Rewrite the Stars V || Page 40
Added 2025-01-11 20:40:01 +0000 UTCThe silent house.
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You should it's very entertaining and interesting. π
Mark John Banzon
2025-02-26 19:55:45 +0000 UTCGET OU-! π
Mark John Banzon
2025-02-26 19:42:22 +0000 UTCI'm so sad GEO the hamster died and saw his grave at the right middle of my screen!! π
Mark John Banzon
2025-02-26 19:38:32 +0000 UTCOooooh, okay. That makes a lot of sense.
David Mullins
2025-01-12 14:22:55 +0000 UTCWe've gotten a glimpse of the parents and the sister's initial reactions. Now we'll see how they all deal with it as it sinks in and they have time to think about it.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-12 06:47:52 +0000 UTCWhereβs their Love, their also Sadness and lead to hatred. It pains me to see all this misery and suffering in Loud house. I wonder how they will handle it all.
Thuren Miller
2025-01-12 03:47:57 +0000 UTCIβm just saying it might change their lives the way they werenβt expecting.
Double Gron
2025-01-12 02:34:22 +0000 UTCThat's true; you are the author and artist. Just bear in mind that once the story ends, it's the payoff that's going to stick with people. Have you ever heard of a fanfiction called "Brother in Shade" ? It's one of the worst Loud House fanfictions out there. It's basically Lincoln suffering depression as he's feeling overshadowed by his sisters' greatness and has nightmares that he'll end up as a hobo. His mother is overbearing for most of the majority of the story and doesn't really turn around until later. It ends horribly. Lincoln doesn't win anything or overcome his depression with strife by proving his worth. It's basically, "Oh well, at least I got my family." That's as lousy of a payoff as it gets because it's no payoff at all. All that buildup leads to nothing. I hear what you're saying, and the journey makes it great. All I'm saying is I hope you got a good payoff in the ending that doesn't leave a bad taste in people's mouths.
Paul Hoon
2025-01-12 02:17:44 +0000 UTCHehe, that's exactly what I wanted. A little "Where's Waldo?" minigame. Granted, it wasn't hard or all that interesting, but maybe I'll start putting in little easter eggs to give the pages a bit more re-readability. Take advantage of the medium. I don't know. I don't want to waste too much time adding minor things in the backgrounds that may distract from the story, but it does entertain me to do silly things like this lol
UnderratedHero
2025-01-12 02:07:06 +0000 UTCFor the record, the story is already decided, I'm not changing my plans lol I can only hope you guys find the resolution satisfying and in character for them. Sad or happy, to me it's all about the journey the characters take, and trying to keep their actions consistent with their states of mind.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-12 02:00:27 +0000 UTCI'm going to have to agree with Paul on this one.
David Mullins
2025-01-12 01:55:48 +0000 UTCI guess I could tell you, but I think it's more fun for readers to interpret the situation and the characters and reach their own conclusions.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-12 01:34:53 +0000 UTCIt's already changed their lives.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-12 01:33:49 +0000 UTCPor ahora...
UnderratedHero
2025-01-12 01:33:35 +0000 UTCI meant later in life, like a time transition of several years later getting married. Just something to make this a happy ending. I don't know how much more sadness and depression we can take.
Paul Hoon
2025-01-12 00:48:00 +0000 UTCEspecially knowing that Lincoln and Lynn have already made love - yeah, there's no way to un-ring that bell.
I.O. Penner
2025-01-12 00:18:54 +0000 UTCSe terminΓ³ toda la alegrΓa de la familia Loud ? OjalΓ‘ y no sea para siempre
Juan Carlos Juarez
2025-01-12 00:17:57 +0000 UTCI saw Charles and Walt, as well. But when you mentioned all pets were in the panel, Hero, I had to play "I Spy" and see them for myself. Come to find, Cliff is sleeping on the roof in the top left corner, and Geo has a little gravesite in the backyard, if one looks close enough. That one shocked and surprised me the most! Poor Geo - he was such a good hamster, living his best life in that clear ball of his. He will be missed.
I.O. Penner
2025-01-12 00:12:25 +0000 UTCCome on theyβre too young to get married. And they do realize that theyβre in the same family. Iβm sure that theyβll come up with something fair that wonβt make them more upset.
Double Gron
2025-01-11 23:50:10 +0000 UTCAre they really going to approve their awkward relationship? What if they spend more time with each other than their friends. Iβm worried that if they keep this relationship up it might change their lives, and I donβt mean it in a good way π₯π.
