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Chapter 2 - the materialistic influencer, Tommy

Hi everyone, It took longer than I had anticipated, but Chapter 2 is finally here. Thanks for waiting and for the support in general!

As I had mentioned in the Look Forward post a few weeks ago, this update progresses the main story - primarily following our MC on his attempt to corrupt the athlete, Tommy Danes, with his sin(s) of choice. Plus, there are five more smaller NSFW scenes to be seen throughout his journey - see the details of these at the bottom of the post.

I've also added an extra feature and made some tweaks to the interface. Again, details of these are at the very bottom of the post.

I really hope you enjoy this update! As I mentioned at the bottom of the Look Forward post, I want to move away from writing larger corruption choices just for the sake of it and, instead, only implement scenes that make sense with the story. I started this while halfway through writing Chapter 2 and I think that, as a result, Tommy's story has a much better quality compared to Cole's. Hopefully you agree!?

Let me know your favourite route for Tommy. Mine? Sloth!

Chapter 2 includes:

Continuing MC's story in Duncreag (around 2x the word count of Chapter 1).

Chapter 2 - the materialistic influencer, Tommy

Comments

glad you enjoyed! looking back, chapter 1 was a bit experimental and I didn't have the story planned out in the way I do now, so I think that reflects the jump in quality - I also liked writing it better!

hauntedking

Damn, chapter 2 was even hotter than the first chapter! Lust might be my favourite route for Tommy, but Envy/Pride and Greed/Gluttony are also scorching. I loved the other wrestlers, especially Yusuf

RP

So torn betweeen the Gluttony/Greed ending and the Lust ending for him..... really loved the writing so far <3

Priya

In short no, it doesn't matter in these early chapters just yet. Later, there will be the requirement to have a certain level in each sin to access scenes in both the later chapters and the epilogue. Additionally, I have a fairly large piece of optional side content that will be introduced in Chapter 3 and these scenes (which will be added with each update) will all require sin points to access each of the scene tiers. Hope that makes sense!?

hauntedking

This is probably a dumb question. Do the points matter for getting results or the story? Like should I try to be focusing on one or should I just pick the option that has the kinks I'm most interested in each time?

Mark Johnson

Glad you enjoyed those routes :) Yep, I kind of agree about Arthur's son! Will have a rethink before he comes into the main story. I'd planned to add some pictures to the journal but hadn't thought about previous gifs... going to add that to my notes for the future and maybe back date them for Chapter 1/2

hauntedking

So thoughts my favorite paths were Envy/Pride & Gluttony/Greed. I loved how you utilized the other wrestlers in these chapters. Also, it was cool to see more of the targets be implemented/hinted at. My favorite b-plot right now is Michael & MC I love the tension building there. Also, excited to see more of Arthur, though his son's avatar might need a little tweaking as he looks older than his dad. For the journal it would be cool if it had a gallery feature to show some of the gifs during our routes. But I get if that would be too complex to code.

Jeffrey C

Downloading now to play! Thank you for the new chapter will comment again with my thoughts.

Jeffrey C


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