Mystique Soldier Ch.27
Added 2023-09-30 23:10:40 +0000 UTCDisclaimer: I don't own anything.
Comments
I was an enjoyable chapter, and I'm enjoying the character development has he grows from a killing machine to a immoral but slowly changing Android, and who knows, maybe a thinking feeling teenager eventually :p I did snort at the thought of him creating the Avengers Harem tho it would be amazing to see. I'd honestly like for when the moment comes with Cho and Katie confronting Harry, that after accusing him they realise something is wrong (e.g he is being honest when he doesn't understand what the issue is) and although ending it, one of them takes the time to explain why they are so angry/hurt. It'll be interesting to see where he goes from here, and my vote would for his free points would be speed as I'm of the firm belief that extreme speeders ( think X-men Quicksilver - 'sweet dreams' scene ) are basically Hax as unless you can attack someone mentally (gamermind), or cause environmental changes that happen instantaneously, you can't beat them. Can't wait for more updates.
King hand axe
2023-10-01 04:47:08 +0000 UTCEven if it's a little boring it was a needed transitional chapter. Alot of Harry's motivations and evolution from dead in the eyes assasin too reforming morally corrupt assasin was expanded on. Good chapter though it feels like that dueling torny could get spicy. I'm excited too see what you come up with. Good chapter. Can't wait for the next.
Morgan C Williams
2023-10-01 01:09:53 +0000 UTC