Double Gron
2025-01-11 23:44:02 +0000 UTCOooooh, nice one, Mate.
David Mullins
2025-01-11 23:25:37 +0000 UTC@UnderratedHero No, we want the rest of it to happy. Something where it leads up to a happy ending, like Lynn and Lincoln getting married in secret.
Paul Hoon
2025-01-11 22:58:25 +0000 UTCI think maybe the comic should be just, well... something. In other words, I kinda like the comic just the way it is. Besides, I think this comic probably has enough sad parts. I vote that maybe throughout the rest, hopefully Lincoln and Lynn Jr will probably do something that will lead to a happy ending.
David Mullins
2025-01-11 22:47:36 +0000 UTCOkay, if you say so, Underrated Hero. That makes me feel a bit better.
David Mullins
2025-01-11 22:44:01 +0000 UTCReally love this aerial view of the house, and seeing all the little pets and such. Although I wonder why Leni is going in there with Lana and Lolaβ¦ and why Lisa is just on the floor bawling her eyes out.., and why Lori is staring at the wall? π
Spawn
2025-01-11 22:37:38 +0000 UTCI tried to search for references but I guess they never did it lol But oh well, the architect inside me can't resist the appeal of a floor plan view.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-11 22:29:57 +0000 UTCMaybe the family isn't broken yet... Maybe there's a chance...
UnderratedHero
2025-01-11 22:27:45 +0000 UTCLove gives, and love takes, it'll keep you up in the middle of the night and catch you when you're falling βͺ
UnderratedHero
2025-01-11 22:27:08 +0000 UTCI just ate lol! Dinner is going to be awkward!
C.E. Zim93
2025-01-11 22:24:29 +0000 UTCYup, inside Lucy and Lynn's closet. All pets are in the panel :o
UnderratedHero
2025-01-11 22:23:55 +0000 UTCIn a way, the worst has already happened. Now it's just a matter of how they manage to deal with it, what the aftermath of this whole thing turns into. And yeah, for better or worse, things won't ever be the same again. They can't be.
UnderratedHero
2025-01-11 22:23:37 +0000 UTCDinner!
UnderratedHero
2025-01-11 22:15:21 +0000 UTCSo you want it to be sad but with a happy last page, or just sad throughout? lol
UnderratedHero
2025-01-11 22:15:11 +0000 UTCGod, I'm really hoping that things get good right around the corner. I think I speak for everyone that I hope that UnderratedHero isn't going to dog us and have the rest of it sad but the last page happy.
Paul Hoon
2025-01-11 21:22:33 +0000 UTCDang this is sad. Not surprising Lincoln heard them. Thin walls. I wonder what's going to happen next.
C.E. Zim93
2025-01-11 21:09:19 +0000 UTCI don't know why the other sisters are surprised Lincoln heard everything - they held their meeting right next to his room and the Loud house walls have always been thin to begin with. Two and two together, girls - the answer was pretty obvious. It's just so sad to see Lincoln in this state of unraveling. Although we did know this was going to happen at one point, still seeing Lincoln and Lynn weather through this storm of uncertainty is hard. The overhead view of the Loud house second floor was also a nice touch. Seeing all the Loud siblings scattered like this just reinforces the real possibility of how these 11 pieces in the overall puzzle of the Loud house may never come back together again the way they used to.
I.O. Penner
2025-01-11 21:06:29 +0000 UTCIs that Walt near where Luan's going downstairs?
Hootsifer
2025-01-11 21:05:25 +0000 UTCLove hurts
Corey Peters
2025-01-11 21:01:26 +0000 UTCLincoln Thinks Luna Is Right He Didnβt Mean To Hurt Lola Loud Even Loud Parents But Lynn Did Not Treat Him Like A Prize Lincoln Does Not Want To Break This Family Apart For His & Lynn Life As Well.
Silvester Rodriguez
2025-01-11 20:48:05 +0000 UTC( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) Oh boy, a new page! ( After Reading The Page ) I can't believe it... ( Sniffling In Sadness ) Like you said, Underrated Hero, Broken Hearts lead to... Broken Family... ( Crying In Sadness ) Why? Why? WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?! ππππππππππππππππ ( Sniffling ) I guess there's only one thing for Lynn Jr and Lincoln to do isn't there?
David Mullins
2025-01-11 20:46:24 +0000 UTCThat top down view though, always wanted to see that aha
Jack
2025-01-11 20:42:05 +0000 UTC
