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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 04

Lincoln reaches his destination.

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Maybe if I'd written this story in a fanfic format I could see myself developing a plotline like that. It's a really good take.

UnderratedHero

You know, if I actually cared about the Action News Team this might have been a great way to go about it. It would've let me draw more of Stella! But alas, the less Rusty I draw the better, so unfortunately that's not a route I've picked.

UnderratedHero

Siempre lo es :D

UnderratedHero

Not a bad guess!

UnderratedHero

Ooh, my curiosity is piqued! If I had to fathom a guess, it would be Dairyland Amoosment Park. It’s been a common go-to for Lincoln and his sisters in certain episodes of The Loud House, like In Tents Debate, Toads and Tiaras, Kick the Bucket List and even The Casagrandes episode An Udder Mess in Lincoln’s case and episodes like Singled Out, Sponsor Tripped and Hurl, Interrupted for Lynn. And if I’m not mistaken, they do have the ever-popular and romantic Tunnel of Butter, as well as Sweetheart Land and the newly-established Dairyland Hotel (Hint, hint!).

I.O. Penner

I found it fascinating how you were able to incorporate all the sisters into the past few pages, Hero. I just loved the approach you took with each one, how you made their personalities just shine through - especially Lori, Leni and Luna, since they’ve already moved out. And of course, you saved Lynn for last, which means the best is yet to come. I can’t wait to see how their secret date will progress! Although, I will say, it’s not just the rest of the family Lincoln needs to worry about. As he just stated, he’s been canceling a lot of plans with his friends lately. And like any good friends, of course they’re going to wonder what is going on with their white-haired friend. Especially Clyde – that’s his brother from another mother. So, I can certainly appreciate their concern for his well-being. On the flipside of that, however, Lincoln's friends are also part of the Action News Team. So, it is their job to be nosey, to inquire, to investigate, to get to the heart of the matter and figure out the truth. And it would stand to reason that at some point, the rest of the gang is going to get curious about why Lincoln has been shafting them more and more. And the lies Lincoln will have to tell will get more and more hard to balance and keep track of.

I.O. Penner

Leni se ve tan hermosa y muy guapa 😍

Juan Carlos Juarez

You'll definitely get it, soon enough!

UnderratedHero

Hell yeah! So excited to see cute couple moments between them. It just warms my heart

Kevin

Well, here's hoping it all goes well. Although, I got a feeling we're going to find out why this one is called 'Separation.'

Paul Hoon

Not if they don't go! Unless someone snitches on them lol

UnderratedHero

Are they going to know?

Paul Hoon

It is!!!

UnderratedHero

I don't think the rest of the family would be okay with what's going to happen in this trip lol

UnderratedHero

OH MAH GAWWWWDDDD! ITS HAPPENING, EVERYONE… ITS HAPPENING! 😍🌌

Spawn

I wonder where this next trip is. Is it with the whole family 🤔 or just the two of them? 😘😜

Paul Hoon

👀

Jack

Good thinking! But yeah, it's not Scotland. Tho I'm happy you brought that up... Oh, well, just put a pin on that thought!

UnderratedHero

In the show? That narrows it down a little haha, I was originally gonna say Scotland 🤣

Jack

Not in this comic (I think lol) but it's been a featured location in the show.

UnderratedHero

Nice they're going on a trip. Where I wonder 🤔 Maybe someplace where they won't be recognized

C.E. Zim93

Has this mysterious location been mentioned before? 🤔

Jack

Where could they possibly be heading to? :o

UnderratedHero

Yup!

UnderratedHero

Efectivamente

UnderratedHero

I highly doubt anyone will get it, but I'd love to see everyone's ideas on where they might be going!!

UnderratedHero

Any ideas where there going

Thuren Miller

Ooo they’re going on a trip!

Jack

Cómo diría LuisitoComunica:¡Ahora sí se viene lo chido!

Aztrux


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