Rewrite the Stars IV || Page 42
Added 2024-02-29 04:09:41 +0000 UTCThe importance of secrets.
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One more page to go. I'm gonna take a week or so before I do it so I can catch up with some rewards and commissions, but man, crazy to think I'm almost done with this issue of the comic.
Next week, or whenever it's ready, I'll be posting:
- The last page of the comic.
- The "Thank You" page with the name of all the patrons.
- The "Extra Illustration" page.
- The HQ .pdf files both in English and Spanish of the comic.
- The title drop for Rewrite the Stars V.
Don't miss out on it!
Comments
It’s been a long, arduous journey for Lincoln and Lynn to finally get to this point in this volume. But it is such a relief to see all the tension and awkwardness that had been building up between them finally dissipate. And it was the small, intimate moments Lincoln and Lynn shared during the rest of this vacation that really lit up my life and made all this waiting worth it in the end. Also, I have to say, my curiosity was considerably piqued when Lincoln mentioned that there was a little “reckless behavior” between him and Lynn at certain times. Again, maybe it’s my hormones and my imagination running away from me, but I can’t help but think that this may go beyond the categorization of simply hand-holding and making out. I sure hope, though, that we get to see some more of that “reckless behavior” continue in the next volume. And like Paul Hoon, Kevin, and Happychap2628 stated earlier, I, too, feel like Lucy may know more than she is letting on. I think she may have pieced together, if not the whole puzzle, that at least something more underlying is going on between Lincoln and Lynn. She may not be the most vocal of the Loud siblings, but she is the most observant amongst them. After all, she is the one who discovered Lynn’s L.A. Galaxy brochure and gave it to Lincoln that fateful night, mentioning that Lynn would’ve wanted to confer with Lincoln first before making that kind of life-changing decision. On top of that, on the previous page, Lucy was seen looking out the window of her cabin with what could be, maybe (and that’s a big maybe), a slight smirk on her face, which made me think there was a small possibility that she was observing Lincoln and Lynn playing around in the lake and/or making out on the shoreline. Lastly, the final panel on this page shows Lucy sitting between Lincoln and Lynn on the car ride home. In my mind, I felt like this could be potential foreshadowing – might she end up being the one that could quite possibly, inadvertently or not, be the one that might drive a wedge between Lincoln and Lynn? Anything is certainly possible. In a perfect world, this would be the end of the volume right here, with Lincoln and Lynn so happy and carefree, boasting how they’re keeping their new relationship status hidden between them like champs. But since one page still remains, I feel like that dark, impending twist will make itself known then and Lincoln and Lynn’s well-kept secret may not be as secret as they may have thought earlier. And if this turns out to be the case, then it will definitely be a plot element that will keep us all on the edge of our seats and in suspense until Volume V is released! It’s a little bittersweet, I’ll admit, that we’ve come to the penultimate page in this particular volume because this sure has been one wild rollercoaster ride! But I do know it will be that much more to look forward to when you put out the next volume! So, I can’t wait to see what other mysteries and surprises you’ve got up your sleeve next, Hero! On a side note, and I’m sure you may already know this, but “secretly” is misspelled in the fourth panel. Again, the English major in me, but I’m sure you’ll revise that at some point, Hero!
I.O. Penner
2024-03-02 17:30:29 +0000 UTC1 more page before the sequel expands.
Willy Asaka
2024-03-01 00:51:13 +0000 UTCDios... Los mejores 5 dólares mejor gastados de mi vida, como admiro tu trabajo Under, desde que te conocí por Twitter y luego por el Podcast de semana pasada, me ha encantado tu historia, como desarrollas las cosas y ni hablar del drama, que por dios como adoro el drama en este tipo de historias jajaja, sin duda estaré apoyando tu trabajo a partir de ahora, buen trabajo. Posdata: Cuando un Pibe llamado Alter (guiño, Guiño) vea las demás páginas que faltan vía Twitter seguro va a explotar de la emoción jaja.
Aztrux
2024-02-29 19:03:53 +0000 UTCSome might even call it "reckless behavior".
UnderratedHero
2024-02-29 17:23:20 +0000 UTCLily needs a spinoff comic lmao
Xay
2024-02-29 15:02:15 +0000 UTCLucy knows. That face says she knows something's up between these two. The question is whether she'll remain silent or confront them about it. I'm curious how the next comic will be. Like the others will it take place just a year or so later or will they both be adults living together?
Paul Hoon
2024-02-29 10:58:57 +0000 UTCThis is good
C.E. Zim93
2024-02-29 08:37:09 +0000 UTC"A sharded secret we protected..." I don't think so, Lucy knows for sure, but it's nice to see those two less stressed.
Happychap2628
2024-02-29 07:17:57 +0000 UTCcine muchachos cine 🗿🗿🗿
Mijael Sotelo
2024-02-29 05:42:12 +0000 UTCWhy would you kiss near a window when you are trying to be secretive with the relationship. Even if they checked there was nobody there before they kissed it's still a incredible stupid risk on their parts.
Corey Peters
2024-02-29 05:40:51 +0000 UTCI feel like Lucy's known for a while, an been kind of a wingman, but she looks so conflicted in that last panel. I am so nervous and excited to see her make a move. ALSO that top right panel is precious, omg.
Kevin
2024-02-29 04:37:43 +0000 UTCMan, the last for this chapter hard to believe you made it this far. But hey it was a long road though and I can’t to see the final page and next chapter
Thuren Miller
2024-02-29 04:27:44 +0000 UTCThat last panel 👀 oh chapter V is gonna be spectacular!
Jack
2024-02-29 04:12:39 +0000 UTC
