16:03:43 +0000 UTCThat's actually a very good point there.
David Mullins
2025-01-13 15:45:32 +0000 UTCYeah, they can sit together, that's the least of everyone's problems.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 15:42:03 +0000 UTCEveryone's lost in their thoughts.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 15:41:15 +0000 UTCWhat are they gonna do? Kiss in front of everyone? lmao They can sit together
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 15:40:55 +0000 UTCAt some point, someone has to, otherwise it'd be the most uncomfortable silence ever!
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 15:40:31 +0000 UTCProbably. Though they're just sitting next to each other. Nothing weird about it lol
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 15:40:12 +0000 UTCNot allowing the two of them to sit next to each other would be escalating things. Are they not allowed to stay close to each other? Seems like a higher imposition. Too confrontational.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 15:39:47 +0000 UTCIt's not like they're gonna kiss in front of everyone lol
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 15:08:02 +0000 UTCWell, they're gonna have a talk, it's easier to address them together if they're sitting next to each other lol
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 15:06:24 +0000 UTCYou and me both, amigo.
David Mullins
2025-01-13 15:01:49 +0000 UTCLong silence.... Very awkward. And I'm surprised they allowed Lynn and Lincoln to sit next to each other. And Lola is still angry. I know this won't end soon but I hope everyone can at least talk it out.
C.E. Zim93
2025-01-13 14:15:57 +0000 UTCQuite surprised they were allowed to sit next to eachother ngl
Jack
2025-01-13 11:34:18 +0000 UTCI gotta admit Underrated Hero, I'm quite surprised by this page. I mean everybody is eating dinner. But yet, for some reason, every Loud is being quiet which I find quite unusual of them. But what really surprised me is that Lincoln and Lynn Jr are still sitting with each other and their parents didn't even bother to separate them. This Pizza Dinner is definitely awkward for them. Wonder what's going to happen next, and I have ding-dang feeling it's probably not going to be good. In the meantime... ( Putting My Head In The Sand Again Until Page 42 Comes Out )
David Mullins
2025-01-13 10:48:02 +0000 UTCI’m surprised they’re letting them sit next to each other. The silence is awkward as hell. They’re going to have to address the elephant in the room and I got a feeling that the parents have come to a decision, haven’t they?
Paul Hoon
2025-01-13 10:10:54 +0000 UTCA long silent dinner. I wonder if anyone is going to say something.
Double Gron
2025-01-13 09:00:34 +0000 UTCAfter everything that has happened I'm surprised that they're sitting together, I would of thought that Lynn.Sr and Rita would separate them.
Happychap2628
2025-01-13 07:43:30 +0000 UTCThe show should be called "The Silence House" after everything that's going on.
Happychap2628
2025-01-13 07:41:49 +0000 UTCSilence is the new loudest thing in this house. How crazy :0
UniformTrain3
2025-01-13 06:15:43 +0000 UTCWell I just hope Lincoln and Lynn Jr keep fighting for what there hearts tells them that fighting for their relationship and their happiness
BRICE MORRIS
2025-01-13 06:03:39 +0000 UTCUnderstandably so. A homecooked meal is definitely the last thing on Lynn Sr.'s mind.
I.O. Penner
2025-01-13 06:02:51 +0000 UTCExtremely awkward ass dinner and Lola still looks pissed. But at least they let Lincoln and Lynn sit next to each other. XD
CipherRage0909
2025-01-13 06:00:21 +0000 UTCHonestly, I'm surprised Rita and Lynn Sr. didn't make Lincoln and Lynn sit apart from each other at the dinner table. And I've got this weird impression Lola may try to start something - she's the only one at the table that doesn't have any trace of awkwardness etched into her face. Call me paranoid, but it feels like Lola's got that air of bad attitude about her right now, that black aura that's usually reserved for Lucy.
I.O. Penner
2025-01-13 06:00:05 +0000 UTCWell I there way I hope they don't stop fighting for there relationships and each other
BRICE MORRIS
2025-01-13 05:58:13 +0000 UTCIt's a bit harsh, I don't know if they need to be so confrontational right now, but who knows, maybe that's what the only way left
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 05:55:13 +0000 UTCSome don't even feel all that hungry
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 05:54:01 +0000 UTCI hope ither Lynn Jr or Lincoln stars telling there parents and sisters it's time to talk about there relatives with each other and one of them tells them to suck it up and deal with it and say there not brakeing up
BRICE MORRIS
2025-01-13 05:53:25 +0000 UTCAnd this is so hard to convey so I'll just say it lol But it wasn't even supposed to be a Pizza Night. Lynn Sr just couldn't find it in himself to cook a decent meal for his family, so he just ordered something.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 05:50:15 +0000 UTCIt's been 29 minutes since the last update LMAO I don't know, what do you think might happen now that we have an opening scene at a silent dinner? lol
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 05:49:15 +0000 UTCPizza Night in the Loud house used to be such a joyous and special occasion. But sadly, this Pizza Night is completely devoid of any excitement. Even in the background, like Thuren Miller mentioned, the family photo from "Picture Perfect" still hangs there on the wall in the living room. But note its distance - you can hardly see it. And it may as well be much farther; a stark reminder of how those good old days seem so far away now.
I.O. Penner
2025-01-13 05:47:43 +0000 UTCSo what can we expect in the next page of yours can't wait for it the wait is torcher
BRICE MORRIS
2025-01-13 05:46:22 +0000 UTCIts so terrible that none of them can even enjoy the pizza… dang. 😕
Spawn
2025-01-13 05:45:35 +0000 UTCThey went back to their homes. There's not much they can do by staying in their old house for the moment.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 05:39:46 +0000 UTCMemories of a once happy family
UnderratedHero
2025-01-13 05:38:46 +0000 UTCPizza Dinner Night & Lynn Lincoln They Eat Well But Everyone Look Fine & Little Worried Not Said A Word On The Day The Incident About Relationships of Lynn and Lincoln. Also Where Is Lori Leni & Luna? Left Home Hours?
Silvester Rodriguez
2025-01-13 05:26:17 +0000 UTCThe silent treatment along with a silent pizza dinner. Plus I noticed that old sibling picture above the chimney, good times.
Thuren Miller
2025-01-13 05:23:54 +0000 UTC
