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Eternal dream Chapter 9 Part 2

Unfortunately, this part focuses more on the conversation but I wish you a nice read anyway. 

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Comments

Before publishing the full part, I will correct the errors , thanks

Ron512

i'm not normally one to post grammar corrections in comments, but there were alot of glaring issues to me with this chapter p3 "but no longer as it did" ->t "but not as much as it did" p5 "This is not a problem" -> "That won't be a problem" p6 "Even write away" -> "We can start right away" p7 "here it is about your healthy, with this you can not joke" -> "this is about your health, you can't joke around with it" p10 "the main thing here" -> "the good thing here" p14 "And going back to money" ->; "And going back to the issue of money" p23 "besides, precisely" -> "besides, it is precisely" p32 "she'll discover she's pretending" -> "she'll discover I'm pretending"

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