Trial and Error #10
Added 2024-12-01 01:21:11 +0000 UTCWasn't sure about the text for this one. Seemed like too much talking for what was happening in-picture. I experimented with more of a narration style dialogue from Trey's POV but it just wasn't clicking.
I may return to more long form writing, as it can be tricky to evenly pace the text, and dialogue alone isn't always enough to convey all that's going on under the surface.
Comments
Your writing is really good. Sometimes, despite having all of the images downloaded, I scroll all the way back to Catwoman from Channel 6 just to read through the prose along with the image. So yeah I'd be hyped to see you return to having prose alongside the image, as long as you feel it adds to the end product.
xBenjinatorx
2024-12-01 03:29:10 +0000 UTC
