Mystique Soldier Ch.25
Added 2022-08-01 01:21:20 +0000 UTCDisclaimer: I don't own anything.
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I don't think it was this chapter, but the one where they travel to America where you say Sara Lupin is Muggle Studies, where in earlier chapters during class introduction you have her as History of Magic. Just a slip I imagine, but I'd figure you'd want to fix it since Harry wouldn't even be in Muggle Studies in his first year and you have him claim she's HIS Muggle Studies teacher. Otherwise, just binged the hell out of this tale and I'm loving it. Confused why you didn't have Harry take extra precaution and stun WS after he laid him out. But if I read it correctly, he did that whole fight without Gamer's Mind active so mistakes were available to happen. Either way, well done!!
Victory For The People
2022-11-04 18:40:11 +0000 UTCHehe didn't realize it whilst writing the scene. Though I'm surprised you felt it to that degree. Taskmaster's armor is supposed to be incredibly strong (at least in this fic...also in canon too I'm pretty sure) so taking Bombardas pointblank may have seemed like plot armor but its just her armor's durability....as for Winter soldier...well, he was a punch away from death...unfortunately, so were the Widows.
Robs511
2022-08-07 18:45:47 +0000 UTCHe's physically 13-14, so I wasn't really planning a time-skip. I'll just quicken the plot after his first year.
Robs511
2022-08-07 01:49:55 +0000 UTCGreat story so far, I am just wondering if you will like skip a couple of years because no matter how mature he acts he is still only 11 wanting to hook up with different people including adults
Chrisk
2022-08-06 22:51:26 +0000 UTCVery entertaining fight scene! You really moved heaven and earth to plot armor the hell out of both winter soldier and taskmaster tho. Not sure how I feel about that...
Boyo
2022-08-06 18:02:21 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Gilgamos
2022-08-04 05:39:18 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed! :D
Robs511
2022-08-02 17:21:01 +0000 UTCVery interesting chapters please post again soon thanks for writing so far!
LordBenzy
2022-08-02 08:31:36 +0000 UTC
